My Martial Arts Status Panel

If you have watched Baili Qingfeng and then look at this protagonist, you will think that this person is really stupid and does not look like a martial arts practitioner.

He has accomplished so much merit and saved so many dignitaries, yet he is not promoted and receives no bonus. This is an unclear reward and punishment! Who is still doing this? If you practice martial arts, your brain will go crazy?

When I read the chapter "An Incredible Idea", I felt a little speechless. The girl next to the protagonist's cousin directly asked the protagonist's cousin to hand over the protagonist to Zhang Tao to kill him? I feel that the organization that can say such things should be destroyed directly. Just say to your face that your family will be handed over to another person to deal with, but will your hands and feet be cut off? Then the cousin didn't get too angry and said nonchalantly: Don't say such things in front of me next time. What's going on here? Then the protagonist didn't have any more attacks after hearing this, and was thinking about whether he should give this cousin a life? I just want to ask what is this writing about? Will the protagonist join this organization later?

I bet if this book reaches 1.5 Million words a year, I will give it to a Golden Alliance

A suggestion: I'm not sure how you want to develop the next storyline, but for now, I feel that the protagonist is not clear enough. For example, the protagonist always likes to talk about his invincible courage and the arrogance of a warrior, etc. But judging from the recent chapters, the protagonist actually bows to the powerful for the sake of his relatives. If you think the dandy is to blame, then just let the ghosts come to kill him, and then you agree to save his life but still have to do something in some small way, why bother? And even if the protagonist saves his life, there is still a question whether his father will keep his promise. After all, harboring rebellion is not a trivial matter in any dynasty or place. What if his father breaks his promise and gets fat? Will he continue to kill people? Is this considered a side issue? I can see that you mentioned in the article that if you ignore it, it will harm society, it should be to add rationality to the protagonist's behavior. But when facing the enemy, the protagonist insists on saying that if criminals want to be judged alive, the ghosts cannot do it themselves. But isn't the existence of this female ghost the result of human judgment? When faced with a relatively intense and sharp conflict, you can avoid it. For example, I don't care what grievances you have, but as long as it harms society, I will do it. Or, I only care about how much money I can give to the cheater by killing an evil cult. But when you add transactions, fairness, justice, etc., The contradiction becomes more complex and acute. This can easily lead to the collapse of the protagonist's personality. It's not that contradictions can't be complicated and sharp. On the contrary, sharp and complex contradictions can highlight the character's personality, but they should be used with caution.

It feels good to support me

Why do you keep describing how you treat your parents? You haven't traveled through time since you were a child. In the first chapter, you mentioned a time travel for 15 days. As an adult, the protagonist's views have long been finalized. Suddenly he recognizes a pair of parents, like a baby, which looks very awkward. Of course, there is nothing wrong with being fond of parents from another world, but after all, the main character is extremely eccentric and always describes his inner filial piety to his parents, which is a bit weird.

It was an ordinary fight between brothers with no grudges. The protagonist directly kicked the brother and seriously injured him. This was something a young man who had just traveled through time for a few months did.

Writing pig's feet is too retarded. Nothing like being born again

The protagonist is purely a super virgin bitch who can do anything for any loyalty.