My Hammer in Douluo Can Be Upgraded

I've read more than 30 chapters, so give me a full subscription + monthly pass. This Douluo fanfic closely follows the theme of the article. There is no too brainless plot at the beginning. The supporting characters do not deliberately conflict with the original work. Instead, the author creates and combines them to create new characters. In the early stage, it is still in the stage of accumulating strength and development, and there is no The IQ of the characters in the original work is deliberately suppressed. Overall, it is worth reading for readers over 18 years old. The early plot is relatively relaxed and a little funny. Although the concept setting is very ambitious, it is hard to say whether the author can control the plot later. And in the novel environment of most Douluo Long Aotian + harem + shit and shit plot, it is worth recommending to raise the plot level to the level of institutional issues to liberate the oppressed Douluo people. After all, we are in a socialist country, even if it is unique; so I hope that our literary creation fields will be more integrated with red ideas, and create works that will not cause death but also bring some small thoughts~~~

How can I put it... There are some setting bugs and some unreasonable settings, but they are also top-notch among Douluo fandoms. The most important thing is to have your own ideas. There is no such cliche plot as mindless licking of the protagonist and the Wuhun Palace at the beginning. The author is very wise and has a single heroine. After reading more than seventy chapters, you can find that the author is not very good at writing emotional scenes. However, it is not easy to repeat this kind of writing in a fanfic. There are many authors who have taken a different approach. I don't know about others among Douluo fandoms, but I think it's pretty good, and the author hasn't been influenced by readers to change the outline and plot. I have to say it's not easy. I don't know why the author's books are so lukewarm (maybe it's because the update is too slow... (Funny)) Finally, I wish the author good luck and don't be overwhelmed by life 😁😁

So far, it's very good. It gives me a novel feeling. I hope the author won't collapse.

This typesetting will dissuade you at first glance. It has several hundred words per page. Do you think this is writing a composition? It is recommended that the author take a look at the formatting of hot books, otherwise it will be useless no matter how good the writing is.

Regarding the evaluation of Douluo Dalu, if you think it is inappropriate or different, you can add more. This novel was fine before, but why is it being criticized by so many people now? It's because we didn't have much ability to distinguish things when we were young, and it was just fun to watch. The reason for these shortcomings is that the third young master of the Tang family originally wrote Xiaobai novels First: In the world of Douluo Continent, soul beasts are killed or hunted to improve their strength. What's wrong with Bibi Dong killing Xiao Wu's mother? How many soul masters are there in the world? How many soul beasts were killed? Is Xiao Wu just a fucking thing? The rest is bullshit? Humans and spirit beasts are originally hostile camps. People can kill spirit beasts, and spirit beasts can also kill people Second: If a spirit beast has not done any evil, is it wrong to kill it? How many soul beasts have been killed without committing any evil? Is Xiao Wu just a fucking thing? Third: Who helped awaken Tang San's martial spirit? In those small villages, not even a soul master can be born in ten years, a hundred years, or a thousand years. The Wuhun Hall is still doing it. Even though it is known that there is no soul master there, every small village will send people to help awaken the soul master. Who gives the soul master subsidy? Will nobles help common people awaken their martial souls? Will the empire help civilians awaken their martial souls? The empire and nobles wished that the common people could not awaken their martial spirits. The weaker the common people, the easier it would be for them to rule. Don't tell me that Wuhun Palace is here to win over the common people. There is a civilian that Wuhun Palace has been doing for a long time. Regardless of the purpose, the common people have indeed benefited. And those low-level soul masters, aristocratic schools accept common people? Wuhun Palace Collection Fourth: Isn't Yu Xiaogang a scumbag? After he separated from Bibi Dong, he turned around and got close to Liu Erlong. Even the Panxia Xia didn't pick her up so quickly. How much did Bibi Dong help Yu Xiaogang? Most of his theoretical knowledge came from Wuhun Palace, which Bibi Dong helped him obtain.   He had long asked Bibi Dong how to solve the problem of twin martial souls, and also promised that Tang San would not be an enemy of the Wuhun Palace. With Yu Xiaogang's IQ, he would not be unclear. Tang San is Tang Hao's son. Tang San's mother was killed by the Wuhun Palace, and his father was killed by the Wuhun Palace. Pursued by the Soul Palace, such a deadly feud, Yu Xiaogang also promised Bibi Dong that Tang San would not be an enemy of the Soul Palace. Well, it was really ironic that Tang San would be destroyed by the Soul Palace after changing hands Fifth: Is Tang San a good guy? What kind of place is the Killing City? Most of the most heinous people in the world are there. They are only allowed in but not allowed out. It is just a prison. Why does Wuhun Palace turn a deaf ear to the City of Killing? Destroying the Killing City, Wuhun Palace can gain a lot of people's support, which will be of great benefit to Wuhun Palace. Tang Chen can't destroy it? Qian Daoliu restrained Tang Chen and randomly sent a few titled Douluo elders to destroy the killing city in minutes. Why not destroy it? Because there will be less evil people roaming the land. Good guy, after Tang San obtained the God of Killing Domain, he destroyed it with his backhand. Those who did evil things and were not caught or could not catch them had no place to go but to do evil outside. Moreover, after obtaining the God of Killing Domain from God Shura, he destroyed their territory with his backhand. Sixth: Why do everyone think that the Wuhun Temple is guilty of the most evil crimes? Because this is a novel, we are taking the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist has a mortal feud with Wuhun Palace. In addition, Wuhun Palace has been chasing the protagonist, and the style is not good. Moreover, he also wants to kill the protagonist's wife. Xiao Wu is a hundred thousand year old soul beast incarnate, and only Wuhun Palace wants to kill him? If anyone knew that Xiao Wu was a soul beast, they would kill her, because she is a soul beast, the foundation for increasing strength in Douluo Continent, and the enemy of mankind.

