Rule Creation Guide

It can be seen from the writing that the author is indeed a newbie writing books, and he is probably a science fiction enthusiast. The book's biological evolution, environmental deduction, and exploration and experiments of small worlds really made me feast my eyes. Especially the part about the sustainable development of insect swarms and insect swarm wars is full of creativity. But there is also a problem: the lack of other perspectives. The creation flow requires a large number of secondary perspectives to assist the protagonist's main perspective. The author arranged Mu Yu'er as a branch line which is very wise, but the role is too small (compared to the main perspective). The perspective of the protagonist is overwhelming in the whole text, and most of the content is: making plans, observing and then experimenting. If not enough other plots are inserted in between to assist, it will soon make people tired. It is recommended that the author arrange more plots from other characters' perspectives. Let me give a few examples: For example, the section on abduction in Xishuangbanna, in my opinion, was not handled well. It could have been a great book with a lot of fun, and the plot of child abduction and organ trafficking can easily arouse readers' empathy, but the author has passed it over in a few strokes, focusing entirely on the protagonist's description of the two bodies of Shan Mao and Mu Yu'er and the police disguise of themselves. This plot can be completely inserted into the story, such as the lamentations of the police who handled the case, the description of the grief of the old woman, and the discussion of public opinion. Just think about it and you will know what a big bomb it will be in the world of public opinion when a gang that kidnaps children and engages in organ trafficking is broken up by a young man while traveling. The other thing is the lack of other characters' roles in the creation process, which can also be classified as the problem of the lack of secondary perspectives. There are no other human beings involved in the creation process of the protagonist, but it does not mean that it cannot be written. On the contrary, it can describe the psychological activities of intelligent beings of different races such as queen ants and queen bees. The style can refer to the section about the light chasers in the game "Chasing the Light: Set Sail". It can also be appropriately anthropomorphized. After all, this is writing a science fiction novel rather than a scientific research paper, so there is no need to be so rigorous. The last point is a small personal suggestion: you can properly show your face in front of human beings, and describe human reactions from multiple perspectives such as society as a whole, politicians, scientists, and even gangs, guerrillas, etc. This is also a great point of the creation story. For example, you can arrange a plot where the biological spacecraft controlled by the protagonist on a whim/accident flashes in front of the Mars probe camera, stays there for a few seconds and then flashes away again, and then focuses on describing how humans are shocked, how they pay attention, and how they react. I know this kind of plot is very cliche in this type of article, but it is indeed one of the selling points of this type of article. Of course, the author is still the one who wrote the book. I am just giving some suggestions. Typing so many words does not mean that this book is so bad that I need to list its shortcomings at length. On the contrary, it is because this book is so good in my opinion that I give suggestions so seriously. As a novice writer, the author has arranged the writing, layout, and plot compactness very well. There is also no indiscriminate use of words, random exclamations, and awkward boasts that many novices have, which is really rare. What's more worth mentioning is that the creativity and basic scientific literacy are really good. The plot of the creation of the insect swarm in other books is not uncommon, but usually a few scientific terms from Baidu and a lot of fantasy fairy tales are added to make up the whole story. The result is self-contradiction.

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There is a lot of super science fiction to be written in this book, and it is worthy of becoming a god. I hope the author can write well!

Let me ask, is the world created by supernatural power or technology?

It can completely transform the human body. The bone density may be the same as that of Wolverine. It can change the atoms and molecules of human cells, bones, and become a superman in minutes. There are many experiments and so on.

Really a eunuch, right?

