I Can Give the Origin of All Things

This book has a lot of flaws. First of all, the harem was made because the background of the story was changed to a dynasty, but the early and late backgrounds were not overdone, and it was quite uncomfortable to read! Let's talk about the pros of props, the Black Panther suit is the underwear for riding a horse! Also, the uglier it gets in the later stages is the number of code words stored alone!

The title of this book is wrong! ! ! What gives all things their origin? Is this the point? What a bad name! Calling it Driving Racing Textbook for Veteran Drivers is right! ᥬ😂᭄ What—— overwhelmed me. I worked hard all night and couldn't bear the impact. . . 🤙🤙🤙🐂🍺

I hope that the emotional drama in this book will be a little better, and not like the book from Resurrection of Spiritual Energy to the Age of Ending Dharma. I really don't know what you think, author. The emotional drama in Fang Zheng's book ends in an anticlimactic way. At the beginning, it is said that women are inner demons, but what about the end? Are you playing with polarization? Also, within just a month of getting along with Liu Xiaoran, he told her that he was a monk, as well as all kinds of exercises, pills and so on. Liu Xiaomeng doesn't even know that Fang Zheng is a monk, so in Fang Zheng's heart Liu Xiaomeng is not as good as Liu Xiaoran, who he has only been with for less than a month. What do you think? Is it possible that Liu Xiaoran is Fang Zheng's destined partner? The emotional drama is really poorly written.

I've just read two chapters, and I feel like it would be slightly better if the settings were changed. The setting of helping an old lady cross the road to win the favor of the original will of the world is a bit weird. Although it makes sense, after all, we are all earthlings, and we are all children of Mother Earth 😅, haha. But I think changing it to human gratitude or merit makes sense.

The poisonous point of this book is really poisonous to me in the first chapter. I would rather give a reward than complain. A rich man worth tens of billions marries you his beautiful daughter and lets you inherit his tens of billions of family property. You still don't want to marry. This is really too big. Is there any conflict between being a rich man and a warrior? These are complementary to each other, okay! Is it that the tens of billions don't taste good, or that the young lady isn't beautiful? Is it possible that Goldfinger is called Eunuch Goldfinger? The key is that this goes against human nature. If you find 100 young men on the roadside and ask them if they want to marry, 99 of them will agree. One of them has either a physical problem or a mental problem. Although the protagonist has traveled through time and has no emotional basis, which man is not attracted by sex? Can you find one author? Find me, Kangkang. There is a good joke, women are fickle, men are immutable. In the past, it might have been called a joke, but now it is a fact.

I don't understand why he didn't marry a rich woman since he knew from the beginning what he would get from doing good deeds. After inheriting assets, you will have resources when you have money. Also, wouldn't it be more convenient to do good deeds? Setting up a few Hope Primary Schools, alleviating poverty, and stimulating a certain local economy are all good deeds, right? Is this going to be a "Thirty Years in Hedong, Thirty Years in Hexi"? Moreover, this body-refining formula requires taking energy and blood, buying resources when you have money, and the levels are not minute by minute. Is this pretending to be a pure, hot-blooded young man? Don't you know how to make use of surrounding resources? Are you afraid of losing face? Can't figure it out😰

Harem novels should try their best to take care of the readers of harem novels. It is impossible to take care of both sides.

Sister Yaya, this girl is a complete loser. Apart from being rich at home, she doesn't know anything about martial arts. The world view you described is that planets upgrade and monsters come to the world. As a result, there are still people who only study theory. It is completely unreasonable.

To be honest, I really wanted to complain, but I didn't know where to complain, so I came here for Gold Finger, but this Gold Finger feels a bit useless and I don't know what to say. Also, the sect exists to supervise college students. Is it really necessary? With so many schools competing with each other, how many sects are missing? And Dad Wang, it's so sweet. To be honest, he gave away both his daughter and his family fortune. I don't know what other people would think. I couldn't do it anyway. Let's not talk about property, just about my daughter. Even if my brother and I are on good terms, if I have a daughter, my brother's son will give him away. I have to have a good talk with my brother, whose family is my treasure? Not to mention what did Li say secretly? Also, there is too much driving in the book. Is it impossible to write without driving a few times in each chapter? If you are not good at technology and want to open it up, who wants to start without being serious? It's okay to be happy when you drive occasionally, but it's boring to watch if you drive frequently.

Congratulations on the new book! Come on! Be sure to surpass the first few books!

I've read more than sixty chapters, and the rest are fine. I mainly wanted to read Goldfinger and some imagination points. As a result, I saved a whole city, so I only gave a little. From the original text, the meaning is probably not more than five thousand. Hundreds of thousands of people didn't thank anyone. Are they all supercilious? Just those few supporting characters thanking you for saving people in a city. No one in this city thanks you for saving their lives. This wave of millions of source points. Even if I don't know who to thank, as you said, the source points will be very few, but three or five points will not be much. This will be a million. A wave of small climax will directly turn into a big poison point.

Qiqi

Coming to fame

Let's break it up. This book started out well, but the more I read, the more tired I became. There were a lot of characters with a lot of inner drama, and a lot of characters who did things in the name of doing good for the protagonist... Don't think it's a hot-blooded and exciting book with a little nonsense. It's a brainless book with a lot of nonsense and a lot of neuroticism.

I don't dare to really drive. I want to watch something passionate, but there are always marginal ones in the middle. This makes reading a book less immersive. I drive as soon as I feel a little immersive. For example, let's take Gundam out. Originally, the serious writing was quite enthusiastic, but as soon as the scene changed, it was on the edge again, jumping repeatedly between Xiaohuangshu and Shuangwen, and it slipped away. Alas

Real ink stains, whether you want to sleep or not will make you want to sleep. Since you don't sleep, don't write about this kind of thing. Just keep it simple and emotional, right? It's a special code, don't bother me anymore.

It doesn't look very good. There are a lot of logical loopholes and some things I don't understand. It's also very bland and watery. It's so boring.

When I saw the last subject of the college entrance examination, I felt like I had fallen behind. It's obviously a test of nerve reaction, but in order for the protagonist to take first place, it's forced to use Qi or physical force to overcome it. So why not just test the defense? Originally, it was a bit of a failure to let the protagonist take the first place in everything, but the result is like this again, it is really a failure in the success! Personally, I don't feel the satisfaction of taking first place at all.

Covered in the guise of science fiction, this is a book about love and work,

Are Luohua Independent and Ye Henshui the same author?

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After reading nearly 100 chapters, I insisted on adding another woman scene. It was obvious that a good relationship scene had to be added, but it slipped away. I have no desire to watch anymore.

The realm is a complete mess. It is either more mysterious or more logical. The result is that it is forced to explain and does not reflect the high-end atmosphere at all. It's better to just use Qi Training Golden Pill or something like that, it looks awkward. This is how the poisonous points of the novel are accumulated bit by bit.

Driving at every turn. Driving at every turn, even at the critical moment of the battle, extremely affects the perception.

If you are convinced, marry the other person directly at the beginning and do charity, then the points will collapse, right?

After reading a few chapters, I think this novel should be renamed: Actually I am Doraemon! ! !

I'm reading this book again. The most enjoyable part is the ones about summoning Gundam. After that, it's not interesting to go to the universe.

The recommendation position of Qidian is poisonous. I pulled this book out of Biquge, went back to Qidian to read the original version, and then gritted my teeth and fully ordered it. I support it, I must support it, come on Luohua!

Is this author the author of "Genuine Cultivation of Immortality"?

After reading Chapter 50, the protagonist has not graduated from high school, and there is no specific time frame for the college entrance examination.