Let me put it another way, in Dou Yi's timeline, the situation on the mainland was objectively maintained in a relatively orderly and peaceful situation because the Haotian Sect had closed its doors and the Wuhundian family was the dominant one. Under the suppression of Wuhun Palace, the social situation is relatively stable. Basically, evil soul masters and criminals are concentrated in the killing city and cannot get out. At the same time, because Wuhun Palace was in the middle, the two empires did not go to war, and there was not even much border friction, and they were in a state of peace. Objectively speaking, Wuhun Palace played a positive role during this period. The real situation in Douluo Continent began to be chaotic when Bibi Dong founded the country. Tang San bulldozed the Wuhun Palace for the sake of his family's hatred, but he did not allow Tiandou to annex Xingluo and unify the continent, leaving a huge power vacuum and a black hole of order. It can be said that Bibi Dong used public weapons for personal use, and Tang San also played the role of a troublemaker in the process. Together, the two of them destroyed the basic order of Douluo Continent. But before that, with the Wuhun Palace under the control of Qian Jia, the basic order of Douluo Continent is still guaranteed. There is no need for Ishino to be too careful. Just like when you hear crackling sounds on the streets in China, you just wonder if someone is getting married or a store is opening. There is no need to find cover immediately like in the beautiful country.

I don't know why so many people like Bibi Dong and Wuhundian now. Bibi Dong killed Xiao Wu's mother just for a 100,000-year-old soul ring and soul bone, and even said that she should be killed. Has Xiao Wu's mother ever harmed anyone? No. But Bibi Dong later killed Xiao Wu for the soul ring and soul bone. Is it wrong for Tang San to take revenge? Furthermore, Bibi Dong is a person who will destroy the whole world if he is destroyed. After destroying Yu Xiaogang's family, how can he help Yu Xiaogang avenge those humiliating things? Did the master say anything about revenge? Do people want to destroy their own family? Bibi Dong is an extreme person. Some people say that Bibi Dong avenged Tang San for killing his mother, but if Tang Hao hadn't seriously injured Qian Xunji, would she have had a chance? Does anyone say that the master is a scumbag and others are a scumbag? It was Bibi Dong who dumped the master first. Although it was to protect him, couldn't he find another partner after being dumped? Later I learned that Liu Erlong was my sister and ran away. Isn't this normal? It was Liu Erlong's father who forcibly broke them up. According to ancient times, he would be immersed in a pig cage. The world of Douluo Continent was originally more feudal, and his thoughts were much more conservative than modern times. Although it was not as serious as our ancient times, under the separation of his father-in-law, he was powerless and had no strength. How could he have the courage to continue together? , It's not bad if you don't get beaten to death.

