Traveling Through the Heavens Simply

When does the protagonist turn back into a buffoon and a weakling? Such a protagonist is very uncomfortable. What I want to see is that the protagonist is bullied everywhere. Even if he has special skills, he is manipulated by the original characters and can only take leftovers from the bosses.

The author's writing style does need to be improved. There are too few dialogues and the narrative method needs to be improved. It gives people the feeling of a running composition. Of course, the most important thing is that there are too few dialogues and the characters are not vivid enough. It would be much better to write more dialogues and the behavior, expressions and psychological activities of each character. However, the author has a very good attitude, five stars for attitude and persistence.

Wow, much more diligent than me 🤭

It is written like a primary school student's diary. The protagonist's sense of presence is too low, the writing is too poor, and the plot basically copies the original work. I look forward to improvements in the next one.

What's going on, so many people have read the journal?

Is this book good to read? It feels like a running account, and I feel like I'm watching a narration.

Already seen, come on! ! ! I believe you can do better👍👍👍

Damn it, such powerful martial arts as Tathagata Divine Palm and Tian Can Kou are actually written like this, mmp, it can be said to instantly kill all the martial arts in Jin Yong's martial arts.

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I'm here, brother, happy National Day

The beginning is concise and clear, and the sentences are smooth and natural. It is easy for me to feel involved. I will continue reading. Thank you very much.

Wow, traveling through various martial arts worlds, the setting is great 🌹🌹🌹

I really can't hold on, it's full of holes and loopholes! The pity for Bai Shao is like a running account. You said that the protagonist doesn't know the plot. If you don't know the plot, how do you know that Duan Yu is the protagonist? Professor Duan Yu Yiyang said, "I'm afraid you don't mind the trouble!" Also, Yang Guo brought Guo Xiang into the ancient tomb. At that time, the only way to enter the ancient tomb was through the underground river. Can you explain how he was brought in? There are also fragments of the Nine Yin Scriptures left inscribed on the Double Ninth Festival. It's a good thing you have figured out the general outline in Sanskrit! 666 How else can one level of the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu increase your strength by 20 pounds, and yet it is so plausibly reasonable? Have you forgotten that you are in the world of martial arts? Not the real world! There are many, many more. The number of words is simply poisonous!

It can be seen that the author hates the protagonist because he writes the protagonist as a raceless, wretched man who likes cuckolding.

After reading about 200 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The chronicle-like narration is acceptable, after all, the subject matter is okay, but the protagonist has been through two worlds with a golden finger and can't get hard, which is too much. He repeatedly says that he is afraid of being poor, but the reality is that he has a house, a car, an establishment, and hundreds of thousands of savings, and he actually wants to find a second marriage and a child. The first blind date didn't work out, but you rushed to pay for the doctor's treatment for your ex-boyfriend. Being able to write this plot is a way to screen readers. This book is not suitable for the Internet. Please pay for the physical book yourself.

I suspected that the author had a Minotaur plot, so I read about ten chapters. Good Guy, the first time I guaranteed three hands, but it was only a one-off, so it was acceptable. The second one who is preparing to get married has countless hands.

Every time he travels through time, he starts over again. The protagonist still doesn't know the plot. What's the difference between him and the aborigines? Those opportunities for rise are all dependent on chance. What is this? Destined child? What is the purpose of this ghost setting? There is also no dialogue in the writing. Damn it. It's all a running account. Just record it when you travel back in time? There is no characterization, psychological description, or environmental description at all. Is this a novel? It's like an outline.

It is written completely from the perspective of an onlooker, and the entire running account has the feeling of reading a primary school student's composition.

Anyway, I read more than 20 chapters and complained, but it was meaningless. The protagonist couldn't learn anything, couldn't take things, didn't know the plot, couldn't learn, and it wasn't fun at all. The author just treated the readers as bastards who had never read the novel, just a notepad.

The more I thought about it, the angrier I became, so I complained and had it removed from the shelves.

As a time traveler, the protagonist doesn't know the plot. What the hell is that? Are you pretending to be stupid?

In Fengyun, if the person you slept with will give birth to Duanlang's child in the future, it's very okay and very cuckold. Invincible, really

All of them have been booked, including those who were free of charge before. Come on!

Sometimes it's in first person and sometimes it's in third person. It makes my head hurt to watch it. The first world should be the prequel of Modern Tathagata Palm. The plot is like flowing water and there's no emotion. I'm definitely a newbie.

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Brother, I really admire you. I almost finished four or five six of the first books we started together, but you are still writing this one, awesome🐮🐮🐮🐮

Dear author, when will the image of the protagonist who has always been short and poor be changed? The protagonist has to be cuckolded every time, the protagonist's strength has been declining, and he has no descendants. Will there be improvement before the end?

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I didn't like it a bit at first, but after I got to Fengyun, I really like the style.

I've given you all the monthly recommended tickets, why don't you give me some tips?