Be Cowardly for a Hundred Years at the Beginning

Let me tell you, when you meet someone with a big age gap, your cultivation will increase. When you meet someone of the same age, even if the protagonist has cultivation, he will become a mortal without any cultivation at all. See for yourself.

I saw it was almost on the shelves, but it has been dismissed. Now let's talk about my opinions. The advantage is that the direction and subject matter of the book are still attractive, and most of the villains and protagonists have online IQs. However, there are many shortcomings. First of all, the system settings are a bit poisonous to people of the same age in the mortal realm, and they will die inexplicably from time to time. Then the author himself said that he would not meet people of the same age so easily, but in the end, he was always the same age wherever he went. This is okay. The author also has a bad habit of poisoning every critical moment. Many of them are highly toxic; in addition, the author's writing skills in character creation and plot development are not good, and the description of main characters such as the protagonist and Lan Ruyan is not profound, and too much ink is wasted on secondary characters such as Qin. If the secondary characters play an important role in the plot, it is not bad to focus on the description, but Qin plays a role in the development of the plot. When narrating the plot, the author always thinks about twists and turns, which is good, but he can't grasp the proportion of turning points, which can easily become a poisonous point. For example, when rescuing Lin, he hesitated and turned too much, and finally let Lin die, which does not mean that she cannot be allowed to die. , It's just that the author made her die too frustratingly. She was clearly a character clue in a big plot, but it was cut off without playing any role. Even if she was to die, her own value should be brought into play first. In addition, the twists and turns in the plot are to shape the characters and attract readers, and there should be foreshadowing in the front, rather than an inexplicable reversal or forced reversal. The last point is that the author should be clear about the audience of this book. This book may be suspected of being ntr. Whether it is or not, the author should make it clear first, otherwise it will be easy to dissuade readers. In short, this book is quite unique, and it is more suitable for π_π looking for abuse and grievance. I also hope that the author can make progress in this book and make changes in the next book.

The more I look at it, the more I feel that the setting is unreasonable. There are also problems. I can't beat the protagonists who are about the same age. How can I conquer them? If they meet people of the same age, they have no cultivation. If the enemy is a genius of the same age, it will be over immediately. I feel that this setting is too unreasonable.

It's not too trivial to say that it's a story of spiritual struggle. You added a trick to it, and even though it seems to have major flaws, it's still so powerful that it can kill a lot of people in a group. Let's just say it's a novice, but I also wanted to write a story where I'm struggling all the time with a greater sense of urgency. It's like two delicious things, roast duck and lemon duck, mixed together . You say it's delicious, but it tastes a bit weird. You say it's unpleasant. After all, the basics are actually pretty good. In short, it just tastes weird.

This one looks so similar! !

I really don't understand why the protagonist spends a lot of money to sleep for a hundred years. Will the enemies who are similar in age and cannot be beaten be different in age after a hundred years? For those who are older, the level of advancement is also less due to the smaller multiple difference. Needless to say, enemies who are young in age are also of low level. If he was avoiding being hunted, would he be hunted now? So why did the protagonist pay a huge price and lose several great realms of strength?

1. No villain can die. Every time he wants to kill, something unexpected will happen. Important people around him and those who made promises will continue to die, leading to various miserable endings 2. He obviously has a trump card, but the important people don't use it before they die. Face "I am very angry, you are finished", and then no one can be killed 3. Inexplicably, in the front it is written that I have a clever plan, I am confident, but in the back it is always about what to do, being blocked, who to kill, being blocked again, I don't see any plan and can't catch up

I feel like a system upgrade or something can be done to dilute the disadvantages. Moreover, the protagonist is too depressed. There is no need for this. We read novels to relieve stress. It's too depressing and I don't want to watch it.

How did this book manage to go almost a hundred chapters into a big battle and not even one of the villains die? Flip, flip, flip, it means he doesn't die, but his family members died quickly.

