I Can Bestow Origins Upon All Things

This book's flaws really hit me right from the first chapter. I'd rather tip than miss out on this rant. A billionaire worth hundreds of billions offers you his beautiful daughter to inherit his fortune, and you don't want to marry him? That's just too much! Is there a conflict between being rich and being a martial artist? They complement each other!

I don't understand. Since he knew from the beginning what points he could get from doing good deeds, why didn't he just marry a rich woman? Inheriting assets would have given him money and resources. Besides, wouldn't it be easier to do good deeds? Building a few Hope Primary Schools, alleviating poverty, boosting the local economy—aren't those all considered doing good deeds?

Harem novels should try to cater to harem novel readers as much as possible; it's impossible to please both sides.

This Ya Ya is a complete useless character. What does she have besides being rich? She doesn't even know martial arts. The world you described is about planets upgrading and monsters appearing, but there are people who only learn the theory. It's completely unreasonable.

To be honest, I really want to complain, but I don't know where to start. I came here for the cheat system, but this cheat system feels a bit useless. I don't know what to say. And the existence of sects is supposedly to supervise university students? Really, is it necessary? With so many schools competing with each other, what's the difference between them and a few more sects?

Congratulations on your new book, Hua Hua! Keep it up! You must surpass your previous books!

This book has a lot of flaws. First, the harem element is ridiculous. Was the story changed to a dynasty just to create the harem setting? The transition between the early and later settings is poor, making it quite difficult to read! Another issue is the props; the Black Panther suit looks like underwear! And the book gets worse towards the end, it's just a matter of saving the word count!

I read over sixty chapters, and everything else was fine. I mainly wanted to see some plot twists and creative ideas, but after saving an entire city, I only received a tiny amount of source points. Judging from the original text, it probably wouldn't exceed five thousand. Hundreds of thousands of people didn't receive a single thank you—are they all ungrateful?

People came because of its reputation

Forget it, the beginning of this book was okay, but it gets more and more tiring to read. There are a bunch of characters with excessive inner monologues, and a whole bunch of characters who act under the guise of doing what's best for the protagonist... Don't think it's a thrilling, action-packed story with a bit of absurdity; this is mindless, a bunch of absurdity, and a bunch of neurotic characters.