Welcome to the Death Playground of Infinite Desire

Is this a love story? ? Is the male protagonist an idiot from the beginning? Is the heroine a nymphomaniac? Don't tell me that it takes dozens of chapters to get to the main plot 🤤

The description at the beginning of this work may be cumbersome, but for me! Every word in this writing is foreshadowing, and all the close-ups and descriptions are of specific existence. It may be boring and weak at first, but trust me, I will try my best to write the plot of this game well and never rush into the market! Keep reading if you still feel that this work is not to your liking. Or, if you feel that this work is not well written, the plot is bad, or the writing is not good, then leave! I am here to apologize to you in advance! But the author solemnly promises to treat this book well! Even if you are stuck, you will not rush to the street easily! Even if I don't update for a while, I will update it later! Take this text as proof! If I can't do it, I will live broadcast eating food! Awesome! I hope everyone can stick with it, read it patiently, and then give me suggestions to help me improve! I also hope that everyone can support my first novel! Thank you!

If nothing else, I will finish this book as soon as the end of July or August.

The main reason why I stopped updating before was because early-stage liver cancer was detected in the health check-up, so I couldn't get back on my feet. Updates ended up being sporadic... I wasn't in the mood to update at all!                                                                                                                                                                                                                           all all have all been made to give it a try, and the re-examination shows that it still shows early-stage liver cancer... So I feel sad, but after thinking about it, I have stopped drinking for so long. I have been in despair for so long. I can't live anymore. Let's continue to be decadent! So I decided to work, make money, and see a doctor at the same time, and try my best to update as stably as possible! Don't escape or be decadent, have the courage to face it all and accept this reality! I will definitely catch up with the update. I would like to apologize to everyone. I'm sorry for keeping you waiting for so long! I shouldn't have stopped updating for so long without explaining anything, and thank you for not leaving me, especially the cold salad❤

Damn it, it can't be finished, and my train of thought has stopped again! I wanted to finish writing 700,000 words in two months, but I couldn't finish it It seems... Hahaha, I can only take my time.

Some readers sent me private messages, commented on me, and told me that the character of the male protagonist in the novel is annoying, a bit too white lotus, can it be changed, and the plot is okay, but there are too many settings crowded together, so the initial plot cost 200,000 to write, and the content is too complicated and brain-burning. I hope I will be more concise and shorten the plot. The male protagonist will push the plot faster, not so dragging, and don't squeeze a bunch of settings together. It's so tiring to watch, so let me separate a little bit, otherwise I won't be able to absorb it! So I decided that in order to solve everyone's problem and not let other readers who can read it think that I am a tj, I decided to continue writing this book and provide it to readers who can continue to read it and like to read it. The remastered version will also be trial-written and modified according to your requirements before it is released! As for the name, I'll call it "Paradise Collapse Rhapsody" for now, but I'll change it later! Release channel: Qidian Theater Category

I feel that my book is more suitable for people who like to read Japanese comics and Japanese comics. Although I don't have much description, the style is indeed similar {"NickName":"Floating Moon Dream Mixed with Wei Liang","UserId":340617580} What do you think?

Claw (˙○˙) Claw Personally, I think the first season is quite good, everything that needs to be said is said, and it has a beginning and an end. Personally considered flaws: 1. There are too many "memories" - I usually skip the same plot for several pages; 2. The B-bar of the ten deadly sins is too low. At first, I thought Bai Qi was going to fight them one by one, but it turned out to be just a group of combat power measurement units; 3. Bai Qi's character is a bit too kind, especially to the gangsters who want to kill him. The above is a preliminary evaluation. The shortcomings may be that I did not read it carefully. The advantages are not easy to describe. I will read it again when I have time and make a more accurate evaluation. Finally, come on. (˙▽˙)

What do you think of the plot development after seeing this? Or give me some good suggestions?

It turns out I'm still writing... I'm here to visit you again