My Wife Is Yamato Nadeshiko

I thought it was a Japanese light novel, or a time travel and rebirth urban novel. The setting should be just after the end of World War II, after Japan's defeat and surrender, but it was very messy. It added monster settings, and some fragments from other worlds in the past. It was a messy batch, and also added some of the author's own groans of literary youth. The prose is not prose, but a novel. The structure is too complicated and messy, and it is too confusing to read. After all, it is not a fan novel, and there is no description of live scenes. There is no good explanation of the historical background, humanities and customs, and even the character, characteristics and appearance of all the tasks are not well described. Except for the wife at the beginning, Yoko, I only know that the author said she is a pervert.

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I read novels just for fun, but why are there so many sentiments about the hatred and sentimentality of Japan in this era? ? You are a time traveler but you are not from this era. You are a mother-in-law and it is not easy to read. There are long descriptions of scenes from a sad era. You are not writing a novel to fill the number of words to create atmosphere. You are a mafia leader and you are directly killed. And you let it go for inexplicable reasons (for yourself?). You have to remember that you are a time traveler and you adapt to the times and are killed directly. One word, and it is done. While the reader is brought into the protagonist's sweet daily life for Yamato Nadeshiko, the protagonist is turned into a tool over and over again, which is really exciting. Moreover, some names and settings appear inexplicably. You have to consider that some readers have not seen certain works that the author should have seen! If you really want to write about the prosperous life of the people in that era in Japan, it is best not to focus on it in a "light" novel. Doing this in the first part of the novel is very discouraging. Life is already terrible, and I came to Qidian just to have a smooth experience, ugh😔

This book gave me a sense of chaos. One moment, ghosts appeared, another moment it was about the Yakuza, another moment I transformed into a superman, another moment I felt like I was going to write about Onmyoji, and now it gave me the illusion of being a special soldier in my previous life. The time and background were confusing, the settings were messy, and a bunch of them appeared. The Japanese style of sad spring and autumn gave me the feeling that the author was bullying me for not having read Japanese books. He copied a little from one book and borrowed from that. The whole book was very confusing, pieced together into a book 🤫🤫🤫

Why do I feel like I have no beginning and no end when I read it? I always feel like some settings suddenly appear out of nowhere, and I always feel like I haven't read a few chapters.

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Let's simplify it a bit The content of the article has nothing to do with the introduction of the book title The whole point of business war that hurts the Spring and Autumn is just two words: miscellaneous and chaotic. Please, this is a light novel, thank you 🙏 You can either change your writing style, or just play it alone Judging from your reply, I guess you are also a depressed literary youth If you can listen to it, then change it, if you can't listen, don't reply to me, I feel upset after reading your comments

I was very confused when I read it. I originally thought it was time travel. After watching a few pictures, ghosts and gods emerged. It was okay, so I just treated them as a daily stream of ghosts and gods. But after watching a few pictures, the way of heaven came out (ง °Θ°)ว. The most important thing is that this daily novel is a bit 'healing' 🤔🤔

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Hahaha, give up and prepare to write the next book! Learn from experience, come on

After reading dozens of chapters, the world background is Japan with a supernatural background five years after the end of World War II. The content is mainly about turf war (that's how I read it). I feel that it has nothing to do with the title of the book. It would probably be more appropriate to rename it to "I started selling salt in the countryside and became king in Japan"