Selling Konoha

So, the author thinks a "feel-good" story is one where characters are constantly threatened and forced to work for others against their will, without even knowing if they'll survive. Is that what a "feel-good" story is? My impression after chapter 21...

Why isn't the organization named: What? I don't know? White Zetsu: Obito, another organization has recently emerged. Obito: What's your name? White Zetsu: I don't know what it's called. Obito: There's information you don't know? White Zetsu: I know. Obito: What's that called? White Zetsu: I don't know what it's called. Obito: ??????

It always inexplicably reverts to the original plot, it's so frustrating. Dude, when you write fanfiction, you should at least make some changes, not always stick to the original storyline.

It's well-written, the only downside is the main character. I suggest removing the main character and only keeping the avatar; that would make it perfect. Keep an eye out for this; let me know when this loser protagonist is gone. 😒

I saw a post in this chapter that said it gave me a terrible headache. Let me say a few points First, as long as you don't use abusive language or post illegal content, I won't delete a single comment, regardless of whether it's good or bad. Secondly, if you're right, I'll change it.

He published a book in Konoha at the age of five; the poison was too great, and he died.

Good, it's engaging and better than many books with over 10,000 recommendations. Keep up the good work, author!

Readers who can still read this must have maxed out their poison resistance.

I can't stand it anymore; I don't know what the author is writing; it's all a mess.

Another book that relies on a deceptive synopsis <(`^´)>