A Certain Scientific Tentacle Monster

It's really not easy to write about ghoul before it breaks down. I often see authors who inflict serious injuries and explosions, cheat in desperate situations, and are rescued from the brink of death. Then, in order to match the protagonist's wanton increase in combat power, demons and gods appear. What stands out is one wanton act. I think that something like Black Light, which can be infinitely integrated, must be written as an invincible flow. The invincible flow requires that the enemies encountered are always weaker than the protagonist, so that there is no upper limit to the protagonist's strength. Otherwise, if it is written according to the upgrade flow, in order to suppress the protagonist, the enemy's combat effectiveness must be continuously improved, and it will soon become an original fairy fight, or the protagonist's combat effectiveness and IQ will be weakened, coupled with rising prices, the readers will be treated as fools. Both of these are failures. Since the subject is about infinitely becoming stronger, don't limit the protagonist's strength. Just crush him all the way. If it's more fun, you can turn it into a teammate.

Since the internal force is bioelectricity, then go and fix the magnetic field rotation. This superpower is quite "scientific" and not mysterious at all 🙂🙂🙂

The writing is too lame. A hemostatic bandage costs 1,000 points, an innate skill costs 3,000 points, and super serious injury treatment costs 300 points. The prices are all ridiculous. Moreover, it was specifically written to increase the mystery of the treatment. After all the points have been paid, you still come here as an afterthought and deliberately abuse the protagonist to suppress the readers who are tired of the protagonist? You find that the price has collapsed, and you quickly confiscate the protagonist's points?

I would like to remind the author that this kind of infinite flow does not make any sense to add an antagonist to the protagonist. If you want to add enemies, just kill them in one or two rounds (two rounds without dying in one world, no more). Don't stay alive from the beginning to the end, or be resurrected at every turn.

Name: Hatsune Gabo E0086 Gender Male Super senior, because I really like Hatsune, I won't change my name at all. The external image looks like a pale young man who is prone to collapse in the wind, but in fact he is an undead lich. His body is weak and he relies solely on magic. He has countless spare bodies to achieve extremely high immortality. Farming-style players are extremely weak in the early stage, but in the later stage, they can destroy the undead space fleet by explosive force. It does not have the traditional lich's phylactery, but digitizes its own soul and turns it into a complete electronic life form. Every familiar created is his server. The familiars are endless and their spirits are immortal! The natural enemy is Ultron or Xingyue's BB, a super hacker with both technological and mystical skills. Only then can he directly target his cyber virtual body and kill him. The two elements are indispensable, otherwise even Skynet will not be able to track him, unless he looks down from the perspective of a high-dimensional existence like the devil. "Is there any problem with liking virtual idols? I am a virtual idol too!" … Holy Relic: Quantum Key Form: A string of golden mysterious codes that seem to be constantly changing and cannot be recognized, and can appear floating in mid-air even without a carrier. Capability: digitization. Even if it is mysterious or not, it can be analyzed and transformed into data. The disadvantage is that the analysis and transformation of its own data will cause it to gradually lose its entity and gradually turn into an intelligence life form. Forget about data analysis, anyone who uses data transformation on himself must be the most ruthless of ruthless people...

When I saw the pirate part, when the tentacles separated and acted independently, like a clone, I knew the book was broken. The separated tentacles were so easy to change between men and women, I knew I couldn't read it.

Why doesn't the protagonist have a nuclear energy cell? In reality, there are bacteria that can use ionizing radiation to synthesize organic matter. It would not be too much to have a nuclear energy cell. There are also nanoorganisms, quantum viruses, psychic organisms, uh, if you think about it carefully, there are still a lot of awesome scientific organisms.

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Another point is that before the end of the first scene, the protagonist made two mistakes. Why forcefully add drama to two passers-by? The protagonist did not have any description of his teammates at all. Originally, the readers thought that his teammates were just insignificant passers-by, but suddenly two capable ones appeared. This was too forced. ………… If you really want to write this kind of plot, the first few chapters should let the readers know what kind of people your teammates are, and give some foreshadowing. There will be no problem with the continuity of the plot later on, and if you write it well, it will get extra points. In the end, you had no foreshadowing, but two talented people suddenly appeared behind you. It was too forceful.

