Cultivating Immortality on the Vermilion Bird Star

Where do you write about the intrigues between the great monks in Tiantian, but in the end, your cultivation level is still a few levels? This is like you are still a primary school student, and you worry about this mathematical modeling competition and that robot competition every day. It makes people laugh Whether you can concentrate on your own cultivation level or not?

I thought it was the Suzaku star in Immortal Ni.

I have read more than 20 chapters, and the characterization is pretty good, and the plots in the first few chapters are also okay, although the protagonist's psychological activities are a little too much. The first family mission is a bit boring, and the plot is not very condensed. Afterwards I really had no interest in reading further.

Xiao Chengcheng is still not ruthless enough now. He needs to be more hard-hearted.

New book is uploaded, please collect "The Swordsman: The Battle at the Peak of Martial Arts" The first world is based on The Swordsman, and is planned to be combined with the content of novels such as Entering the Liancheng Jue, White Horse Roaring the West Wind, Blue Blood Sword, and Flying Fox Gaiden. However, it is not the main text, but a form similar to a prequel and a postquel. I hope there is something new. Please collect and recommend

The novel is well written, keep up the good work!

Brewing wine to cultivate immortality. . . It's not in line with mainstream values. We must educate children not to smoke, not to drink, not to kill people, not to play with women.

Don't be like Lingmu Xiantu, writing half of the eunuch

There are too many foreshadowings, and the plot at the beginning is too open, with constant cuts and confusion.

I saw Suzaku Xingdian coming in and realized it wasn't 😅