Yuan's Immortal Path

If it doesn't work at the beginning, just change it. If it doesn't work at the beginning, who will believe that it will work later? Deliberately interrupting alchemy? The big family has too many spiritual stones to burn? If you don't have the idea of ​​cultivating immortals, read more classic books on cultivating immortals.

Spiritual stones, skill levels, etc. Can be designed to be simpler. If it is too complicated to write, it will easily drive away readers and make them tired.

With so many complicated levels, who can remember them? Even looking at it, I don't know what the level corresponds to. Isn't it good to follow others' level? In other words, levels one, two, and three are better. Some unfamiliar name levels. I don't even know what level it is at?

To be honest, looking at the realm levels gives me a headache. Can't things like Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, and Nascent Soul be simpler?

Brother, the next book will be a family novel. If you support it with 11 votes every day,

Why does the protagonist's name have no characters? ? Does anyone else have a protagonist? ?

With such complicated settings, the most likely person to mess up is yourself.

Dear readers, does anyone feel confused when looking there?

As for your power division, you don't want people to click in to see it.

Brother, write slowly, you are the author and I support you. It doesn't matter whether it is published or not, as long as you write happily, as long as you write what you think in your heart without leaving any regrets. Already collected, the recommendation vote will be given to you when I reach level 3.

How to say it? I have written dozens of chapters. What the characters say is separated into paragraphs and explained in double quotation marks. Otherwise, if they are mixed together and read clearly, don't expect readers to read them word for word.

It's too complicated. It would be better if the system is simple and clear.

I just read the first chapter and I just felt like the name was so poorly chosen! Maybe this one just doesn't have much popularity!

Can the cultivation system be a separate chapter? 😢😢 Looking back, it's very confusing

Come on! That's quite possible.

Come on, there are always people silently supporting you

It's okay, what I'm looking at is the entire big family. Only with flesh and blood is it perfect. Isn't it just the number of words? This kind of thing depends on the beholder and the wise.

I just came here and there has been no update for seven days.

That's it! I haven't started yet

To be honest, I can't even count 5 million in this small number. I don't even bother to take a look at it.

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