Beiyuan Immortal Clan

Before Chapter 138, it was a masterpiece, Chapter 138 Goldfinger, it crashed immediately after adding the setting. The protagonist Goldfinger is a small world, but the protagonist cannot enter. He can take in and release animals, plants, and monks. The upper limit of the realm of the creatures inside is affected by the protagonist and cannot be broken through. Time in the space accelerates, and it is very large. It was originally good, but the growth of the creatures in Chapter 138 and the setting will not be accelerated, and the lifespan of the creatures will still be calculated according to the outside world. In the family cultivation stream, there are only a hundred or so monks. With this setting, wouldn't it be possible to directly gain the monks' talents by including the mortals in the family? You can directly play with tens of thousands of monks. As explained in the previous article, the spiritual energy in the space is not replenished from the outside world around the protagonist. It is almost infinite. Even if the spiritual energy is weak, it cannot withstand the acceleration and preservation of time. Depending on the protagonist's level, tens of thousands of monks of the same level as the protagonist can be produced in a short time (counting external time). And when the cultivation reaches the bottleneck, you can delve into spell deduction techniques and calculate combined attack battle formations. Everyone's combat power can be completely surpassed, and tens of thousands of Qi Yuanying can be killed in a combined attack.

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，，，， The pace of the book is moderate, not too fast, and the practice is step-by-step, with no successive breakthroughs. I look forward to the Liuli Wang family becoming the fairy clan in the Beiyuan Realm. But at the same time, I also have questions. Beiyuan Realm feels like a small world, and I feel like it can't accommodate the words of immortals. And how to run a family. In fact, I personally feel that the core of the family must be the Wang family. Secondly, it also needs powerful law enforcement and supervision agencies to ensure the continuation of the family. I seem to see another powerful monk who has attained enlightenment with the Five Elements Spiritual Roots. Also, when will the heroine come out 🙂? Will there be a single heroine? Or there will be no heroine and the protagonist is a workaholic who can't wait for feelings 😏

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I have read a lot of novels about family cultivating immortality recently, so I will rank them in order. (Personal opinion) Protect our clan leader, make the path of immortality everlasting, Beiyuan Immortal Clan, cultivation of immortality begins in the desert, Han's Immortal Road

The heroine of this book is so disgusting, especially in the later stages. Now I have read more than 1,300 chapters. The heroine does not practice much and relies entirely on the male protagonist to accumulate resources. She does not help the male protagonist to manage the family. She is worried about the male protagonist finding a concubine all day long. She follows the male protagonist every day and hides in the male protagonist's space without being able to help. She also complains about the male protagonist and damages the male protagonist. And he actually acted afraid of the heroine. Such a heroine, not to mention the world of immortality, but also modern society, such a relationship between husband and wife, and the character of the heroine would easily get divorced. I really dislike the heroine

In the future, I would like to thank all the book friends who give tips on this page.

I have always been very nervous, worried that I would not be able to sign the contract. I originally thought I would give it up if I couldn't sign the contract, but now there is news about the signing, and I promise to keep updating. In addition, thank you all book friends for your companionship. Without your collections, recommendations and comments, I would have given up long ago.

Regarding the vote on whether there should be a female protagonist, the majority of book friends support having a female protagonist. It is confirmed that this book has a female protagonist and will not be changed. However, the protagonist will not have a harem, there will only be one female protagonist, and she will not take up too much of the scene.

Brother, you are writing a story about family farming, but after reading so many chapters, it seems that the family is a completely unnecessary existence for the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist can live a more carefree life without the burden of the family. The family relies entirely on the protagonist's chance to develop. These are the failures of family power novels. Don't highlight the protagonist too much and make others dispensable. If you look at some other family novels, it seems that a family is really developing, and the family is the protagonist. Strong backing, making talismans, refining alchemy, refining weapons, setting up formations, planting, cultivating spiritual beasts, etc. These protagonists basically only learn the same thing, and the rest depends on the talents of other families. In some families, the protagonists are not the strongest, but they all train geniuses who specialize in fighting. The most taboo thing about family and power novels is that the protagonist catches everything by himself. He is the first in combat, alchemy, making talismans, and refining weapons. So why do you need the family? Do you think you upgrade too quickly? In novels about family and power, it is necessary to remind them of their benefits, and to write about the feeling that without the family, the protagonist would not be able to develop at all or not develop so well. They complement each other. The protagonist is the vanguard leader, not just a leader. He does everything by himself, but also helps the family in turn. It is like the protagonist is in the rear, letting people collect spiritual planting materials for him, instead of finding them all by himself.

Personally, after watching Family Flow, The Peak of Green Lotus is good-looking. Families develop over thousands of years, and you can't slow down time. They dominate the world in just a few decades. You're kidding me. There are also Korean-style Immortal Roads and Nine-Rank Immortal Roads, all of which are good-looking.

