The Handsome Boy from Konoha Village

The art of immortality and earth escape from earth people 😅

According to my experience in reading books, any comment below that contains words of encouragement is likely to be offended.

Personally, I feel like there's something wrong with the timeline. When Namikaze Minato and Uzumaki Kunaxin were in school, the Second Hokage seemed to have cooled down a long time ago.

It's almost the same. Generally speaking, as long as the word "come on" appears at the beginning of a book, eight out of ten books will fail!

It feels like the author is outputting values ​​like crazy. . .

It would be a pity to write about earth escape instead of sand ninja and rock ninja!

It seems that the heroine is this Hyuga girl, not Mikoto, not even Kushina. She is disappointed, disappointed and has no direction...

There is something wrong with this timeline, author, you need to take a look

I dislike the original heroine the most, she has no feeling and is superfluous

First of all, I want to say that this book is pretty good. I'm not a great writer, and I can't tell much about the author's writing style. It's just that the book looked pretty good, and it didn't make me feel awkward or the narrative style of the book was uncomfortable. Next, let's talk about some flaws that I personally feel. I have read fifty or sixty chapters of this book. In fact, there are no big problems. It is good in all aspects. The only thing that makes me a little speechless is that the author explains it in too detail. For example, the introduction of the Akimichi clan and the water escape of the Hyuga Uchiha clan are too detailed. The introduction is only one chapter or even two chapters, which is actually unnecessary. Most people who read Naruto fanfics have watched Naruto. Once you click on it, we will basically understand it. There is no need to go into too much detail. Those who haven't watched Naruto probably won't be able to read Naruto fanfics. At least if I haven't watched the anime, I won't read the fanfics because I can't understand them. So I personally feel that the author can describe more plots and battles. Although this will result in a reduction in the overall word count, the quality will definitely increase. The above are some of my personal feelings and opinions after reading this book. 🌹

Does the author's protagonist know magic?

Brother, if you say you want a eunuch, don't just cheat him.

This timeline has affected me so much.

I can't even search for the Stone Realm Clan?

I think we can actually add a water escape later, and then turn it into a combination of ninjutsu, swamp, etc.