The Return of the Dead Across the Heavens

The author had the protagonist use a 60-pound bow? That would make him incredibly weak. The author underestimated ancient soldiers; don't compare them to modern office workers. There's a video on Bilibili about bows and plate armor. The guy who specializes in bows says he can draw a 200-pound longbow and can shoot a 120-pound longbow all day long.

When Dumbledore threatened him, the protagonist became so cowardly he became impotent.

A suggestion for the author: The protagonist shouldn't be so cowardly. He cowers at Dumbledore's mere threat? I'm not asking you to be an invincible warrior who slaughters everyone in every world, but you can't be this cowardly and weak. What's the point of reading the book then?

You deserve to fail, you bastard. The ending of the middle volume, the foreshadowing of the Hunter x Hunter opening, and this Hunter x Hunter chapter is utterly uninteresting. Seriously, you deserve to fail.

The dog, the silly thing, it feels like a cycle of reincarnation in paradise.

Starting with The Witcher, it's like a completely different person 😥. Inception is also unclear and confusing; there are many parts where following the plot is unnecessary.

From its initial release to the latest chapter, the plot seems rather bland, like plain water, lacking any climax or sense of accomplishment.

Posting my first comment: By the way, have you considered writing about Suicide Squad later?

To put it another way, if it's the author pandering to the masses, not the other way around, then what's the point of the system space laughing all the way to the bank?

I've never played Assassin's Creed before, so I skipped it, but somehow I ended up at chapter 140. I thought about it and decided to just leave; it wasn't worth it. No need. I'm too lazy to read it even if I'm just playing for free.