Survive the Fourth Natural Disaster

This book is destined to be the kind of book that even those who love it will not complain about it, but the number of people who don't love this book will definitely be overwhelming. I have summarized a few reasons why this book is not popular, but this is not a shortcoming. I can only say that everyone has their own preferences. As for the change of the style of this book, it is destined to be unflattering to both sides. I just hope that the author will keep this book from being a bad book and build a good reputation and work hard to prepare for the next book. 1: The choice of words, sentences, layout, etc. Are very inconsistent with the reading habits of male channels. You can tell at a glance that they are from female channels. It took me a long time to get used to this. 2: The perspective is too niche, at least for male videos. Can you imagine that I am obviously here to see the results of the leisurely farming life? You give me a whole story about Zhen Huan from time to time. What the hell is it? I didn't react all of a sudden, which led to a love triangle between black and white. I was stunned to watch that plot back and forth several times before I understood it, but I have to say that even writing The Legend of Zhen Huan is much better than imitating Shura Field written by other people like a male channel. At least I have a deeper understanding of the saying "women's hearts are needles under the sea". 3: The description of men is too bland and far less exciting than the description of women. Even the few men who occupy an important role in the plot are too feminine. There would be no sense of violation if Fran and Adrian were completely gender-changed. Maybe it would be better to be the grandmother and aunt from the beginning. (Ahem... I still like Hill very much) 4: It is always difficult to highlight the key points between the lines. This is a very important shortcoming in my opinion. The first three are still very cute to me, but the fourth one is not good, which can easily cause online readers to become anxious or forget the previous paragraph after reading the next paragraph. A large part of the readers who abandoned the book after seeing half of it may have died here. 5: The Riddler who is not the Riddler may have some overlap with the second point but I am too lazy to change it. In fact, many dialogues and plots are tacit for female fans or online game players, but for male fans and ordinary readers who do not play social online games, it is sometimes really difficult to understand. It is recommended to add more explanations. How to maintain a balance between explanation and highlighting the key points depends on the author's writing skills. The above are my opinions on this novel. I like the setting, characters and style of this book very much. I hope the author can encourage him to move forward and improve step by step. ps: If I haven't given up on the book after I have enough money, I will reorder all the books 🙂🙂🙂

Currently fully booked, I read it in two days in one sitting. It talks about not fighting for hegemony, but pseudo-farming. It's slow-burning, not watery, the writing is online, the imagination is big but the logic is harmonious, the world view is reasonable and there are foreshadowings, for me it is like a fairy tale. Let's talk about the shortcomings, 1: I see that the author has written wrong names in no less than three places, hahahaha. Although the writing style is solid, there is a saying that the names of people in old-school Western fantasy novels are really difficult to remember. 2: The way of replacing narration with dialogue is perfect and will not make people feel that the word count is too high, but paragraphs and double quotation marks must be used well (fuck me) I hope to catch it in the next chapter. Catching Bugs improves the reading experience 3: No Although the book is not long, I see that there are really no bad points now. The protagonist and supporting characters are all well written. The sensitive points can be touched on in one stroke but the buttocks are not crooked, which is also very good. I want to praise a few words and think about it for a long time, but I can only squeeze out the word "stable" hahaha. Don't give up because of the large paragraphs of text that lay out the world view. It is a pity. The following contains spoilers ps: The player has been fighting demons for a long time, but before entering the abyss, there is no positive description of the demon (wry smile), only adjectives such as weird and weird. I understand that the author wants to write about the motherland in the interstellar era, but in this current environment... I hope the author will be more cautious when writing the realistic plot later, and I want to see the book completed! ~

It was a bit tiring at the beginning, but it became smoother as I went on 😍

This book is really very fulfilling. Others can finish hundreds of chapters in a short time.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel like I'm not reading a novel, but reading a script from a TV series... Vernacular dialogue is a method of expression. Interesting dialogue makes people want to continue reading, but too many long sentences not only slow down the pace, but also kill the reader's desire to read. There are many dialogues in TV series because the dialogue rhythm is controllable, and the tone and expression can enrich the content. You are in the novel Writing in this way seems procrastinating and boring. It is recommended to intersperse some scene descriptions or action expression descriptions between conversations to enrich the characters and story content, as well as the plot rhythm. It is a bit rushed and abrupt. Many plots appear without appropriate transition, which is very stiff and awkward. You can add some small plots or events appropriately to make the whole story more complete.

