After I Transmigrate into a Book and Begin Cultivating Immortality, the Villainess Gets a Cheat

The heroine is the boy who gave away the treasures. The mythical beast eggs and the fire... Were all given away to others. The mythical beast egg was given away when he felt that he couldn't afford it, so forget it. The strange fire was also given away, and it was given to a person he had just saved. Not to mention how many precious elixirs were spent to save that person. The strange fire can obviously be collected, so why do you think you can't look down on it? Just like in reality, if you have a hundred yuan, you can't afford a fifty denomination of RMB. Isn't it bad to have multiple trump cards?

It was okay at the beginning, but later Yan Che and Bai Wumu saw that the heroine had two Tribulation Stage dolls and they wanted them. It was really shameless. The heroine was at the peak of Nascent Soul. Is there no danger around the heroine? I don't know why the heroine accepted apprentices. They just gave away fairy weapons and treasures. Now that they were in danger and wanted the protection of the heroine's Tribulation Stage dolls, it would be better for the heroine to give each of them a drop of blood to ascend from the beginning. It can also prevent them from always asking the heroine for help when they get into trouble. Anyway, I see that the heroine is really a treasure-delivery boy. In the past, she gave others things she didn't need or had better ones. Now she has a low level of cultivation and wants to give bodyguards to her apprentices. It's too holy. And apprentices shouldn't covet the master's things. Their attitude seems to be that it's natural for the heroine to give them treasures. It's best for them to use them later, otherwise it's too disgusting.

Mary Sue, I guess the person who wrote it is not very old. Otherwise, if the reality is this kind of character, the author's parents will be worried. With so much money, you can't afford to raise an egg. I feel dizzy.

It's really ugly to watch. It has no highlights, is extremely boring, and has no highlights. There is only the heroine who keeps pretending to be a very, very Mary Sue. All women hate the heroine. All men love the heroine. Only the heroine keeps pretending and pretending to be pretentious without experiencing any difficulties. The plot is really ugly. It is written like a running account. The family members persuade them to quit. I tried this poison first.

The ascended immortal still does tasks with the Foundation Building Pill. How smart is this! The most important thing is that none of them take the immortals seriously, they frame them and they talk back, their cultivation levels are so different, how can they fly away with just a sneeze? Author, do you have nothing to write? There are also female supporting characters who all use White Lotus and Green Tea. How come there are so many of them? Green Tea and White Lotus are not skills that everyone can use? Can't you write about someone with a normal IQ? I actually saw Ascension, and I was free too

The writing is dry, all the female supporting characters hate her, and some of the logic in it is so baffling that I can't stand it anymore. .

Thank you guys for trying the poison. I slipped away

Ask me if you don't understand anything. I haven't read anything yet, so I just dissed the logic and plot. I'll talk about it later. What's the difference between the heroine and the heroine in the book? What's the blame on the author? The heroine blames the plot It did get ugly in the later period, but I can refute your negative comments one by one. They are all well-founded This book is mediocre, but not ugly. The words are so ugly. What is the difference between the heroine and the heroine? The comment section smells really disgusting

Why take on a disciple? Why take on a disciple? Why take on a disciple? Tell me why it is obvious that the heroine is the main heroine. The changes later become more and more outrageous. Can you write it well? I even doubt that you have changed the heroine.

It's okay if the author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, or he can have the male protagonist have an unrequited love, and the female protagonist only sees the male protagonist as a friend. She can enjoy herself alone, and don't let the male protagonist pressure her.