After I Transmigrate into a Book and Begin Cultivating Immortality, the Villainess Gets a Cheat

The female lead is basically a treasure-giving boy. She gave away the divine beast egg and the strange fire... She gave them all away. She couldn't afford to raise the divine beast egg, so she gave it away. That's one thing, but she also gave away the strange fire to someone she had just saved.

The beginning was alright, but later on, Yan Che and Bai Wumu saw the female lead had two Tribulation Transcending stage puppets and wanted them. It's shameless! The female lead is only at the peak of the Nascent Soul stage, okay? Doesn't she face any danger? I don't know why she takes on disciples.

Mary Sue, the author must be quite young. Otherwise, if someone had this kind of personality in real life, their parents would be worried. You have so much money, yet you can't even raise an egg? I'm speechless.

It's really, really bad. Absolutely no highlights, incredibly boring. The plot has no interesting elements whatsoever; the only thing that matters is the female lead constantly showing off. It's incredibly Mary Sue-ish, with all the women hating her and all the men loving her. She just keeps showing off, showing off, showing off, without experiencing any hardship. The plot is truly awful, written like a diary entry. My family, please tell them to stop watching. I'll try this one myself.

Ascended celestial beings are doing missions with Foundation Establishment cultivators and Core Formation cultivators? How idiotic is that?! Most importantly, none of them respect celestial beings; they're constantly framing them and talking back. With such a huge difference in cultivation, one sneeze and they're gone! Author, are you out of ideas?

The writing is dry and uninteresting; all the female supporting characters hate her, and some of the logic is utterly nonsensical. I couldn't bear to read it anymore.

Thanks to all the experts for testing this out. I'm outta here.

Ask me if you don't understand anything. You haven't even finished reading it, yet you're already criticizing the logic and plot. That will be explained later. What are the differences between this and the female supporting character in the book? What's the fault of the author, the female lead, or the plot?

Why take on apprentices? Why take on apprentices? Why take on apprentices? Tell me why this story, which was supposed to be a female-centric novel, has become increasingly absurd with each revision. Can't you write properly? I'm starting to suspect you've changed writers.

If the author can't write romance, they can just leave it out. Or they could let the male lead have unrequited love while the female lead only sees him as a friend. If she's happy, she can enjoy it alone. There's no need to have the male lead suppressing her.