The Rise of the Pillar of the Great Qin

Is it really a good thing to change the laws to modern ones? Times are different, human nature is different. For example, if thieves were locked up for a few days and then released like in modern times, wouldn't that lead to an overabundance of thieves?

Using modern laws to manipulate ancient times? That's ridiculous! You'll be the first to rebel!

The Qin royal family all belonged to the Ying clan and the Zhao family. Seeing "Ying clan and Ji family" in the introduction is immediately disconcerting.

Do many of you novelists really think you're using your brains when you write? Novels are for a broad audience, not for you as an individual to do whatever you want without anyone criticizing you. When considering a broad audience, do you think about whether the novel will resonate with them? If it won't, then just give up; there's no point in persisting. If the audience is interested, you can keep writing!

Seeing 6 million people standing together, and the protagonist handing out money to help them go home for the winter, I just couldn't bear to watch anymore. The supplies needed for 6 million families to get through the winter. And you're not preparing them. Just give them money? Have you considered where they'll buy so many supplies to get through the winter?

Ying Zheng has been hyped up to the skies. His unification of the empire was the culmination of six generations of hard work, the result of several generations crippling the six states and accumulating resources before finally being realized in his hands. These accumulated resources had little to do with him personally.

This might be the first Qin's Moon story I've ever finished reading from a pirated copy, but I'll gradually subscribe to the rest! Well, many people might criticize it for being toxic or not, but this is a fictional fanfiction, and a high-quality one at that. If you're going to nitpick every single word, what's the point of reading novels?

I couldn't stand it from the start. Zhao Gao has become one of the Four Pillars of the Empire? Even though it's fantasy, shouldn't they at least have some basic historical knowledge? Historically, Zhao Gao only became arrogant during the reign of Emperor Huhai. During the First Emperor's reign, he was just a lackey, albeit a powerful one. The same applies to *Qin's Moon*. A lackey is a lackey.

It feels pretty good, keep it up!

There are so many typos. Don't you even check it after you finish writing? Does the protagonist have a split personality? His personality is a mess; he thinks he's in control of everything, but gets proven wrong every time. He seems strong, but he's actually incredibly weak. I found it incomprehensible and couldn't relate to it at all.