There are several suggestions. First, don't be a eunuch. If you persist, you can be like the 4.6 Billion repeat of evolution. That one is really slow. I really don't have the energy to write slowly, so I just treat it as a pastime. But no eunuchs. Second, we can learn from low-dimensional games. But please go the other direction. Because low-dimensional games take a fantasy direction. I hope this book will take a science fiction direction. The swarm has a swarm mind. Fungi can be large pan-conscious beings. There are different types of personalities, but they all belong to one consciousness. There are four fundamental forces in the universe, and the weak nuclear force and gravity are not considered. The possibility of producing life is too small. It would be too complicated to assume. Strong nuclear force life forms and electromagnetic force life forms can be set. Gods are high-ranking beings in a fantasy setting called a status game. Of course, it is also possible to set these two forces to interact to form a high-level life form. For details, please refer to neutron stars. A neutron star is actually a very complex celestial structure. There are multiple layers of structure inside and outside, and at the microscopic level, neutrons will recombine to form extremely complex microstructures. And it will generate an extremely complex and powerful magnetic field. Of course, I'm not saying that neutron stars are conscious. We can learn from the structural hypothesis that some peculiar microstructures and the interactions of various forces appear. It creates consciousness. In addition, the humanoids in the world use heavy nuclear elements, since they are so compatible with various metal elements. That can range from external armor to embedding yourself in mechanical constructs. Directly ascend mechanically. Moreover, civilizations are highly aggressive and can directly engage in large-scale interstellar wars with civilizations. In short, there are a lot of settings in science fiction. I hope it won't be completely like another book. There may be similarities and references, but please take another path. This is my second suggestion. The third suggestion is that this book is more hardcore. In the fast food era of online writing. Many people look at the beginning to see if they will continue the book. The excessive length of the previous article does have a big impact. Because many people are so used to reading fast food literature. You can cut out the long foreshadowing in the previous article and use it as an introduction. Write skippable in the title. Or put it directly inside the pan. Then write the introduction in the title of the first chapter outside Pan. This will allow many people who can't stand the beginning to continue reading. If you really like this book, you will naturally go to the front to find the introduction. But don't cut off the previous text. This is an important introduction. Let's just say that the foreshadowing of Three-Body Problem is quite long on the Internet. But that doesn't stop it from being an excellent science fiction novel. Also, you can appropriately personify the insect swarm consciousness, fungal consciousness, or large life forms that may appear in the future. Make it look cool or nice. Add some settings. For example, cold, sinister, loli, and royal sister. Give an example. For the fungus, you can set its humanoid form to be a little lolita with multiple personalities, one of which is the Virgin. Sacrifice yourself to feed all things in the world. Another personality can be dark. Destroy all imperfect creation. A confused and dazed little loli who is setting up a normal state. Let's take another male example. For example, swarm consciousness. In fact, I have always felt that the strong aggression of the insect swarm consciousness should belong to the male personality. However, attitudes are always regarded as female characters in literary works. You can set up swarm mind like this. He is in awe of the unknown but eager to explore it. Will surrender as a servant in the presence of great power and profound knowledge. But he will learn secretly. After he is stronger than you. It will depart to seek knowledge in unknown lands. Of course not the Devourer. That is actually more similar to the relationship between students and teachers. I'm very confused, what are the various strange Lord Devourer settings? This operation of personification is to make this work entertaining. Richer. And attract some ordinary readers who are not interested in science fiction to read it. But we can wrap it up in this entertaining shell. Maintain its sci-fi core and literary nature. Personification is very useful. Look at those mobile games. Find some items to put into your personal shell, and add some attributes and settings. Come up with a background story to add to its core. Tens of millions of dollars can be defrauded in a year. But how can their thin core compare to the future, knowledge, destination, and destruction and recovery of civilization in hard science fiction. The nature and direction of life. So once it's written, it's completely sustainable. The above are just suggestions. Of course, it mainly depends on the author's own knowledge and thoughts. Writing techniques and structure. The author has set the core of science fiction, so please dig deeper and show it. Appropriately wrapping it in a layer of entertainment is also to make the work better spread and survive.

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I drew it myself, probably like this

I should have time to write properly next month. If you don't know how to do pigeons, you won't!

It is recommended not to use a female protagonist. All female protagonists in the Genesis style are very bad. They can use random tricks in their own world. There are all kinds of bad things. Alas, there are many reasons. You can find the disadvantages by just searching. Anyway, you will be stuck in the whole life. There is really no need. Unless you write the emotional drama very well, otherwise you don't do anything there. It's love at first sight, Xiaobai Wennu I've also written a main character, or a disgusting heroine, or a heroine made from a template. I really don't need it. I've written two creation books. The first one was okay. But when there was a heroine, everyone complained about it. She rushed to the street at the speed of light. It was the same both times. Don't ask me which two books it was. Now I am also working on a small account. Seriously, listen to me and save yourself from fighting a few times. I really didn't lie to you.

