Abandoning Telekinesis from the Start of the Apocalypse

I'm a little speechless. This is the person who has been struggling to survive for three years in the apocalypse? He hasn't left the dormitory yet, and he is already thinking about recruiting women. Even if you don't want to force the female teacher to get triple the attributes. But you can definitely get twice the attributes and sacrifice your own strength for a familiar stranger in the early stage of development. . Poisonous

It's the end of the world and I'm still thinking about women. I don't have the attitude of the end of the world at all.

Instead of choosing a national goddess who is completely loyal and capable of resisting and fighting as an H-class evolver, choose a beautiful college teacher who will betray you at the first sign of a threat and still be in a coma in the boys' dormitory for a month? , The system will not betray you, even a fool knows how to choose, what are you writing here?

The subject matter is okay, but every time I choose it, I will be left speechless. He always finds various reasons to downgrade his wits. You treat readers as novices, and the selection system must be invincible. This is a love novel, which is really embarrassing.

After seeing the Select Gun, I didn't want to watch it. If I hadn't been reborn, I would have understood it. But I have lived in the apocalypse for three years and still can't deal with three newly awakened zombies?

The options are poorly designed. You are challenging the reader's IQ. Regardless of whether it is reasonable or not, you should have a main line to design things and rewards, such as dividing them into groups, bases, individuals or teams. Now this is too messy and seems mentally retarded.

The subject matter and routines are relatively old-fashioned. If the protagonist is a reborn person, the description of the details of the battle is too rough and does not make readers feel that the protagonist is a reborn person. The abilities and items rewarded by the system are not rigorous enough. The character description is very average. These aspects are relatively new, but the author's writing style is actually okay. Generally speaking, the outline, branches and data are not rigorous enough. If you are writing a system article, you should pay attention to these (Manual dog head to save life)

It's so well written, especially the beginning!

Teacher, a normal person would be strong enough to have 15 attribute points. Are you kidding me? I chose 5 attribute points and then said something about how a person is always exhausted when the teacher clearly has 15 points. Isn't it bad to keep adding 5 points to increase physical strength? There is also a school with hundreds of people. The protagonist's current attributes can easily reach hundreds of attributes. It's fun to suppress and create such system rewards that conflict with each other👿👿👿👿When you kill your classmates, don't you decide to die just to survive?

The first few pictures don't have anything to say about it. The first few pictures are about S guidance. The next few pictures jump to being surrounded or rescuing people, and then what about the guidance technique?