Dharma God's Plant Manor

Farm well! The style of your introduction doesn't match the book at all. I clicked on it just for the title of the book. I didn't even want to click on it when I saw the introduction.

Author, you describe him as a person, not a paragraph of text. You first put yourself into the character of the protagonist and think about the next step. It is not a very blunt, copying routine. If you impose it like this, you can only treat the world you write as a garbage dump, and throw all kinds of garbage into it. It's nothing to watch. After reading the first word, you already know the next routine.

Anyone dares to be disrespectful to the lord's heir, anyone dares to ridicule, then slap him in the face, and then conquer him. Tsk.

Are you putting too much pressure on the protagonist?

The same beginning and the same process, I think it's nothing

Building a castle out of nowhere, without any foreshadowing? The change is too sudden

People are so worried about the background of the lords written, 😅,

A mud-legged man in the Middle Ages treated a lord like this? It felt like I was watching some kind of Immortal Emperor and Demon Lord in the city. Others kept scolding the Immortal Emperor but didn't fight back. Western Fantasy Version of Crooked God of War

It's okay for new readers, but it's boring for old readers like me😵