2003: A Fresh Start

You have to throw the protagonist into school. What on earth are you thinking, author? Going to school to show off and get slapped in the face???

Come on, it's not bad. What's there to spray? Don't you think that kind of pure startup company article is too thin? To put it bluntly, those who write books are all nonsense. It would be better to write more about ordinary life.

Eunuch, another book to support eunuchs

I have seen more than 10 pictures, and I wish you will enter the palace as soon as possible. Didn't I say I wouldn't go to school? I went again

Dao Du came in and found the eunuch, speechless.

It reads very dryly. There is nothing wrong with business, it is quite real, but apart from business, it has not been shown at all. The protagonist is just a tool man who makes money and starts a business. He needs to develop other interesting points, that is, to make the plot more interesting. Food, clothing, housing, transportation, friendships, social status, etc., There are many things surrounding the protagonist. For example, this protagonist, after reading dozens of chapters, has made money, but his quality of life has not improved, his food, clothing, housing and transportation have not improved much, and his family status has not changed much. . There is nothing wrong with the plot of going to school, but this plot can be made more interesting. For example, if someone provokes someone, how does the protagonist deal with it, introduce a local social relationship, etc. Internet articles are just about how to be reasonable and interesting, and pretend to be cool and slap in the face. For example, the family situation can lead to the protagonist leading the family to start a business and become rich. The author wrote a little about asking relatives to do the work, but it was not developed at all. The narrative is too straightforward, the relative's business went bad, and then the protagonist came to arrange the delivery. You can also write some exciting things here, such as a relative's business is failing, the family is in crisis, and the family is looking for a solution. At this time, the protagonist goes up to show his strength, attract relatives to join the team, and it can also facilitate his own manpower, which is equivalent to finding a younger brother. These are poorly written plots, but they are enjoyable and will never go out of style if they are well written. There is also the one who gives back kickbacks to the customers connected with the big factory. It is difficult to do business just by writing about it. The dark side is exposed, and the protagonist cleverly takes advantage of the loopholes. You can also add other plots here, such as how to give gifts to their families, spend money, have high standards, and when encountering difficulties, the protagonist is awesome and solves them, deepening the relationship. You can even write that the protagonist induces him to become more corrupt, how to swallow up the company, or expand the combination of interests, dig deeper into the corner, or something like that. In terms of emotions, you can also have some, you can write about school beauties, heroes saving beauties will never go out of style, don't be afraid of routines, just be afraid of not looking good. Anyway, you have been reading this book for a long time. It is too dry. The protagonist is a poor loser who makes a lot of money. He has nothing but starting a business and making money. He is just a tool. So, your novel is too dry.

The introduction is a simple and relaxing novel about being a renter, but later on when you open a factory and it becomes bigger and more complicated, I feel dizzy.

The first chapter is only available for 10 starting coins. My wife looks down on the reader's grandfather. 10 Updates? 20 Updates?

The writing is very good, with popular science, good writing style, and some refreshing points. Hope there will be more updates

After seeing the latest chapter, I ordered it for you. I can only support you so far. Brother, the writing of business experience is very good, better than 90% of urban authors. As a post-80s generation, I feel the same way in many aspects. The relationship scene is too awkward. The heroine who is a freshman in high school is barely a few years older than my daughter. How did you insist on writing about plump and slimmer? Hahaha, I kept reading. I hope your next book will be better and better. Come on.