My Demon Girlfriend Keeps Trying to Eat Me

Readers of this book, can you give me some advice? I accept both good and bad, thank you (*°∀°)=3

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When I first read the introduction, I thought it was a story about a good-for-nothing male protagonist in an anime and his daily life with a few beautiful girls. This kind of plot would make you vomit after watching anime, let alone novels. However, after reading the first seven chapters, I found that this article is quite fresh and fresh, and it does not have the vulgar and cheesy attitude of the protagonist in the anime. The protagonist's strength is quite good. Overall, the plot is interesting and the writing is good. What's more, the devil princess, sister, little silver dragon loli, I hope the author can write these four people in a style. Mediocre Qing has no money or talent, but pure love. The princess of the demon world's love for the protagonist slowly changes from interests. Little Silver Dragon is probably just a glutton. . . Treat the protagonist as a free restaurant. Sisters who follow up, I hope you won't behave like a licking dog, you must have your own persistence. Otherwise, if you keep teasing your younger brother, it will really turn into an anime plot where the good-for-nothing protagonist is given a soft meal. As long as this is not written well, it will be bloody. And if the sister is rich, the protagonist will not be short of money. If the plot of Qing does not change, it may become a soy sauce in the future.

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The dual personality would be fine if it were the female protagonist, but when it comes to the male protagonist, it's just two people cuckolding each other and being "very poisonous."

Why isn't it popular? The writing is so good. I can only subscribe for a few yuan if I don't have money. The author must not be a eunuch because of his bad grades. School will start soon. When I come back from vacation, I will definitely complete the subscription. Don't be a eunuch.

The author's new book is called "My Cartoonist Girl". I haven't read it yet, but the reviews say it's a delicate and gentle book. Same with this book. Let's talk about my ideal boy and the protagonist of the book "The Devil's Girlfriend Always Wants to Eat Me" In my eyes, the most ideal boy should be like this: he should be good-looking and lonely. He should be sentimental. His eyes always shine like stars. He will tenderly protect those he loves and those who love him, no matter how many thorns or dangers he encounters, he will never retreat, because this is the greatest meaning and mission of life. This is the most beautiful boy in my ideal world. In the book "The Devil's Girlfriend Always Wants to Eat Me", Mingming is such an angel. This book should not be like this, it is really a very good book. It is the author's sincerity. But in the end, he still had no ending. I am very sorry for such consequences, and I am responsible. Because what I watched was a pirated version. I sincerely apologize to the author, even though he may not see it. I will re-subscribe to the original version. In addition, I just hope that the author will never forget this number, and this book will be satisfied with occasional updates. Finally, I wish the author's new book will be a hit!

First of all, this book was the first book I ordered (at that time) from Qidian. It was also the first book I read from Qidian. At the beginning, it even reached the level of obsession that I refreshed every half hour and looked forward to updates. Therefore, I have always had a special emotion for it, and I hope it will continue to be good (in every sense). However, I have to admit that this book does have many shortcomings. First, the author said at the very beginning that this was a book about daily love (which was indeed what attracted me in the beginning. I read it during the limited-free period, and I immediately subscribed to it after reading 60 chapters). However, the subsequent content is a bit off topic. Most of it describes the protagonist's tasks outside of school, which gives people a feeling of ups and downs, and there are relatively few relaxed and daily parts. Second, the portrayal of the protagonist failed. As of the chapter I read, I am really not sure what kind of person he is. From the beginning, he works part-time to support himself, Li and Yin, which makes people think that he is an independent and self-reliant person; then, his "politeness" to strangers makes people think that he is a cold and distant person; the additional memories later allow us to understand his story in the orphanage, and make people think that he is tough and does not care about other people's malicious thoughts. Later, a new character setting was slowly added to the Mu family - Tsundere. To be honest, I have no doubt that the previous characters can coexist, but there is a bit of separation here. As for being used as a god-killing weapon later, whether it is the weakness of the whole cast in acting, or the "showing temper" after knowing the truth (in the eyes of others in the book), it all aggravates the sense of separation. The above characters are just personal feelings, not to mention the series of contradictions caused by the original character. Third, this point is related to the first and second. The theme is supposed to be a daily love type, and the protagonist's personality is supposed to be a super-standard male protagonist type, but the author wants to express too many things. He just wants to reflect some phenomena or convey something when writing. The male protagonist also "expresses" a lot of opinions that are not his for this reason (I personally think it is good that the author takes on the role, but if it does not fit the character and theme, it will cause a lot of problems).                                                                                                                                                                   4 I really don't want to use the word "rotten" to describe it, but it is indeed very appropriate. When I saw Mu Ming leaving home, I felt that it was really, really good, and thought that the climax was about to come. However, due to the performance of this book, it was abrupt and unreasonable to return to the Mu family, and the subsequent cleansing of the Mu family was very stiff. Also, it felt like the male protagonist didn't know anything after returning to the Mu family, as if everyone was "watching the male protagonist's joke." Of course, there is also a well-created character in the book - Jiang Wanting (in my opinion). From the initial love for beauty (like the male protagonist), to being so angry when being slapped in the face by Yi'er that he wanted to kill Yi'er, to then realizing his mistake after communicating with Mu Ming and starting to change, until Mu Ming's disregard for others on the day he returned to school The public smiled and greeted the male protagonist, and I seemed to see a living Jiang Wanting smiling in front of me and saying "Welcome back, classmate Mu Ming", which was as refreshing as the long-lost sunshine shining through the clouds after days of heavy rain. Jiang Wanting's portrayal is undoubtedly the most suitable for that age, and it is also the most perfect with an arc of change. Finally, I don't claim to be the so-called "this is all for the good of the author". Most of them criticize this. This is an indisputable fact. This only represents my personal opinion. The above.

What a treasured author! He also has a book called The Mirror World, which is a follow-up to that book. The starting point cannot be found. This book is the starting point. It is the best book recommended to me. It has a pure world view and is the same book as my ideal world. I wanted to write a book that followed the same worldview before, but I was so helpless that I couldn't write it at all. It's not material for writing a book.

I have no money to eat! It feels so uncomfortable~