Daxian Never Equals A

New artist, new work, first signing. I hope everyone will support me. There are more daily routines in the early stage, and the main plot will appear later, and the reform of the special battle situation will be promoted to society. 😡I will work hard, and I hope everyone will support me and give me more suggestions. Good and bad come to you.

Brother's poison resistance was not enough, he died suddenly in Chapter 3, farewell

This book is generally good, and the writing is invincible. Although the author's writing is not perfect in some places, it is quite enjoyable to read.

How can I say that the novel is very good, humorous and interesting, and seems to be unburdensome. However, there was one chapter where I suddenly swore affectionately and decisively gave up. Maybe it was because I didn't like the sudden and affectionate sworn words. It was obviously funny, but the sudden twist was annoying and I gave up the book. However, I also wish the author better writing.

Basically, there are not many poisonous points, so you can continue watching it. I hope you will continue to work hard.

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist is a bit slow in the early stage, and he never feels that invincible feeling in the early stage. Also, the protagonist's family keeps getting into trouble with them. One or two of them are fine, but in the end, the whole family gets into trouble, and it feels very bad. There is also the thunder method. The feeling of this thunder method is a bit confusing. I have never felt what the thunder method should be like.

Please support me! ! ! ! ! ! ! I will try my best to keep writing and write the story to the best of my ability.

Don't those who say the writing is good feel a pang in their conscience? Labor and management were cheated. Grass.

This book is really good, very interesting

After reading part of it, I feel that the author has already written high. One issue that needs to be paid attention to when writing novels is the homogeneity of characters. The characters written by the author seem to be different, but in fact they all have part of the protagonist's personality, that is, all kinds of crazy and illogical. For example, after the protagonist sister and her friends actually encountered a ghost while playing pen fairy, the protagonist sister's classmates immediately threw away their fear of encountering ghosts after seeing the money. This can also be said that the protagonist sister's classmates have a character that wants money rather than their lives. The key point is that the policewoman recruits a 10-year-old protagonist and asks him to use a genetic medicine with a success rate of only 30%. This is outrageous. Not to mention various procedures and permissions, it is impossible for the policewoman to recruit just because of his age. This has nothing to do with immaturity of mind, but a bottom line issue. If the protection of the country depends on a child who has only been exposed to powerful figures in the eyes of others and seems to be relatively precocious, then such a country will be finished long ago, let alone the setting of a modern society where the supernatural has just recovered and is still in a controllable stage. ps: The author's routine for joining the department should be based on other novels of the same type in which protagonists join the department. However, the problem is that the protagonists in other novels are either in the adult stage or close to adulthood, and the author's protagonist is still just a child in the eyes of other characters in the novel.

What the hell? Starting out invincible, he took action only after seeing the army suffer heavy casualties. What? They are all invincible in the world, hiding here and hiding there? Is your brain sick? The author of this book is a reactionary and does not care about the country. Not to mention that the protagonist did a lot of things for this game. Why don't you just eliminate all threats if you are invincible? Every time we play, our side suffers heavy casualties? The most annoying thing about this kind of invincible writing is that it makes no sense. To learn from someone. Tomato has been having trouble giving birth recently while writing a book. But his protagonist is responsible.

This is purely a self-pleasure book, and I felt bored and nauseous after reading it for a while.

It was quite enjoyable to watch at first, but after the main character's sister appeared, I felt particularly uncomfortable. Not to mention how much her sister wanted to die, let's just say that the protagonist asked Zhong Yi to deliver food, and then under the inducement of her best friend, Zhong Yi followed the order to pick up girls, and the protagonist got a brother-in-law. This gives people the feeling of being led by the nose, and the protagonist doesn't even give a shit when he finds out about it. Isn't he always very smart? Can't you see the calculation in this? His sister was so desperate to die that she didn't send anyone to watch her, and she didn't even know that she had an extra brother-in-law. Even if he wants to arrange a date for his sister, it shouldn't be this way.

I read twenty-four chapters... I'm sorry that I can't stand it anymore. The first ten chapters were okay, but the author got more and more out of touch as he went on. It felt like he no longer cared about rationality. He was just bragging. I'm leaving this book. I hope the author can keep writing and the next one will be better. Bye ヾ(￣▽￣)Bye~Bye~

The reason why I gave up was very simple. The protagonist had low moral character and tricked a child into stealing his teacher's ring. How could it be a good book with such a protagonist?

The protagonist is a fake time traveler. Let alone thirty, I feel that my mental age is less than eighteen.

I can't stand seeing a ten-year-old being recruited for human experimentation and joining the army. Goodbye, everyone.

I stayed up late to read this novel, but I didn't expect that it started out okay at the beginning, but then it started to get a little different, and it started to forcefully suppress the protagonist's strength. This part was very poisonous. Moreover, the protagonist's system has been suppressed, so it's better not to give the system in the first place.

At the beginning, the female police officer had no police qualities at all. When I was writing the report, I didn't see that the personnel should not be biased towards any party. The same kind of report mixed with personal feelings was fine.

The character of the protagonist is shaped like a mental illness, and the country and the army are shaped like it. To put it seriously, it is smear... If I saw this kind of book 12 years ago, I would not be surprised at all, but now it is 21 years old.

Also, the main character is the reincarnation of a smart, sophisticated adult. How come he accepts a big-mouthed fat boy as his follower? He is always beaten by his parents. He also has the impression of being a naughty genius in school. Why can't he just pretend to be a good kid? There can be other reasons for skipping classes. Geniuses can naturally have some privileges and preferential treatment. Now everyone's true nature is known. Author, do you think the protagonist is smart or has some tricks?

What can I say, it felt pretty good at first. But gradually I felt that the protagonist was a little aggrieved. Also, it may be a small branch line that is used to promote the plot. The protagonist's sister. He was so stupid that he ran over there even though he knew the danger, as if he knew someone would definitely save him. The other thing is strength. The system is being upgraded. As a result, the protagonist's skills cannot be used. This is a big poisonous point. There are more than 30 pictures. It should be that the physical fitness of Zixiao Lei Qinshui Eyes is strengthened, and then the following article says that after training, the physical fitness has increased to twice that of ordinary people. I just want to say one thing, the previous description of Lei was so strong, so powerful, and so powerful. As a result, the physical fitness was doubled. It's also possible that Jing Ti's physical fitness was forgotten, and that's what happened. It is recommended that the author make some kind of outline, or write down what the protagonist has, so that he will not forget it. Okay, that's all. I've only seen more than fifty. I came up with these when I was washing my feet. Is there anything I've forgotten or need to add, or something I've said wrong. Let's discuss this some more.

It feels like I'm watching a children's show. . . . The kind of interstellar elf Lan Duoduo