The most annoying thing is to open a huge golden finger and then deliberately restrict it. Goldfinger calculates the cultivation level in multiples, so the protagonist should have made it all the way to the Lingxiao Palace in the Immortal World when he was just starting out in his teens. As a result, he had to make up for his serious injuries and sleep for a hundred years.

Support, the author just keeps updating! 🙂 I think this book will be popular. I will take up a space while there is no one there yet, and I will be a long-time fan in the future 😏

What's on my mind

I think it's too exaggerated that people of the same age have no cultivation level. Even if the system is like this, can't they be born in the same year, the same month, the same day, or even at the same time? I just feel that this is too exaggerated. It's okay to keep the cultivation level unchanged. How many people are in the same year? On the earth, if you go out to play in society, you will probably meet one person every 5 times (I guess 🙂). There are more people in the world of cultivating immortals. Even if they are just fighting, there are many new disciples of each sect, and there will definitely be a lot of encounters. This cultivation of immortality is of no use at all. It's like waiting to die. It's just maintained by external objects. In extreme cases, if the heroine is controlled by someone or accidentally takes something away and then meets an opponent of the same age, gg, I really can't imagine what will happen in reality. There are too many bizarre things... Also, Qin Yun's personality is not very good to me (just my own thoughts 🙂) and he doesn't pay attention to occasions 😰

What does this book say? The first few chapters were okay, but after getting out of the Spirit Sword Sect, it got worse and worse. It was very depressing to watch, and there were no tears or amazing plots. It seemed like it was depressing for the sake of depressing. Also, if you don't want to write a masterpiece, don't write this. Why don't many people read it? Most people read novels to relax and pass the time. Many people in the book really have nothing to write about, and I believe that many people are just scanning and reading in the middle. Alas, it was very unpleasant to read. If this happens again in the next few chapters, I will quit.

... There is a reason for my poor grades... It's almost not fun, I tortured the master the whole time,

That's outrageous. You're really speechless with this setting. Why don't you be punched to death by the man named Sha in your sect? This setting is so outrageous.

The protagonist knelt down countless times and was beaten by others all the time. Anyway, he just drove high and walked low, which made him sick all the time.

After reading some of the previous chapters, I feel that the protagonist's cultivation is completely for show. No matter how hard the protagonist practices, his cultivation will be reduced to zero when he meets someone of the same age. What is the use of this kind of cultivation, especially when the end of this kind of cultivation is to live as long as the sky. When everyone's life span approaches infinite, the protagonist will become the weakest at his age, because no matter who he meets, they are all about the same age. Then the protagonist sees that everyone is a mortal. Excellent, all will be lost in the later stage. Unless the protagonist kills all other immortals and maintains his age advantage, otherwise the protagonist will lose with infinite lifespan. So the important thing for the protagonist is not his cultivation, but finding a way to create a world-destroying organization and kill all his peers in the world.

Seeing that I was almost punched to death by a mortal from the same sect named Sha didn't make me sick. What else does the protagonist have to practice? Just exchange some life-extending things in the system and lie down. After so many treasures were wasted at the beginning, even the Heavenly Emperor's magic skills are of no use. As long as they are the same age, even a dog can be killed by the protagonist in the future, right?

Looking at the fan list, there were only 6 first-time orders on the first day... I feel so sorry for the author, come on!

Author. . What do you want to write about? Yes, is there an outline? Qin Yun, this character is poorly portrayed. But it keeps appearing, it's the outline at the back, is there any connection? But I suddenly thought that you had written her to death. It feels useless. And I have been raising it for a long time. I finished reading it in two or three minutes. It feels like water is flowing all the time.

It was really frustrating to watch, being suppressed everywhere, and there was also a misunderstanding with the heroine. It's really frustrating to watch

There are a lot of poison points, and I was told at the beginning that I could defeat the old man, but the result was the same as before.

Still writing? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? What supports you to go on?

What happened to the realm? It makes my brain hurt to watch.

The settings are messed up, and the system is quite confusing.

It's really well written. Will you update it again?

Ended 2024-11-26

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