Martial Artists Beat the Stuffing Out of a Bunch of Cultivators

Actually, the previous book was quite well-written, but unfortunately, the opening wasn't engaging. To be honest, I personally don't really like this new book. A few years ago, this type of book would have been quite popular, but now it's a bit outdated.

This book is great, why are there so few reviews?

After reading the beginning, I thought the author was selling their account, abandoning the modern combat style they were good at and replacing it with some kind of swordplay. I was completely confused.

What's going on in Chapter 1? Must one enter the inner sect before age 16? Otherwise, there's no chance at all? And what if some geniuses enter the sect at 15 and then do menial tasks for a year? Are you going to discard geniuses and just leave them in the outer sect? This is such a huge plot hole!

Well, it's not hindsight, but if your first three chapters don't attract new readers, you're basically doomed. It's because you played to your weaknesses in the traditional martial arts genre, which is your forte. If you don't succeed, who will? To offer some consolation, it's the subject matter that's bad, not you.

Are there any similar novels where martial arts practitioners defeat immortal cultivators?

Cultivating immortality and practicing martial arts are two different concepts. (Anyone can practice martial arts. Cultivating immortality depends on aptitude.) If martial arts skills surpass those of immortal cultivation, then it's not true cultivation. (This theme is problematic.) I suggest the author change the theme.

Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง

Update more often, the writing is good, please speed up the process.

Good grief, are you looking down on the world of high-martial arts? One-hit kill of a star. Breaking the dimensional barrier. Creating a black hole with your bare hands. Rebooting the universe.