Kuroko's Basketball: The Bloom of Gray

I think the plot where the protagonist kisses Momoi Satsuki might be a bit problematic. If you want Satsuki to be the female lead, that's fine, but it's probably unlikely, because you've created an original female supporting character with a strong liking for her. If she's not the female lead, and you're trying to pair her with Aomine or Kuroko, then kissing her—her first kiss at that—and then Satsuki becoming someone else's girlfriend, could become a problematic element.

I have to say, this is truly the best Kuroko's Basketball fanfic I've ever read.

After reading around chapter 20, I realized something: every three chapters inevitably involve a girl. No matter who it is, a woman will always appear, and then the protagonist starts flirting with her. To put it nicely, the protagonist has a rich life; to put it bluntly, the author is a pervert who's having a blast.

There are too few books on Kuroko's Basketball! Author, keep it up! Don't abandon the project!

The author is quite ambitious and wants to write both sports and love stories. But when it comes to love, it's just asking for trouble, and it can't be called love. The characters are broken, the plot is crappy, the women pull their hips, and the male protagonist is wretched. Why bother. Excluding all plots related to women, you can still watch it as a fan.

I've already subscribed to the whole thing, but I still hope the author can come and take a look. The book has a great premise, and the author's skill is improving. However, I have to complain that the beginning was really off-putting, with a lot of awkward romantic subplots and slice-of-life scenes. It finally got back on track later, which is commendable!

What trash! The protagonist was a scumbag before he arrived. What's wrong with the basketball team not wanting him? And he's even being dragged into this with May. 😅

Keep it up! Very good. Just don't write it so the protagonist dominates while everyone else is weak. Basketball is more than just winning and losing.

It's written like an animal in heat.

That scene with May was really... Well, let's just say it was a bit much. Chronologically, Haizaki is currently in the second year of middle school, and on the verge of being expelled from the team. As the basketball team manager, May should have known Haizaki's personality well. While not exactly wicked, her awfulness is well-known. Forcibly kissing her... I feel like you didn't even have time to say anything before you were slapped.