None of the current family cultivation novels are passable. Let's not talk about other things. In this book alone, I really can't see anything related to the family cultivation. It is basically written around the protagonist. The family is basically mentioned in one stroke. I can't tell where the family developed. It's just the protagonist throwing some resources into it. The family becomes stronger when the protagonist comes, and then the protagonist throws in some resources and the family becomes stronger. It feels like the protagonist's personal show, and then talks about the protagonist's various cheats, and then often keeps a low profile and is afraid of death. In the end, he kills the enemy without any danger, and then obtains the enemy's resources to improve himself. Every plot is the same 🤫

My main feeling is why you should be afraid of writing a heroine. You can learn from it, but it is definitely not a reason for you to avoid writing a heroine. If there is a master who has not been scolded, who can write well from the beginning? If you are afraid, you can first read it yourself and learn the writing method in the two-dimensional novel, and then show it to the editor to see if there are any problems. This is the attitude of a person who is determined to write a book, instead of not touching it if I am afraid. In this way, you will make some progress and make a lot of money. What other people are saying in the comment area every day that they can't control it? You can't control it. You don't let the author control it. So what chance do you have to control it? A group of people who talk disgustingly are not rubbish. There is no female protagonist in a novel, and you watch men having sex and fencing all day long. Do you think this is something a person with normal aesthetics can do? If you want to read this kind of novel, it only means that you are hehe. Look at that popular novel that doesn't have a female protagonist.

The previous number refers to the amount of cultivation, in "minutes" as the unit! One, two, three, four and five refers to the number of spiritual roots! Start practicing at the age of 10 by default! Perfection is the amount of cultivation achieved after a failed breakthrough! Under normal circumstances, it cannot be obtained through normal cultivation! Zhi Shou Yuan on the black background is not talented enough to go further! By default, elixirs and other resources are not used, and there is no injury! Only when you have enough spiritual energy and the right technique! Using elixirs will cause bottlenecks in the future! The reasons why casual cultivators have low cultivation level are as follows: 1. Start late! 2. Poor skills! 3. No spiritual pulse! 4. Take medicine randomly! 5. Suffer hidden injuries!

The writing about this family is disgusting. If you have good things, you will give them to the family. Others in the family are building foundations, so they all save money and try their best to find foundation building pills. The protagonist is like that when he is building foundations. Don't tell me that he can't use those resources. Can't they be exchanged for money? This family is written in a disgusting way, like a vampire. It's not as good as the protagonist who upgrades his strength and finally takes care of the family, instead of writing it like this now. It's really disgusting. I spent money to read two of them when I saw it. I can't stand it anymore. It's so disgusting.

It's a pity to throw away a book that is tasteless to eat! Family is not family! Not personal!

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There is no shortage of resources, keep pets for protection

I am really convinced by this cultivation level. There are more than 100 chapters of foundation building and Qi training. There is no need to write that long. Qi training, you said it yourself. You can't wield a sword and you have to cut it. So what's more exciting about this cultivation of immortality article? The author likes to write about chance encounters and small scenes. Those battles are briefly mentioned, and the family members are not written with any characteristics. The death of an individual still feels like a plot killing. In fact, the main purpose of the fairy tales is to have some fun points, and there are still some fun points to write about the family flow.

The only poisonous point is selling dog meat over someone else's head. It is said to be a family story, but it hardly highlights the characteristics of other clan members. It is completely a solo show of the protagonist. It's like a god leading a herd of pigs. Personal opinion, please don't criticize me.

I think it's good in other aspects, but there are two bad points. The first one is that the soul splits to occupy other people's bodies, and can also know some skills or things of others. I always feel that this is a demon cultivator, and the soul is too simple. This kind of plot makes me particularly annoying. The second thing is that the spirit beast bag can hold people. If it can really hold people, it cannot be called a spirit beast bag. That's such an insulting title. Overall, the novel is okay, but there are always some small flaws that cannot stand up to scrutiny.

I can do everything on my own, what else do I need from my family?

I recommend a book that is currently being serialized: Qinghe Immortal Clan. It is well written and has a mortal flavor.

I hope Gouzi can have a sister. I have voted for all 6 months this month. It is a birthday gift for the princess of the Wang family (it is best to be reborn as a divine Yuanying, and the talent will be better)

After reading part of it, I feel that I can accept the unlimited return of family resources, but I can't accept that there is such an awesome space and I still have to take risks to collect resources. The protagonist is not short of money. Can't we use trading or send family members to collect it? It's like having a company that has been growing, but you still have to take risks in drug trafficking. There are so many in your own space. Good thing, it can obviously be exchanged and traded, and there is such an awesome clone. The protagonist can completely hide behind the scenes, so he has to do the job of killing his head Maybe this is to open the golden finger too much, but in order to advance the plot, the protagonist has to be written as a special soldier to take risks Also, it is not good to have no heroine. Do you have no desire to cultivate immortality?

What I wrote above is okay. After signing the contract with the monster in the Nascent Soul stage, I have been busy with water. Today I will practice martial arts, tomorrow I will practice weapons, and the day after tomorrow I will plant vegetables. The writing is like a running account, and the main line is advancing extremely slowly.

The protagonist is sick, and Goldfinger is farming. He studies talismans but does not refine elixirs. He is really talented. Later, he changed it, but it was not thorough. It is easy to make it if he has the spirit stone talisman. At most, he can get some medicine or elixirs to exchange for talismans. Foundation-building elixirs and gold-forming elixirs cause a lot of trouble and the price is high. High-quality ones have a price but no market, and they do not match the talent. This golden finger is not a bug type either.

Can this be considered a family run? All the scenes were for the protagonist alone, and they slipped away.

The front is so-so, the back is a mess.

The growth of ordinary people is too unreasonable. In the Ming Dynasty, the royal family grew from a dozen to several million in more than 200 seconds. In the past few hundred years, your family has grown from 50,000 to several million.