The Mastermind Behind the Scenes, Starting Now

This book is really good, the whole IQ plot is online, the story is clear and makes people read it! The only thing that may be regarded as a shortcoming is the younger sister. After all, many people have been fooled by these willful younger sisters and will quit immediately after seeing it, regardless of whether the book is good or bad!

After reading Chapter 13 I was stupid The protagonist told his sister who was in the crime team that the murderer behind the scenes was more anxious than the police ??? The information in the hands of the police was: two women who were related to each other were killed by the murderer by unknown means. The money used by the two women came from the same person, and the case of the two women was a bit strange. No matter how you look at it, the police have not found any progress in finding out who is behind the scenes besides the murderer Then the sister in the crime team immediately started talking about this topic? The sister also opened the God's perspective?

After reading a little bit, I saw that the protagonist seemed to be a gunner. The old man on the subway looked at his phone and slipped away.

There are many common sense issues. First of all, the billionaire who wrote the book has not had as much influence as an Internet celebrity. Secondly, the case in the police station can be known to outsiders. Then there is the protagonist's setting of the birth of a ghost. Is the obsession before life or after death? What do you think is the case for obsessive murderers who don't want to die? They also become ghosts?

The behind-the-scenes story of selling dog meat on a sheep's head. It is obviously an anti-infinite time travel article. It would be fine if one person traveled back through time. What happened to Xia Houwu also traveling through time in "One Man's Martial Arts"? This is not behind the scenes at all. It feels like a summoner, and an uncontrollable summoner.

I have a proposal. Didn't you say that the man behind the scenes is not suitable? , You can try to marginalize the protagonist and just describe it as a witness, recorder, and observer. Also, the protagonist's cheats are too powerful. If you continue like this, you won't be able to control the situation, and it will collapse later. You should write more horror stories and connect them together to form a main line. After all, no matter how big the scene was, I didn't get involved. Bystanders will not have too many emotional points. The real horror is often hidden in the small details and in every aspect of your life. I suggest you watch more horror movies, preferably from the past, such as Zombies and Spellland. Know that terror is silent. I hope it inspires you

Aren't the masterminds behind the scenes less likely to show off? Why is this protagonist so pretentious?

That agent is your employee. How stupid are you to write like this? Author, read it yourself. As an agent, you don't know how rich your boss is? If you find it for 10 million, you can have it professionally customized! ! !

Where is the role of sister reflected?

Is there a main plot and development direction?