The Way of Immortality for Warriors

Yue Buqun: Who is your Excellency Enemy: How could I, Zuo Lengchan, tell you who I am? A flash of light flashed in Yue Buqun's eyes, his heart continued to wander, and he couldn't help but smile: If I guessed correctly, you should be Senior Brother Zuo Lengchan! Zuo Lengchan laughed loudly, and there was no lack of appreciation in his mouth: Junior Brother Yue is worthy of being the leader of Huashan, Junzijian. He is very powerful in martial arts and is rarely defeated by anyone. He is also so smart and strategist. The bystanders couldn't help but be surprised when they heard this, and secretly sighed: This Yue Buqun is so smart, he can guess the identity of the enemy in just a few words? Yue Buqun was quite proud: That's it, how can you and others be able to figure out my wisdom? Reader: I... The twenty-year plan is just no plan!

Jin Yong-style martial arts hate the kind of dimensionality-reducing strikes the most. Being able to travel to the Huashan sect would be awesome. He also thinks about Zhongnan Ancient Tomb, Murong Ruins, and Xiangyang Sword Tomb all day long. Do you really think people in the martial arts world have something wrong with their brains? The martial arts of Huashan School are already very good in Swordsman. Huashan used to be the top of the Five Mountains, but Huashan teaches the Quanzhen Sect. The Zixia Magic Kung Fu is pretty awesome, as well as Huashan's swordsmanship: many novels are the same nowadays, about cities, time travel is the biggest golden finger, and what kind of space, system, etc. Are created. What's worse is a martial arts secret book... It's disgusting.

I want to complain, I want to read martial arts fan fiction, but now I don't look forward to it at all For example, level classification In the previous novel, everyone was shocked when they heard the name Feng. Now, everyone was shocked when they heard the name Feng, but he was a third-rate master. The price is too low...

When I was a kid, I thought Linghu Chong was cool when watching Swordsman, I thought Yi Xiaochuan was a good guy when watching Shinhwa, and I thought Agarwood was inspiring when watching Lotus Lantern. When I grew up, I realized Yue Buqun's helplessness, Gao Yao's suffering, and Yang Jian's release into the sea. I feel like the author is not too mature

It's Huashan again, Xiaoao will definitely start in Huashan, and Yitian will definitely start in Wudang.

I want to complain, every Xiaoao fan has to go to the back mountain of Zhongnan Mountain to look for the Tomb of the Living Dead. This article also said that it is easy to find. Please go travel if you are not geographically good, or you can go to Baidu: Zhongnan Mountain is actually the Zhongnan Mountains, a continuous one. I want to find a stream and a cave in it. Haha, you can look for it for the first half of the year.

As soon as the protagonist has some strength, he starts to play the role of a clone, and his interest in watching the story through the vision of the clone is greatly reduced.

After reading three pages, I was calmed down by a second-rate person in his early days. It has been 21 years. Why not avoid the poisonous points when writing a book? You say that his strength can reach the second-rate level in the world, but if you write it as a realm, it is too poisonous. You have been writing for many years and his skill is better than this, right?

The protagonist who pretends to be crazy and acts stupid is extremely boring 🤤

The generals in the previous few cards are so awesome! It feels like a second-year middle school boy is dominating in a kindergarten. No matter from force to IQ, he is crushing him. Not to mention overpowering a kindergarten, he has no problem suppressing kindergartens across the country.

In self-pleasure books, the perspective is always the protagonist, the protagonist's psychological activities. Others are decorations, others have no thought. There is no psychological activity, no scene. The protagonist is all dreaming and getting high by himself, dreaming at every turn, and getting high while dreaming.

Why is Xiaoao going to the ancient tomb to hunt for treasure now? Is there any mention of ancient tombs in the original novel? I just made it up in my head and used it later. For example, Ning Zhong is the daughter of the leader! I just made it up in my head, and all the subsequent authors have taken it as an ironclad rule.

It was fine before Chapter 10, but starting from Chapter 10, the style directly mutates, and the protagonist directly changes into a weird personality...😰

I have only watched the TV series and never read the novels. Based on this sentence, I conclude that your writing is not very good.

Just a good-for-nothing, who traveled through time thirty years in advance, and yet none of the disciples he accepted at the end has changed! ! ! !

In ancient times, was an 18-year-old considered a middle-aged woman? It would be boring if everything is modern.

The writing style is so childish, talking to myself

The protagonist is Yue Buqun, I can't stand it. After cutting off the inherent image of the baby, it would be good to change to an original protagonist, which would give a better sense of immersion.

Various openings: The fake eunuch opening in "The Deer and the Cauldron", the Huashan opening in "The Swordsman", the Wudang opening in "The Legend of the Dragon Slayer", the true opening in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", the peach blossom opening in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", Murong Murong in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" The beginning, the swordsman's beginning of "The World of Ancient Dragons", the humble beginning of "Three Kingdoms", the Tang Dynasty Gravedigger's beginning of "The Legend of Two Dragons", the Yizhuang beginning of "Mr. Zombie", the Ip Man's disciple's beginning of "Ip Man", Chen Zhen of "Fist of Fury" The brothers start, "Special Forces" Xiaozhuang's comrade Huo Fenghuang starts, "Urban Hong Kong Comprehensive World" the police undercover starts, "20th Century Xiangjiang Urban Entertainment" the second-hand player starts, "21st Century Mainland Urban Entertainment" is right and not a frame-up The empty start, the Renzong Tianzong start in "Qin Shi Mingyue", the ghost husband start in "A Chinese Ghost Story", the snake husband start in "The Legend of White Snake", the Wukong brother start in "Journey to the West", the interception start in "Feng Shen", and the innate gods and demons in "Prehistoric" start.

Volume 4 (Jiang Ye), Volume 5 (Shooting the Condor to Cross Tribulation 1), Volume 6 (Zhu Xian to Cross Tribulation 2): Martial Arts Yuanshen (Martial King) - Overcoming Three Disasters and Five Calamities - Breaking through the Martial Arts Emperor, Martial Emperor

Volume 7 (Lotus Lamp): Cultivation among martial arts emperors (comparable to immortals)

The first chapter starts with a lot of poison, what kind of industrial garbage is it written?

Traveling through time, Lao Yue is also a talented protagonist.

Such watery words are really eye-opening

Volume 3 (Wind and Cloud): Yuanying (Martial Master) - Yuanshen (Martial Arts Yuanshen, King of Martial Arts)

After going through the catalog, I feel that it is very old-fashioned and there is not a single interesting world!

If there are any third-rate, second-rate, or first-rate martial arts fan fiction writers, you don't need to read them. They are all idiots with no brains and no writing skills.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see

Read more original works to give you some tips on your writing style.

The introduction wasn't even clear, so I was tricked into reading one chapter. If it was about traveling through time and becoming a hypocrite, wouldn't I need to read it?