From Mountain Village to Heaven

Isn't the Fire Cloud Cave the place where human sages live?

Well, how can I put it? In classical novels with fairy tale themes, try not to use modern vocabulary in character dialogues, such as, shit, get a hammer, etc. It looks a bit weird.

How to put it this way, the subject matter is very innovative and the background is grand, but it does not have the charm that a classical fairy tale should have. The setting of the protagonist is completely in the style of "Xian Xia Cultivation", which is boring.        ""，""， There are also problems with the setting. For the boss, "one body and two souls" is not a problem at all. Isn't it just that something went wrong when he was reincarnated? No problem. Lingbao and other things are also possible. These are all causal relationships, "fate". The real boss is too petty and "conspiratorial". People don't look down on you at all. One last point, since you want to write "classical fairy tales", you must understand that first there is "Doumu Yuanjun" and then "Golden Spirit Holy Mother", first there is "Taiyi Saves the Suffering Tianzun" and then "Taiyi Zhenren". The latter is more like the "incarnation of Daluo" of the former, and becoming a god is just a calamity full of "incarnations". The author's depiction of Dou Mu is too petty.

Therefore, we should not have the problem of talking to ourselves

The world view is very different, a unique article about cultivating immortals! I enjoyed reading it. At least the protagonist is not a breeder, a brainless hero, has no mother's heart, and is cautious 😄 I like this kind of writing! Highly recommended! ! ! I hope the author will update it soon, otherwise it won't be enough.

I can't say it's not good-looking, but it's too vulgar. It's all the same clichés from Internet literature ten years ago. Either others are doing other people's things, or he is doing other people's things. There is never a moment of leisure.

Why is it that cultivating immortals is still a classical feudal cultivation? The underworld is still a classical public system. Isn't it enough to directly program reincarnation? To cultivate immortals, you should also practice in a university style and study the skills and techniques. Mechanized alchemy and medicine refining, planned planting of herbal medicines to develop large-scale farming methods.

It looked pretty good in the early stage, and the settings were pretty good. I left it to fatten up, but it turned out to be really dirty. It's a pity. I don't know why the results were poor. I think there's nothing wrong with it?

If I can't get enough of it, I'm going to start a new book. How about Starship Troopers😊

Take a look. Old-fashioned fantasy flow. Nothing amazing. But compared to recent novels, it's still on a higher level.

Seeing someone like Da Dao swearing and not being able to refuse, this is extremely poisonous! With this kind of thing, the world feels like a pyramid world, or multiple pyramid forces! The strong directly ask the weak to take the oath of greatness! You can't violate it anyway. If you violate it, you will be killed immediately. If you tighten the terms a little more, you will be killed immediately!

The writing is good, but it just gives people a very strange feeling, but the writing is good. I gave it two monthly passes, but I suggest that the author rewrite it. It would be great if you write the same outline in another way! I am also an author, but I am from an external website. The author has a strong writing style and a plot, but the classic fairy tale is too light... A little talk about filmmakers, if you don't like it, don't criticize it 😁

After a good rest on May Day, I will quickly advance the plot and strive to finish it in June. The update will be very powerful, but the text will be blurry. After all, I don't have that much time to polish it carefully. If you don't mind, you can stop following it. I just want to explain the whole book to my book friends.

This book is really good, set party ecstasy

I became a disciple today, so I'll post a post to celebrate. Also, it seems like monthly tickets add fan points?

Updates are so slow, I almost forgot about them while I waited for them to update.

After daily updates, I will correct typos and inconsistencies on my mobile phone. Therefore, it is recommended that book lovers who subscribe should wake up the next morning and read again to ensure a good reading experience.

I can see it. Why are there so few people?

🤨I was shocked when the recommendation data fell instead of rising.

Compared with the good-looking post-Fengshen Journey to the West novels, there are very few people writing about this, and they should be pretty good.

Come to fill in the hole

{"NickName":"Book Pusher Chiji","UserId":670289}Let's take a look

To be honest, this book is okay and can be read.

More than 300 chapters and 630,000 words? One chapter is 2,000? It's really short and weak.

Can't the author check it after he's finished writing? There are too many typos

It's so good. It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject matter in more than ten years of reading. The writing style is also good. I hope I can continue to read it. I promise not to read pirated copies. I support it with the recommended monthly ticket!