Him and the Road

I really like the author's writing style and hope it can be written longer. The stories inside, the stories of these people who have no names but only code names, are very interesting. *⸜( •ᴗ• )⸝*

Also, the name. There is no desire to click into the introduction. This is unacceptable for online writing. It's not enough to just use writing to carve fences and jade bricks. Sometimes when telling the plot, the effect of "Wang Xiaoer, ate five big steamed buns and laughed so happily" is often better than the so-called pile of writing.

The writing style and story of this book are very good. I personally think that you should not read the list or follow the novices, otherwise it will lose its flavor. The most important thing for the author is to persist, not to stop updating, not to collapse, and to spend more time to deduce the world view and settings. This book is only 40,000 words long, and it will definitely become popular after I write it.

Too many ideas are not suitable for online writing. Simple and crude, pretentious, funny, silly all the way, and inexplicably passionate are still the mainstream of online writing. Alas... Although I understand, I don't have the ability to do it. If nothing else, this book is still not good. If you remove the thought from your writing skills and are willing to bend down and tell stories purely, you can expect to become a god. It would be a pity if you refuse to lower your proud head...

Almost everyone who has read it said it is good. I think it is good too, but it is difficult to get ahead when writing like this. The author's writing does not feel like a web article at all. The words and sentences are too concise. It is hard to imagine what it would be like to write hundreds of chapters in this way.

(I am not a sailor) Although I have not finished reading this book, the introduction and title really attracted me, and they coincided with my youthful imagination and passion. In this impetuous world, there are too many people who entertain themselves to death. Most of the current online articles do not have much meaning. The author may consider publishing a physical book, or starting with journal prose, which should sell well (although I have no experience), but I hope that the author can continue on the road of writing. This is also a regret that I have not been able to do it.

I am also writing a book, and I feel like I am living in the body of a dog 🙂

I have read two chapters and would like to give the author some advice. Can the chapter titles be added?

I feel like the author has submitted it to the wrong channel. You can try submitting it to short stories. It might be better

Indeed, when I first read it, I felt it was a breath of fresh air. I liked it very much, and I felt that I was beating up a lot of novice writers. But now that I read it, I really find that the more I read, the less motivated I am. It feels like the sky is flying, and people can no longer connect with each other. However, I still want to say that you are great, but maybe you are just not suitable for online writing. You can try paper books and short stories. Purely personal opinion. Thanks.

It's so well written. The more you read it, the more interesting it becomes. Savor it carefully and you will have endless aftertaste.

It's well written, but it doesn't look good. . . I don't know what the title of the book means, the introduction doesn't summarize the story, the characters don't even have names, and I don't know what it's about after reading it Many people said that it's true that every paragraph is well written, but it doesn't feel like a complete story. I thought I was reading Yilin, one essay after another. Internet articles are ultimately about telling stories.

In today's world where routine writing is dominated by novices, it's great to have such a high-quality and high-level writing!

The writing is great, but the plot editor doesn't like it because it has no commercial value😂

To be honest, this writing style is really top-notch among online writers. It's just that the story is not good. It can be said that it is very poor and has no commercial value. Apart from the writing, it has no point to attract readers to stay. However, the writing ability is really strong. If you are determined to read more lists, combine hot topics with writing style. You must be hot, absolutely hot.

Collect it first and take a look, it looks very good, don't let me down.

Absolutely amazing! I really enjoyed reading it. Although I used to read comedy articles, I have also read serious ones. This is really cool🐮🍺! Come on, author!

The plot is wonderful. It's rare to see a good book with such characteristics.

The writing is quite good, and I can see that the author cares about it, but I looked at the comment circle... How should I put it, it's a bit fake. In fact, what this book really lacks is a starting point recommendation, a little bit of guidance. The author might as well go find some starting authors and ask for a few end-of-chapter recommendations. This may be very effective.

Being able to describe all kinds of rich emotions so delicately and truly is truly extraordinary.

Reading the novel to the present in one breath is a wonderful experience! Both the storyline and the character settings are quite interesting.

I firmly believe that the author who can write good books must be super handsome or extremely beautiful, right? It must be so! Come on, author~

Why does Mao feel that the author is very similar to people like us?

Even the supporting characters have to go to great lengths to write out their characteristics. Personally, I think Dada did a pretty good job at this point.

My wish is not big, just give me a passerby from A, B and C. Although I can't be the protagonist's buddy, I can be a passerby in a certain chapter. Don't let me die early, at least live for a few chapters. Just simplify the character's name from my nickname. I would like to thank the Football Association in advance and fulfill my little wish. It is not easy to become a character in a novel.

I'm reading a book again. Although I'm busy with work, I still won't forget to catch up on updates.

I, x, the author, can you slow down a little bit? It's so hard to find this book, it's so slow.

A great product for amateur leisure, I highly recommend it.

Must sign every day!!🌹

It's too early to get into the trap. Now that I'm done, I'm updating N times a day and waiting for updates. Please update soon.