The Black Duke of One Piece

The writing is okay and relatively refined, but unfortunately there are few interesting points. Of course, you can also call it a slow-burning article. But the key is to wait slowly until everyone disperses. Unless you, books can mesmerize others at a glance. But as far as the early stage is concerned, it is obvious that there is nothing exciting and nothing attractive. Although it's better in the later stage, you can't attract people in the front, and it's useless no matter how good you are in the later stage. It is impossible for others to read hundreds of thousands of words just for the pleasure of tens of thousands of words in your later period. So, this is the reason why it is not popular. After reading dozens of chapters, I felt a bit boring and didn't want to read the paid chapters. Some comments for the author! I hope the author can learn some experience from the next book. Take advantage of it. It's fun to read a book. Don't put it off vaguely, as it will be useless and won't attract people later. You have to know that you write books firstly for your hobbies and secondly to make money.

I gave up after reading the free chapter. Although there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people, they are so wise! He went to negotiate with Brother Ming with such low strength and looked down on him. He was really drunk. As far as the anime itself is concerned, Brother Ming is the most intelligent and second most powerful person in the original Shichibukai. How can a wine recipe threaten someone of this level to negotiate with you?!!! Wake up!

I've always felt that it was ridiculous to promote revolution in a world with extraordinary powers. Because having strength means having foundation, which will breed ambition. The weak is eaten by the strong, which is the truth. Even if you are lucky enough to succeed, you will never be able to sustain it for long. Human hearts are complex. When people are weak, they long for the existence of peace, but when they are strong, they hope to break the balance of peace. No one likes and is willing to accommodate people who are weaker than themselves. Because it is unfair to the strong.

Is it possible to write characters like the Joker and the Laughing Bat from Watchmen and Batman? There is also "Vendetta". The strength of the protagonist does not need to be exaggerated. The major events can also be based on modern or ancient events in various countries (including the Soviet Union). The same goes for the characters. The description of the battle scenes must be very realistic.

There are not so many overlords, many novels exaggerate

"One Piece: Opening the Black Duke at 55", apart from full blood recovery, I don't know what the main character's fruit is for. A swordsman learns the Dragon Claw, and at first he said it has something to do with holding a sword... Damn it, he always fights with the Dragon Claw in his left hand and the sword in his right hand. What are you doing with these two swords? Are they used for cutting tsunamis? The key is to either open 55 to the opponent or be maimed so that the opponent can recognize you and then talk about business...

Chapters 74 and 75, why didn't Brother Dover Minglang kill the protagonist? In this way, we can get all the benefits, instead of being an agent of the new world. We are not being strict here. Dover Minglang's character will not cooperate with the weak. And there is still a chance to get all the benefits.

After reading too many One Piece fanfics, what I dislike the most is meeting key characters at the beginning, such as Robin, Nami, and Garp. More than 90% of the time, Robin and Nami are adopted at the beginning, either adopted by Garp, or the Luffy brothers. Everyone knows that King Luffy in One Piece has the strongest relationship. If you travel to the past, the protagonist will definitely become the strongest, but is he related to Luffy at the beginning?? Do you think Luffy didn't do enough tricks? Are you going to give Luffy another role as a babysitter for someone called the protagonist?

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