Naruto: Sylas

I'm telling you, this book is plagiarized. I've painstakingly checked it over the past few days, comparing it to the Xinhua Dictionary, and not a single word is different; only the order was rearranged by the author.

The author made a serious mistake... The defection came too suddenly, causing a precipitous drop in the author's readership. I don't understand why you chose the path of defection. It's obviously stupid. Putting aside the fact that there are a lot of people in Konoha waiting for you to save them, just by changing the tone of your story, your book is finished.

There are so many elementary school students out there. Either they've never watched Naruto, or they can't think critically. The Shadow Clone Technique is such a fundamental error—it stores chakra—and yet some people are defending it, even saying Naruto's Shadow Clones store Sage Chakra. Why can't the protagonist store chakra? What kind of people are these?

Finally, I've seen this kind of plot! I've wanted to complain for ages. With eyes this powerful, why don't they get surgery? The Uchiha go to surgery, everyone's a surgical genius; the Hyuga go to internal medicine, everyone's a womanizer... *Cough*... Just scratch that. These two eye-technique families together could form a two-person team, comparable to Tsunade. Konoha could be unrivaled in the world just from the money they make from surgery.

The name is jarring enough, but someone with perfect Flying Thunder God technique chooses to go undercover? Having a cheat-like ability, he could become invincible after a few years of hiding in Konoha, then inexplicably defect and die from poisoning. Obito at this time was easily defeated by Minato's Flying Thunder God technique and Rasengan, and you surrendered so easily.

1. The protagonist's healing magic is ridiculous! It's even more insane than creation and regeneration, with absolutely no side effects. The principle behind healing magic is to accelerate cell division to heal wounds, which is a treatment that consumes cell lifespan, so it's impossible for it to be without side effects. 2. The protagonist's attempt to subdue Obito is excessive.

Uchiha Silas?!?! I, Nicholas Zhao Si, refuse to accept this!

Chapter 36 is truly a disaster, a complete collapse, utterly awful. I suggest the author revise it to make it more reasonable to avoid being criticized.

Chapter Eight: Is it too much for an eight-year-old child to casually discuss politics and the exchange of interests? After all, not everyone is a traitor to the Uchiha clan, and even Itachi-sama didn't doubt it...

Has Silas time-traveled too? When will it be our turn?