Coiling Dragon: Beyond Perfection

When I read Chapter 11, I deviated a lot from the setting of Panlong. I seriously doubted whether the author was a Panlong fan. It has been seven years since I read the original Panlong. 1. The four ultimate warriors transformed into two levels in the early stage. Take lei as an example. When Lin Lei is a level 7 warrior, he transforms into an early stage of level 9. The level 8 transformation reaches the peak of level 9 (it reaches level 9 after the second battle against the angels). After the level 9 transformation of the body, there is the sanctuary. Soul defense clear light appears after the body's sanctuary. 2. The strength of level 1 to 9 mages is linked to their mental power. If your spiritual power is level 4, you are a level 4 mage. It's just that the body doesn't store enough elements.

9.5 Of the 10 books by Panlong Fans of The Eunuch are disappointing, but I still want to collect one first.

At level eight, tell others that fifty years will make you a god 😰

When I saw the fourth-level magician of the thunder system and the peak of the third-level water and fire system, I ran away...

Brother, please pay attention to the typos.

The protagonist is simply a good old man, a treasure-delivery boy, so damn simple.

Those one hundred and sixty-five of yours are too outrageous. You just fused three kinds of mysteries casually. What do you think this is? It took hundreds of millions of years for the four divine beast families to fuse three kinds of mysteries. Don't you think it's outrageous that everyone except the protagonist and Lin Lei have progressed so quickly?

I can't stand it anymore = ͟͟͞͞(꒪⌓꒪*) This level of composition is like that of an elementary school student. I really can't afford to be hurt.

The seven-star demon is considered a master in hell, and he actually lives in a small tribe...

What the hell are you writing? Chapter 6, Ciri's peak at level 6, Chapter 22, level 5, just broke through to level 6. It's not about whether you are inconsistent with the original work. At least it has a preface and a follow-up, not to mention Wharton's strength. It's also a mess. You don't know how to make a memo, table, etc. For this book. Can't you list the level of the characters? Please be serious, author. If you write well, even if few people read the subject matter, there will always be people who will keep chasing you and support you. If you don't write well, no matter the subject matter, it will be in vain. I hope the author will get better and better, correct his attitude and keep improving