Mysterious Revival: I'm a Big Shot

For now, the protagonist's time travel has no meaning, and what is supposed to happen still happens. Compared with the original work, it has no sense of existence. Moreover, the book is called "Big Boss", but in fact, it is a coward, and the strength is also very poor. It feels very aggrieved.

I suggest you change the title of the book. It's for the boss. In the end, he's not just a younger brother, but also a son.

When I write a fanfic, I see that the protagonist has been struggling with things like, who am I, where do I come from, do I exist or not, have I traveled through time or been deceived by ghosts? It feels like the writing is always about self-doubt. I don't want ghost eyes, and I don't want ghost shadows either. I am a top student and a time-traveler who is familiar with the plot. I feel that I have not gained anything from the original plot, and there is no feedback. I continue to struggle with the consciousness ghost and the dead ghost. Is this idea mine or is it a similar scene given to me by the consciousness ghost... It is not refreshing at all.

Are you really a boss? The writing is not bad, but it is seriously off-topic, and the boss is being teased in various ways. Anyone can control the protagonist. That's it? You are not a boss, you are just a puppet. Anyone in the headquarters can play with you.

I still don't understand the purpose of the white ghost candle talent assigned by the author to the protagonist, and it is not the red ghost candle talent. Theoretically, if you have the white ghost candle talent, the knocker will attack you first, and the priority is very high. It will even give up the person who is attacking and come directly to you. I don't know why I haven't found the protagonist. You have a talent of 100 meters. The knocker has a ghost domain and will come directly to kill you. You can't even get out of the classroom.

As the first fan to read Mysterious Resurrection, I persisted in reading Chapter 33 and was so depressed that I vomited blood. Sure enough, writing skills depend on your ability. The protagonist in the middle makes various mistakes and regrets. The human skin paper opened the white ghost candle directly. After opening it, I regretted that I was cheated. Also, why does Human Parchment want to kill the protagonist and go to Yang Jian? What is the logic? Go to Yang Jian and be threatened by Yang Jian? I didn't believe in the text message ghost, so I asked the text message ghost to help me create a ghost that would not recover. After doing it, I regretted being tricked by the text message ghost. The text message ghost setting is also weird enough. You directly tell the protagonist that he wants you to si, and the protagonist still believes in the text message ghost so much. If you have such a sense of trust, why don't you trust the human skin? Received the task of imprisoning starving ghosts via text messages. Since you don't want to imprison them, why should you go to Wang Shanshan's place to see the starving ghosts. When I first came into contact with a starving ghost, I was choked. I'm still thinking about whether locking up starving ghosts before they grow up counts as completing the mission. . .

If there is no cheating in the mysterious world of recovery, shouldn't you contact Ghost Chef as soon as possible? That is our loyal good friend. He will never engage in intrigues with you and will always respond to your requests.😁😁

The author's description of the same subject matter is very confusing and there is no sense of tension. . . Although the author has been emphasizing horror, weirdness and the like. . . It probably feels like I just can't watch it, and the horror and weirdness are only literal. The reason for this problem, I think, is that the author describes Ye Chen's psychological activities and thoughts too much. . . Horror is reflected by describing the environment and things, rather than what the protagonist thinks and explains.

There is still a gap between it and the original work. It seems that this book is basically written by the original readers! A monthly ticket shows your support!

The protagonist's IQ is really low. And why not ask about the parchment cell phone and the ghost on the body? You can also ask your parents these questions. Even if there are some traps, you still have some clues. It's better than blind guessing. If you're afraid that you won't be able to write after asking, then write less foreshadowing.