After reading dozens of chapters, it's ok, but the problems with paragraphing, punctuation, and wrong lines are basically found in every chapter. Is this the original version? ! ! Is it incompatible when the author uploaded it or is there a problem in this area? The author had better check where the problem lies. It's too awkward 🥱🥱🥱

In the past few days, I have subscribed to this book intermittently. The writing style is very comfortable and worth recommending. I hope that the author will be patient and persevere and maintain the quality and quantity so that I can finish the book 😊

[Theme: Too anxious to show off (600-word book review)] This book is written too anxiously. When reading, it makes people feel a sense of urgency that they want to quickly describe the protagonist's network of relationships and living environment, and then quickly start the protagonist's story line. The details, large and small, are omitted as much as possible, because they have to quickly start writing what the protagonist wants to do. The above are all my personal feelings. For this situation, I can only say that everyone should try to flip through it as quickly as possible, otherwise there will be no reading enjoyment. If we could describe it bit by bit from the perspective of the protagonist, starting from the day of time travel, and then slowly reveal the living environment and events that happened bit by bit, it would be a very good novel. Unfortunately, there is no if. The three golden chapters are full of a sense of urgency. I wish that all readers could immediately understand the protagonist's situation through one event after another, and then immediately connect the readers to the story line to be written later. It can only be said that this is too anxious. Readers without a certain amount of reading will only feel a bit messy and dizzy. Reading novels is to get a relaxed and happy experience, and to find something to pass the time, so try to show it a little bit, and then give the results, and then continue to show a little bit, and then give the results. In this way, we can better understand the context of the story and make it clear. This is a novel and an entertainment product to pass the time. It must be as simple and clear as possible. Starting from the golden chapter three, it is necessary to give readers a relaxing and pleasant experience as much as possible. Don't be too anxious. The book "Let Go of the Witch" is a good example of a successful Western fantasy writing method. It is as simple and clear as possible. It starts to be presented step by step. The description of each character is also completed and continues to the next character. The obvious thing about this book is that it is too eager to show too many things at once, and the reading experience is greatly reduced. Although I only read a few chapters briefly, I did not find any poisonous points.

Great support from the author. I really like this book and the protagonist's style. I have reprinted it and given it a starting point to support it. Come on! 😡

Keep claws. Invested. The author is too self-indulgent, and his brain power is not enough to read (understand) it.

I've read a lot of comments these days and I've thought about it carefully. But my inspiration for opening the book was how a protagonist with a peaceful personality should choose his own path when he encounters the chosen one who summons the fourth natural disaster. I decided to stick to my outline. An ordinary person who loves nature and small animals slowly walks his own path in life. I would definitely give my beloved protagonist Goldfinger, but not so early. Some changes in his life require players to bring him. This is also my first time writing a book, so there are definitely many shortcomings. Thank you readers for your love and understanding.

The blue line is the path for the soul fragments of the Earth Goddess.

I am very grateful to those who vote and comment for me every day. You really give me a lot of encouragement.

After reading the first few chapters, it was pretty good. The IQs of the characters are basically online. They are just some views on modern society. I think it is not appropriate. The education in modern society is actually not very good. It is a spoon-feeding education. It worships science excessively and ignores the health of the soul. There is a large number of unhealthy souls. The worship of money is prevalent. Thinking giants like Zhuangzi no longer appear. Few people care about whether the soul is healthy. They think that having money is enough. This is actually an unhealthy mentality.

