A Man in the Pirate World, the King of Style

One Piece Chronicle

The protagonist can make Shanks feel the pressure at first, which means that he is also close to hundreds of millions in strength. There is a difference in strength, but it is not a huge difference. Later, after eating the devil fruit, his strength has made a qualitative leap through continuous training and development, not to mention that he is stronger than Shanks at the beginning. , Is not weaker than him. If you fight a 60 million pirate, you will be seriously injured and exhausted. If it is explained that the strength is not only 60 million, but also has a strength of hundreds of millions, the strength far exceeds the bounty, I can still understand it, but it is not explained. It means that there is no such strength. The author's definition of the protagonist's strength is vague at the beginning. I hope it will be clearer in the future. The author will continue to work hard and write hard.

Introduction to Yan Peacock

The author's writing is quite good, but I stopped reading when I saw the formation of an organization similar to the revolutionary army. If the protagonist wants to be a hero, in fact, such a chaotic world is more in line with the interests of the top people. If you want to be a top person and at the same time want to enlighten your mind, isn't this going against yourself?

Since it is a modeling fruit, why don't you follow the legion style and have missile warships flying all over the sky? Sword, Shield, Hammer, Peacock. When I watched it, I really doubted whether the protagonist was a modern person. It was simply embarrassing for a time traveler. Some people say that the protagonist is not strong enough in the early stage, but the setting is completely dependent on the author, so it is not a problem to be happy at all. It's obviously a fic, but it looks very boring. The writing is obviously pretty good among Pirates, but in the end, you either rely on swords or shields to fight, and it looks really boring.

What the hell is written in the previous chapters, especially the chapters after Roger's execution? A businessman is still afraid of being caught by the navy? Still need a breakout? Are you confused when writing 😅

I haven't watched much yet. The protagonist should have a domineering look. Information about Emperor Kasihai should be there if he is an emperor! 😅😅

According to this rhythm, let's get a nuclear warhead, or Transformers.

The fruit is very fancy and has too many abilities, including swords, guns, shields, and hammers. It's better to just go into the peacock state. Moreover, it also strengthens physical skills, is strong, handsome, and refined. It has a bright spot in everything. Can't it be specialized in one? It's not like a strong physical artist, not like a swordsman, but also seems to be omnipotent. It can do a little bit of everything. It's like a hodgepodge.

Garp has a chicken-feather overlord color, and only the Warring States Period has it in the navy.