The Northern Abyss Immortal Clan

I have read a lot of novels about family cultivating immortality recently, so I will rank them in order. (Personal opinion) Protect our clan leader, make the path of immortality everlasting, Beiyuan Immortal Clan, cultivation of immortality begins in the desert, Han's Immortal Road

The heroine of this book is so disgusting, especially in the later stages. Now I have read more than 1,300 chapters. The heroine does not practice much and relies entirely on the male protagonist to accumulate resources. She does not help the male protagonist to manage the family. She is worried about the male protagonist finding a concubine all day long. She follows the male protagonist every day and hides in the male protagonist's space without being able to help. She also complains about the male protagonist and damages the male protagonist. And he actually acted afraid of the heroine. Such a heroine, not to mention the world of immortality, but also modern society, such a relationship between husband and wife, and the character of the heroine would easily get divorced. I really dislike the heroine

In the future, I would like to thank all the book friends who give tips on this page.

I have always been very nervous, worried that I would not be able to sign the contract. I originally thought I would give it up if I couldn't sign the contract, but now there is news about the signing, and I promise to keep updating. In addition, thank you all book friends for your companionship. Without your collections, recommendations and comments, I would have given up long ago.

Regarding the vote on whether there should be a female protagonist, the majority of book friends support having a female protagonist. It is confirmed that this book has a female protagonist and will not be changed. However, the protagonist will not have a harem, there will only be one female protagonist, and she will not take up too much of the scene.

Brother, you are writing a story about family farming, but after reading so many chapters, it seems that the family is a completely unnecessary existence for the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist can live a more carefree life without the burden of the family. The family relies entirely on the protagonist's chance to develop. These are the failures of family power novels. Don't highlight the protagonist too much and make others dispensable. If you look at some other family novels, it seems that a family is really developing, and the family is the protagonist. Strong backing, making talismans, refining alchemy, refining weapons, setting up formations, planting, cultivating spiritual beasts, etc. These protagonists basically only learn the same thing, and the rest depends on the talents of other families. In some families, the protagonists are not the strongest, but they all train geniuses who specialize in fighting. The most taboo thing about family and power novels is that the protagonist catches everything by himself. He is the first in combat, alchemy, making talismans, and refining weapons. So why do you need the family? Do you think you upgrade too quickly? In novels about family and power, it is necessary to remind them of their benefits, and to write about the feeling that without the family, the protagonist would not be able to develop at all or not develop so well. They complement each other. The protagonist is the vanguard leader, not just a leader. He does everything by himself, but also helps the family in turn. It is like the protagonist is in the rear, letting people collect spiritual planting materials for him, instead of finding them all by himself.

Personally, after watching Family Flow, The Peak of Green Lotus is good-looking. Families develop over thousands of years, and you can't slow down time. They dominate the world in just a few decades. You're kidding me. There are also Korean-style Immortal Roads and Nine-Rank Immortal Roads, all of which are good-looking.

None of the current family cultivation novels are passable. Let's not talk about other things. In this book alone, I really can't see anything related to the family cultivation. It is basically written around the protagonist. The family is basically mentioned in one stroke. I can't tell where the family developed. It's just the protagonist throwing some resources into it. The family becomes stronger when the protagonist comes, and then the protagonist throws in some resources and the family becomes stronger. It feels like the protagonist's personal show, and then talks about the protagonist's various cheats, and then often keeps a low profile and is afraid of death. In the end, he kills the enemy without any danger, and then obtains the enemy's resources to improve himself. Every plot is the same 🤫

My main feeling is why you should be afraid of writing a heroine. You can learn from it, but it is definitely not a reason for you to avoid writing a heroine. If there is a master who has not been scolded, who can write well from the beginning? If you are afraid, you can first read it yourself and learn the writing method in the two-dimensional novel, and then show it to the editor to see if there are any problems. This is the attitude of a person who is determined to write a book, instead of not touching it if I am afraid. In this way, you will make some progress and make a lot of money. What other people are saying in the comment area every day that they can't control it? You can't control it. You don't let the author control it. So what chance do you have to control it? A group of people who talk disgustingly are not rubbish. There is no female protagonist in a novel, and you watch men having sex and fencing all day long. Do you think this is something a person with normal aesthetics can do? If you want to read this kind of novel, it only means that you are hehe. Look at that popular novel that doesn't have a female protagonist.

The previous number refers to the amount of cultivation, in "minutes" as the unit! One, two, three, four and five refers to the number of spiritual roots! Start practicing at the age of 10 by default! Perfection is the amount of cultivation achieved after a failed breakthrough! Under normal circumstances, it cannot be obtained through normal cultivation! Zhi Shou Yuan on the black background is not talented enough to go further! By default, elixirs and other resources are not used, and there is no injury! Only when you have enough spiritual energy and the right technique! Using elixirs will cause bottlenecks in the future! The reasons why casual cultivators have low cultivation level are as follows: 1. Start late! 2. Poor skills! 3. No spiritual pulse! 4. Take medicine randomly! 5. Suffer hidden injuries!