Brother, do you know what it means to not be a human 🤓 If you just look weird, you are not a human, and if you are born with deformities, you cannot be called a human 🙂 Only by completely abandoning human moral values ​​​​can you call it a non-human, even if you have a human appearance 😊 If you dare to write that, 404 is for sure 🤭

Seeing Chapter 23, the protagonist is strictly shielded from temporary buffs? ? ? What the hell, does the temporary magic buff permanently increase the mystery value? Then the protagonist has become the scum of O Momo?

See Chapter 4. I saved points and didn't use them before, and then I dodge and buy skills while fighting. I didn't understand the skills before, so I complained about the side effects when I bought them. This plot is so good 👏👏👏

It's really disgusting. I was persuaded to quit after two or three chapters. In Infinite Game, you are just trying to play around with so many rules and regulations, and you impose so many limitations on the protagonist with such a strong attack without any skills?

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Turn on customization, and then it will be gone as you keep it. 😡😡😡

I have one thing to say, the protagonist's character is okay, not very interesting, but it's not embarrassing either, and the big and small poisonous points that some people think are nothing to me. But can you tell me why the main character, a novice in more than 80 chapters, plays a clone and fishes with the main body. Well, let's forget about starting the clones, but once I started, I couldn't stop. I wrote eight clones and four main lines together. The personalities of these clones are so different from the main body. Some people may think this is humorous, but I really can't accept it. There is a saying, if these eight clones and four main lines are opened together, it can be considered that the author's writing skills are good if it does not collapse. As for writing methods such as author avatar and multiple lines, there is actually not much problem. I have seen many science fiction or fantasy with science fiction meanings used this way. But those are either because the combat power is a bit weak, and it cannot be written later without opening a trumpet; or they are related to the main plot, to make a turning point or foreshadowing for a certain plot; even if they are written in this way in the early stage, they are trying to reduce the proportion of plot and IQ consciousness of the clone. But the author... Is obviously overly excited. He makes a single-protagonist novel look like a multi-protagonist novel. If you want to complain, you can't say it's random writing, because at least the character structure is established, and there is basically no big problem. It's just a word that makes me feel uncomfortable. When I write this, I am not saying that the author's writing is not good, but the writing method may not be suitable for me, because I am used to reading online articles with only one protagonist, and it really feels awkward. Of course, this is not me saying that I am not good enough (🐶). I also read multi-threaded novels, including serious literature and biographies (mostly physical books). I have also been fortunate enough to read several Nobel Prize-winning books. To say that I have read them thoroughly is definitely bragging, but at least I know the general idea through scribbling. In the end, I feel that the above, or the ideas that the author thought of when imagining it, and find it interesting, just give it a try; or if a literary youth suddenly has an impulse in his heart and wants to add a three-dimensional sense to the story, just use it. But no matter what, what remains unchanged is the ambiguity and limitations of the final control, so there is a sense of distortion that appears on the paper. Probably because the essence of this book is actually a fast-paced and refreshing article, it seems nondescript, and it seems that you want to vent your inner troughs. Wouldn't you be happy if you don't?

I want to see the male protagonist learn mechanics. Mechanics are definitely not mysterious. Bring him to modern times or the future. Steam can do it. He has eight hands and can assemble eight times faster. It would be a pity not to learn mechanics. Moreover, the male protagonist's Pikachu ability can also solve energy problems.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, don't be a eunuch, the writing is very good.

When I was reading anime novels in high school, I also thought about an ability system. Haha, there were Tokyo Ghoul's Hiko, the Parasitic Beast on his left hand, Fullmetal Alchemist's Arrogant Shadow, the Invisible Hand from a different world from scratch, and my girlfriend was the spiritual tentacle in the zombies. It felt quite complete, that is, the big tentacle system that captured the essence of my high school's dark thoughts. I would wait until later to enter the Cthulhu Mythos When I became the evil god, I originally thought about using this set to enter the infinite world. I thought about it for a long time. I also thought about upgrading the parasitic beast and loading it into the chip (the kind that can be used as a mobile phone). The personality of the parasitic beast becomes a technological intelligence, so that I don't have to think. Haha, but after watching the infinite stream for so long, this is the first time that an author has such similar ideas as me. I am very happy. I hope the author will stick to it and write better and better. Come on!

I looked at some tentacles, some occult science, and thought it was a counterattack. But then you told me what kind of innate skills the protagonist learned to play martial arts in the world of Japanese comics?