In fact, if you want to develop red in the Douluo world view, multi-party checks and balances are still unrealistic. It is more realistic to wait for the protagonist to reach a certain level and directly rewrite the rules of the Douluo plane. If ordinary people can threaten low-level soul masters, low-level soul masters can threaten high-level soul masters, and high-level soul masters can threaten ordinary people, this is a bit similar to the three departments of the American Empire, and you cannot completely count on the hearts of the people. Red can develop like this in reality. In the final analysis, there is still no concept of "eternity" or "immortality" or the concept of single invincibility such as "saint" and "god". The main core of red is "materialism"! As for a fantasy world like Douluo, in fact, a fantasy empire on the technological side or a supreme destiny on the mysterious side would be more suitable. These are some small suggestions.

The plug-in is not bad, but the character of the protagonist is really blind to me. I don't get soul rings after level 20. I just upgrade the heroine's talent to zero and abolish the stable leveling method. Later, I am forced to take the white soul ring. I have to slowly level up to upgrade the soul ring. As for the physical attributes of the protagonist, the first soul ring is close to a thousand years, which is not too much. It also weakens the protagonist. Then the girl was reluctant to use the fruit and gave it back to others to help others lay the foundation. The first soul ring was a thousand years. Why didn't she give the heroine as a gift if she was so generous?

The character image of Maizi, I hope the author can use this

What a great book. Ma Liu's update. It's the first time I'm so generous. I paid five thousand for the first time. Ma Liu will wait for the update.

Is this indigenous? What have I experienced in my life? Could it be that I wore it when I was 5, 6, 7, or 8 years old? Don't be wary. If it weren't for the protagonist, he must have been robbed of his martial soul by an evil soul master.

. . . . . . Accidentally raised to death

To be honest, I don't know why, but I am very resistant to the protagonist's increase in power, even if it is beneficial to the protagonist.

Brother, you want to destroy this book now. If I take back this book, it is not bad.

The male protagonist of Good Guys has a hammer spirit and is a worker, while the female protagonist has a hoe spirit and is a farmer.

