Starting as a Daoist of Mount Lao

It's alright, but comparing poems with others disgusted me. When key supporting characters challenge you, you refuse to participate, showing no interest in poetry, literature, or officialdom, only seeking to cultivate immortality and pursue the Dao. So when it comes to poetry, the main character keeps writing one poem after another, eventually winning against the supporting character.

Since it's called the beginning, it must be an infinite flow story. And the cause-and-effect relationship has already been established. Isn't copying poems cause-and-effect? ​​How many people who leave behind timeless masterpieces are ordinary people? This is even more true in terms of mythological backgrounds.

The protagonist was given four paths to choose from, and he chose the Golden Core Path instead of the Wanderer Path. So why keep focusing on his travels? The cultivation could have been covered in a chapter or two, but instead, a large number of short stories about subduing demons were included.

My brother can write any cultivation novel he wants, he can just make one up. (And some good poems.) Where do these things come from? Most of them are inspired by personal experiences. A rich kid can write poems that require hard work and time. Who does he look down on? It's one thing for ordinary people, but couldn't your master figure that out?

It's a bit outrageous to become sworn brothers and exchange swords after just meeting and not knowing anything about each other's character.

This is a perfectly good cultivation novel, and they had to add such an awkward and pretentious scene. It's a real blunder. Has anyone read to the end? Are there any more scenes like this? If so, I'm deleting the book.

If you dare to write the female lead as the White Snake, I'll immediately drop the book.

There's a reason why the work, which is over 200,000 words long, didn't perform well. When I saw He Caizi forcefully clash with Wang Yan, I realized what was happening, and I was also poisoned by the experience.

If you don't go home, you'll be cuckolded!

Cultivation novels even include plots where characters plagiarize poems and get slapped in the face...