The Hidden Dao

🙂 Although the male protagonist was blinded, scolded, beaten, stoned, and beaten with eggs in Mangshan Town, the male pig foot never left him and guarded Mangshan, the true Virgin Mary

I hope the protagonist will practice cultivation seriously and not have a harem or stallion.

It's poisonous, I'm about to be poisoned to death. I feel that since we are both players, at least Li Shitannian's IQ should be online and not so reckless. I feel that my whole brain is a bit out of place. The author seems to be deliberately trying to portray this person's character traits, but I feel that it is counterproductive.

Without further ado, let's talk about what I think is the poisonous point. (Remember, this is my opinion. I am not confident that my views can represent everyone's views, but I still want to complain and comment) First, world view. At the beginning, I thought the world of mountains and seas was an ordinary fantasy and mythical world, then it came to the wreckage of the world in the River of Forgetfulness, and finally the protagonist saw the wreckage of the multiverse world in the River of Forgetfulness. I know it's over. In fact, it's okay to see this. As long as the author's writing style is good enough, such a world view can be controlled. But in a certain chapter, I felt like he wasn't good enough. In a certain chapter, the author wrote that the protagonist drove to the New World China on the Twilight Plateau, perhaps to express the size of China. He said that China has a universe as large as two blue stars that can be observed. If the blue star is aligned with the earth, the diameter unit of the observable universe is tens of billions of light years. That's not bad, it's big! But I can't understand his previous sentence. He said that the protagonist traveled through most of the mountains and rivers using the teleportation array, and then said that if the speed of light could travel, it would be at least a thousand years. You are putting famous mountains and rivers in a village. Go out to Mount Tai, take a step to Mount Huang, and then take a step to the Three Gorges? Second, feelings. The protagonist is liked by two people, one is the White Lotus Virgin, and the other is Xu. There is no logic. Xu Sha was saved by the male protagonist once, and then he didn't meet the male protagonist a few times, so he skipped work and came to watch the male protagonist (although it was to explore the truth), but he was taken care of a little by the male protagonist disguised as the male protagonist's junior brother, and then he conquered it by himself? The Second Holy Mother of White Lotus, an evil god who has lived for who knows how many tens of thousands of years, inexplicably betrays the male protagonist when he goes to Jiming Mountain, and then inexplicably declares his love to the male protagonist, and finally sacrifices himself. How long did it take for the male protagonist to arrive at Dusk Plateau and reach Jiming Mountain? How many times have they met? Someone who has lived for who knows how long and fell in love with the evil god all at once? What about the process? Mary Sue novels wouldn't be written like this! Third, noodle eaters. The Noodle Eater appeared on the protagonist's first mission, and was later given a lot of descriptions. The Noodle Eater has the following characteristics. After rebirth (the author said in a reply to a reader that he thought he was reborn), he loves Blue Star and wants to kill Xuanzhen. One reason for killing Xuanzhen is that he is a giant of immortality in the world of mountains and seas, not a giant of Blue Star. This combination seems to bring disaster to Blue Star in the future that the noodle eater thinks Xuanzhen will become as a giant of mountains and seas. This poisoned me.

Is the harem just about having sex? What are a group of people thinking and talking without using their brains? I don't know what's going on with online writing right now? The existence of the heroine can make the content less boring. It's impossible to just practice fighting monsters all the time, right? Some authors can't write heroines well, so they completely deny them? Who are they? ! ! ()

It's too confusing, the causes and consequences are always missing, pitfalls appear inexplicably, and conclusions are drawn, it's all a waste of brains. The outline is in your head, and you know how to write it. The problem is that it is very difficult for readers to read it.

Xuan Zhen doesn't write like the protagonist's doppelgänger, but like an independent individual, which feels weird. Moreover, Huang Quan didn't have any interest at all and just skipped to watch it.

He is indeed a saint and writes well, but he does not agree with my three views. I'm not a good person. I don't mind doing good deeds if I have the ability, but I can't exchange my life for a life I don't know if I can save.

It's too thin, and there's a suspicion of wateriness, but there's nothing wrong with it, but the more the protagonist looks, the more she looks like a woman. Every step he takes may arouse sentimentality, and he often feels sorry for himself. Are you sure you can live in the heavens like this? Then there is Xuanzhen, who knows too much, is this a clone? It's really not as good as a system wizard or an absolutely rational personality like Dr. Chen.

The camp has been put on the shelves but it's still pending? You don't want to choose a camp at the end, do you?