The world of Toril is too long. Who cares about the mess of forces and gods? The focus is on Hill's travels and growth. Those guys just pick a few important interactions to advance the plot. There are many that are not even troublesome, so there is no need to waste words. From the beginning, it was full of useful information, but now I haven't read it at all. If I wrote about this world from the beginning, there would be nothing to say, but this is just one of the worlds that Hill travels to. Our protagonist is Hill, it is Hill, Hill! ! ! Whether it's interacting with friends, family, or players, continuing to travel, or gathering wool from tree ancestors, there is still a lot to write about, and Toril is really tired of reading it.

After reading it in one sitting, this book can be said to be the most realistic and beautiful among similar subjects. At least in the player stream, I have never seen a book with millions of players that can not break the rhythm, and this book has been controlled very well so far. The only drawback is that the author likes to include large paragraphs of textual insights in the book, which makes it a bit bloated and wordy. As we all know, the average understanding ability of Qidian is only at the junior high school level... Keep it up, I am very optimistic about it.

I probably saw two hundred chapters subscribed. 1. A long paragraph of ideological propaganda, this is fine, but it takes a long time to explain. It's good to transform a backward society and free slaves, but then wait until foreign players are introduced and start talking about women's rights again. Why is it that in the interstellar era with anti-matter cannons, people still think the same as modern people? There is no progress in society, right? 2. There are no fantasy elements. Many things are just names with no description. The story is good, but the setting is poor.

I invested 50 yuan. Come on, I'm optimistic about you. But there is a bad truth to say, your subject matter and route are too niche. Only readers who have been reading it for many years can enjoy it, but many novice readers don't like to read it. . . . So don't be discouraged if your grades are not good later. It's not that you didn't write well, it's just that you were born in the wrong era. If it were eighty or ninety years later, you might have become a hit.

Probably a scrap picture of Alice. Forgive me for polluting everyone's eyes with my poor drawing skills. (Why don't you describe Maomao's appearance in more detail? What I drew are all personal designs!

It feels like I have been reading it for a long time. Looking back, it has only been three days. It is really like a good cup of tea and should be savored slowly. There is a long way to go, I will continue to read more after reading this

I like this kind of novel very much. I don't like fighting and killing. I get tired of reading novels with too many plots and plots, and too much violence. I look for similar novels on the Internet every day, but there are very few. They are all in short supply. I especially like the professional novels about natural gods and druids, and the mage is also like the protagonist! I like it so much. The author must not finish it too quickly, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable to read without any text!

I gave you 10,000 points as a gift. It's a nice gift.

After leaving the Star Gate in the first world, I lost interest. I'm very excited because I want to read about NPCs in different worlds who are bystanders, plus lords, farming, and magic. This is really the type of article I've been looking for for a long time. It's a pity that I started playing various copies. This is just my personal opinion. If the previous interactions with the players could be written more slowly, with more guidance for the players, and the upgrade process could be written in more detail, I think the first world could really be written longer. Sorry for not being able to follow for a long time. I prefer to watch the interactive guidance with players and farming.

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Absolutely amazing, I found a treasure. I will order all 5555 when I have more money.

Q1: Why did my previous investment not count? A1: Because the event only came out at noon, the previous system could not count it Q2: Why did my direct vote not count? A2: Because the system cannot count Q3: Why does it take 2/3 votes to unlock it? A3: Because the author thought this calculation was doubled... Q4: Since the author knows that he is wrong, can he modify it? A4: It cannot be modified. An author tried to modify it, but the result was that it was uploaded twice, one was unlocked with 2 votes and the other was unlocked with 1 vote Q5: What should I do if my monthly votes are not enough to unlock it? Can I vote for one chapter this month and then vote for another chapter? A5: Probably not, the system cannot recognize it. Q6: What should I do if I don't have a ticket but just want to watch it? A6: ① Directly reward 3000 points (1500 points = 1 vote); ② Join the book club group. One month after the release of all extra starting points, the group files will be uploaded and provided to book friends for free.

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What a great book! It is indeed a natural darling, very natural and delicate

I have read the 800th chapter, and I feel that after Fei Er becomes more and more fluent, someone who has read the entire book can tell me whether there are any bright spots in the later chapters that can be followed.

The thousand or so chapters of Turrell are like a flood. One chapter is full of gossip about chariots and wheels. I can't stand it anymore 😐😐