Cultivating Immortality on the Vermilion Bird Star

He spends all his time writing about powerful cultivators scheming against each other, but his own cultivation level is still only a few levels of Qi Refining. It's like you're still in elementary school and worrying about this math modeling competition or that robotics competition all the time—it's laughable. Focus on whether your own cultivation level is good or not

I thought it was the Vermilion Bird Star from the anime "Against the Gods"!

I've read over 20 chapters. The character development is good, and the plot in the first few chapters is decent, although there's a bit too much focus on the protagonist's inner thoughts. The first family quest was a bit tedious, and the plot wasn't very well-developed. After that, I really lost interest in reading further.

Xiao Chengcheng isn't ruthless enough yet; he needs to harden his heart a bit more.

My new book has been uploaded! Please add it to your favorites: "Laughing at the Heavens: The Final Battle for the Pinnacle of Martial Arts". The first world is based on The Smiling, Proud Wanderer, and it is planned to incorporate content from novels such as A Deadly Secret, The White Horse Gallops in the West Wind, The Sword Stained with Royal Blood, and The Flying Fox of Snowy Mountain.

The novel is well-written, keep it up!

Brewing wine and cultivating immortality... That doesn't align with mainstream values. We should educate children not to smoke, drink, kill, or engage in promiscuous behavior.

Don't be like the Spirit Wood Immortal Path, which was abandoned halfway through writing.

There were too many foreshadowing elements, and the initial plot unfolded too far, creating a tangled mess that was difficult to unravel.

I saw Suzaku Star and clicked in, but it wasn't 😅.