Qingyun Supreme

The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, and the content is resonant and thought-provoking. It is one of the rare good books I have encountered in decades. My only regret is that I have not read a word of it.

Since you are cultivating immortality, don't have any love affairs. Women will only affect the speed of drawing the sword.

If the author is not strong enough in writing and reading, then he should not write about how many decades the protagonist was in his previous life.

In fact, the most important thing is that the protagonist teacher has been reincarnated, and he always recognizes a bunch of brothers and parents. Then he always makes clones. When I saw this, I immediately quit the movie. I didn't want to watch it, it was very annoying, I just gave up on it, and the plot was quite toxic.

It's ridiculous. A movie about Zhu Xian becomes a Da Luo. If you are already a Da Luo, how can you travel to other worlds and be reincarnated?

Can the world of dwarf immortals reach Daluo Jinxian? The world of dwarfs is actually more advanced than Swallowing Starry Sky. This is the first time I have seen it.

I came here because there was no heroine, and asked if there was no heroine.

Oh my god, this is simply one of the worst books I've read in ten years. It's neither fish nor fowl. Not to mention the anecdote, your writing style is barely enough to write about urban and brainless B-texts. What kind of fairy tales are you writing about? But being able to keep writing for so long is still worthy of recognition. Why don't you cut it off 🤭

Change your profile! Talking about seeking immortality wholeheartedly and then turning around to fall in love with him is just taking off his pants and farting, which is unnecessary!

Whatever novels I write, they all go off topic. The protagonist of the book has disappeared, and I always write about other destiny children. Just like a running account

Come on, I hope you won't be a eunuch. As long as you update, I will vote for you every day. I will give you a monthly vote when you put it on the shelf. You can order all of them now. Rewards are nothing.

Find a class, I won't write anymore 😳 It's really not this material

Personally, I feel that Zhu Xian is a descendant of Xian Xia. All of Zhu Xian's immortal skills are derived from the five volumes of heavenly books. There is no real ascendant from the beginning to the end.

Toxic. The author probably didn't read the original work like that. Many things are wrong.

Many novels nowadays have a single female protagonist, or no female protagonist. It's not that everyone doesn't like emotional dramas, but it's different now. Readers' tastes have changed. To write a good emotional drama, the author is required to have outstanding writing skills and delicate descriptions. This is difficult. If you can't write well, it's better not to write at all. Therefore, many talented authors simply downplay the heroine, or do not write emotional scenes, so as to save themselves the embarrassment of writing and readers, and cause a lot of controversy. But there are still some authors who are not very good at writing. They obviously can't write well, but they insist on writing. Not only do they have to write, but they also have to start a harem. Who are you planning to disgust?

The author's dialogue is verbose and contains too much irrelevant nonsense.

Zhang Xiaofan is the most rubbish pig's trotters. He still has to lick Zhang Xiaofan. I'm drunk too.

After reading more than thirty chapters, I can hardly stand it anymore. The obviously serious and determined cultivator of immortality is written in a funny and mean-spirited style. It is completely impossible to see the maturity and character of seeing through the world of mortals and the years of cultivating immortals. The author should read more of the works written by Platinum Master. The style of the works is mature and not funny or cheap.

Sao Rui saw the protagonist's name slipped away

It's too stiff and lacks a sense of involvement. It also feels like writing a composition, without emotion.

Borrow the treasure land and advertise "Chi Xiyue, the Captain of the Wilderness", welcome to spray! Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

He always says yes, and a man of several decades still acts like a novice.

The characterization is completely soulless

The writing can be said to be the worst among Zhu Xian fics, and the plot is even more boring! Worse than tasteless

Is this a book? Is this garbage?

Well, this should be one of the best novels I think!

To become a Jinshi at the age of ten is unprecedented and unprecedented. Long Aotian has nine years of compulsory education.

6. The second world is when the stars change and they become gods. Is it necessary to write about it later?

When you can't stand it the most, you can just say one yes, but you have to say two, just like women.

A novice, the writing style is too poor and the writing makes no sense.