The evil person who dares to violate the prohibition and practice the Sunflower Book will die~The Mighty Heavenly Dragon~🔨🔨🔨

Suddenly I realized that this is a science fiction creation. . . Kavin, just write more about daily life, don't worry about anything, incarnate all things and add this golden finger, the true God in the world, there are so many creation texts that you can't do! ! It's better to write more about daily reality, and don't include a female protagonist! If your writing skills are good enough, you can also write about parallel worlds (choose some with a relatively simple world view and a relatively comprehensive plot without conflict, otherwise it will be difficult to write, and it is best not to touch the Marvel Dragon Ball punch), and don't write some plots that are too anti-human. Okay, I recommend 2.0 (I really don't want to type, woo woo woo)

This fairy grass! Any recommendations for similar novels? I've watched the low-dimensional game, and there are too many bugs in raising all human beings.

What a great book, what a pity eunuch

Speaking of which, I don't know why, but it seems that the protagonists of all similar books gradually stop thinking of themselves as human beings or the next moment they get the golden finger. The authors have an unexpectedly great tacit understanding.

Author, look 😐 🐷🔪 😏

Great hard sci-fi! Support. It is rare to see this kind of science fiction web novel that is set and then evolves freely according to logic and deduction. There is also a big problem that there is no human interaction at all. Plug-ins rely on variables, but the protagonist has absolutely no human social communication, interaction, or plot. After reading it for a long time, I feel that I am out of touch with the human perspective, so it is difficult to feel as enjoyable as ordinary online articles. In fact, according to the current strength of the protagonist, he can already control the city and lead human civilization into a star colony by himself. For the sake of the author's livelihood and achievements, it is recommended to focus on both sides, one is human society and the other is the experimental world.

I am thinking that if we directly open a door near the sun in the real world and directly absorb the mass of the sun, the absorption of three thousandths of the mass of the sun will be almost invisible. At most, a few large-area sunspots will be generated, but they will have the mass of several Jupiters. The method can be to directly control a bionic man, and use one hand to control the bionic man to create a "door" in front of the aircraft, so that the door is just big enough to cover the aircraft from the sun, and then smash it all the way into the sun. The pressure inside the sun is huge, the density of matter is very high, and the gravity of the sun is also very high. The falling speed at this time is also quite high. If it can reach the troposphere, the material passing through the door in the troposphere can even reach a few tenths of a degree in a few seconds. The mass of the ball (how many Earth masses can be sprayed during a coronal eruption), although most of them are hydrogen and can only last a few seconds. The aircraft and the things inside will be destroyed by various extreme environments around it, but I feel that this is a quick way to obtain mass. If this method of smashing the sun to obtain material does not feel good, you can also try a mild 100 million-point smashing of Jupiter. At least I feel that with the protagonist's current ability, it will be no problem to swim a few laps in the metallic hydrogen ocean of Jupiter. At the same time, it can also be played as the Big Bang: Throwing matter with a temperature of millions of degrees into a new space from a door or similar hole, you can set up multiple doors to spray at the same time (I remember a report that there was more than one explosion point in the Big Bang), then cooled to form a gas cloud, and then formed a star. The star aged and exploded to form more other matter, and then evolved for more than ten cycles. It is estimated that a mini-Earth will appear, which is more consistent with real evolution. This is all my speculation.

. . . When I saw a female protagonist, I didn't want to enter.

Return the grass jelly every 4 days? This is a sinkhole

This is a book that I think is quite good. I have been reading it from time to time in the past few years to see if it has been revived, but unfortunately no miracle has happened.

The author will update soon. The collection has dropped from 23,000 to 19,000. If he doesn't update, he will be out of date!

At this rate of corpse fraud, it's still very possible to reach 100 chapters within this year.

Could it be that the author forgot his account password and then couldn't change it? 😢 The author saw my comment and made a squeak to prove that he is still alive 😐 We are still waiting for your update 😆 I read this novel when I was in junior high school 😭 When will I come back to update 😭

I looked through the bookshelf and found out that the author has published a new book. I hope that the author will have the opportunity to update this book in the future (although the chance is unlikely). Maybe it's because my taste has changed in the past few years, Qidian rarely recommends Creation Books to me. I obviously liked it before, and I also thought about opening a Creation Book. I came across a book about creation through recommendations before, but unfortunately the opening chapter didn't suit my taste. I still miss the days when I had a lot of good creation stories to read. At that time, I wasn't very picky and I liked many ideas, even though most of them were spoiled by me.

Tomb sweeping during the Qingming Festival Remembering the days when the author updated