Seeing that so many people are discussing Douluo, some are extreme and some are peaceful. I also like Douluo very much, the settings in it, etc. I would also like to express my feelings: 1. I don't think a character can be defined by good or bad. A person's existence is complex, and different people have different positions. So what is good or bad? Let's talk about Wuhundian first! The existence of Wuhun Temple itself is to promote the angel gods, and it can be said to be a religion. When Wuhun Temple is powerful, it opens Wuhun for civilians. This is a monopoly. Talented soul masters can be attracted to Wuhun Temple, but the two empires are unable to resist. There is a confrontation between forces, so the empire takes money and Wuhun Temple takes people. As for whether a time traveler should join the Soul Palace after entering Douluo, it depends on personal choice. There are advantages and disadvantages to joining the Soul Palace. The advantage is that in the early stages, someone can hunt soul beasts for you, and there are rich resources that allow you to grow quickly and not die prematurely. The premise is that you are a genius, but the price you pay for it is freedom. You may join a force, and if you take other people's resources, you have to work for them and be loyal. For ordinary civilian soul masters with average talents, joining the Spirit Hall may be a good choice, because the nobles in the two empires look down on civilians, and will reject you even if you have talent. In the Spirit Hall, as long as you give your freedom, you can gain stability. 2. I saw someone talking about evil soul masters in the comments. There was no concept of evil soul masters in the first part. It was a world where the strong were respected. Soul masters who gained strength by killing people were evil soul masters. At that time, soul masters were superior to ordinary people. No one cares about the life and death of ordinary people, including Wuhun Palace. Wuhun Palace may not fight against powerful evil soul masters for the sake of ordinary people. If an evil soul master appears, he may be hired and asked to have people from Wuhun Palace eliminate it! After all, Wuhun Palace will not watch a large number of civilians die, which will also destroy the foundation of the guild. The concept of evil soul masters appeared later in the second part. After the collision and fusion of Sun Moon Continent and Douluo Continent, evil soul masters appeared again. First, the hometown of the Holy Spirit Sect is in Sun Moon Continent, and after 10,000 years, the human rights of ordinary civilians will also improve, and some people will care about civilians, so there is the concept of evil soul masters. 3. Regarding the evaluation of Douluo characters, I feel that one cannot be described in terms of good or bad. Let's talk about the protagonist Tang San first. The sect of the Tang Sect in his previous life was a sect that was both good and evil. Tang San will also be influenced by the Tang Sect and will not be indecisive. , In fact, the formal rules recorded in Xuantian Baolu have always affected Tang San, so it cannot be said that he is a good person or a bad person, but Tang San himself still has a very charming personality and is very good to his friends. The friends around him became gods because of the fairy grass he gave. Master: Many people don't like this man now and think he is a scumbag, but I don't think so. Let me also comment. For a master, being born in a blue-dot Tyrannosaurus Rex is a source of pride, but the martial soul mutation has dealt a huge blow. How proud you are is as big a blow as it is. Therefore, I am a person with great perseverance in studying the theory, because my girlfriend Bibi Dong is a saint of the Wuhun Temple. I think in At that time, I drew on a large number of books and materials from Wuhundian to study theoretical knowledge that no one cared about. The first girlfriend broke up for some reasons, and there was nothing to say. Although Bibi Dong dumped him to protect him, it would be a mistake to miss it, and there may be regrets. The second girlfriend My friend learned that she was my cousin on the wedding day. What an idea 😅, so I ran away. I think I may have a cowardly side when facing feelings. The master's character has both a proud side and an inferiority side. People with low self-esteem will be very cowardly when facing feelings. He is not considered a scumbag. Nowadays, fan fiction is expanding the harem while calling the master a scumbag. I laugh. At least he is single-minded when it comes to relationships. Some people may say that if he likes Bibi Dong, You and Liu Erlong, how can he be single-minded? But after all, he does not stand in two different boats. This is normal. After ending a relationship, it is normal to face the next relationship. As for his theory that "there are no useless soul masters, only useless people", I think this is the contradictory point of his personality. He hopes that people can break the talent, because his talent is not good, and he hopes this sentence is right. At the same time, when facing a talented disciple, he accepts him as a disciple, hoping to cultivate a strong person. This person is very contradictory. I hope he won't look at others from one side and just say that he is right.

I'm really speechless after reading the first chapter. 🙂 The protagonist, why don't you just be born in the Holy Soul Village and lick Tang San? It's really funny how many targets in the Soul Hall can go down to the village and awaken their spirits every year. Even if they have no soul power for several years, they still go there every year. There is no one in Chengli who awakens their spirits on a regular basis. It's really funny. Even if it's black, the black spots look a little bit like each other. Can you say that the high-level people are evil, fighting for power, and doing evil things to you? I remember correctly that the Wuhun Palace took the lead, and it was the working-study students of the academy. 😰 The Wuhun Palace was stronger than the lower-level soul masters, and it won over many people. Even if Tang San had full soul power, he didn't force it. 🙂 Awakening the martial soul for free, and you are so dark, is it interesting to create such a conflict? Even if the others licked and slaughtered the city three times, none of them were like you. Villages that can be decentralized, haha, in ancient China. Except for modern China, no dynasty can do this.

The heroine Maizi appears out of nowhere. The protagonist also says that because he has influenced her, if she is guaranteed to be safe, how can she protect her from being such a scumbag in the early stage? And it affects more than one, infinite clones. Will each of them help? Could it be that he wants to be blessed by the Wuhun Palace to provide the protagonist with a parent sacrifice ceremony and boundless magical power?

I'll keep it until I die. I hope the author can continue to update it.

It turns out that the author knew that the institute would persuade people to quit? Well, I was one of those people who was dismissed.