Digitizing My Life

You can watch it. Keep it up, author!

It's a good book and worth reading. Wouldn't it be better to divide it into different levels?

If the world is really digitized, I will give you the fucking best liver in the world, the kind that no one can beat. Studying will make me happy. Whatever I do will make me happy. I am so happy that I am so happy.

The author still has some talent, but the storyline seems immature in some places and the writing is a little weak. But talent can be seen. If I can calm down after writing this book, I will probably be able to make a living in the next book. The writing style gives me a familiar feeling. Authors who feel this way will end up eating the same thing later. For example, go away. You can read his early books and learn from them. The writing and plot are much better than yours. The plot of your book is too weak. To be honest, there is almost no main line or branch line. It is almost daily life. The author probably wrote whatever came to his mind. There is no manuscript, no conception and design, and no plot. It is completely based on a rough outline that either has no or less than 10,000 words.

Congratulations on signing the contract. I earned 250😅

The sense of fulfillment in the family, the development of the relationship between men and women, the subversion of the pillars, ah

For the sake of one's own wealth and life, if one wants to eliminate the root cause, the whole family must be organized, and when necessary, the enemy's relatives and friends should also be sent down, so that the enemy will not be lonely down there.

The protagonist now has no other means of attack except gravity and energy. Compared with other people's mental shock, strengthening, healing, weakness, and space abilities, he is really weak.

Okay, but the protagonist is too straight. You have to accept what you deserve, don't write ambiguous words. It doesn't matter if the emotional scenes are dealt with in one go, at least the protagonist can have a warm place when he is tired. The protagonist keeps running around and we, the readers, are tired of watching it. I believe that the author's writing ability can convey this warmth. Well, come on.

This book is okay, but it shouldn't be so judgmental.

The writing is too plain, whether it is battle or life. Just a few words. Like reading a diary

I just feel like there are too many plots about the teacher's daughter

The setting written by the author is good, and the subject matter is also very good, including superpowers and physical abilities, but maybe the author's writing skills are still a bit poor. Many things cannot be written, the story line is not coherent enough, and there are many details that cannot be dug out. The description of battle scenes is too bland, and the dialogue is too bland. In fact, many abilities of superpowers can be written carefully, but I really can't You can refer to other works when writing, or you can take the devil fruit ability of One Piece in the maternity test. Physical fitness university is similar to martial arts. You can also describe it more. You can also add a setting for physical fitness, which is similar to vitality. You can use vitality to form moves, use cold weapons to superimpose vitality to amplify moves. You can write it. What you wrote is too monotonous, resulting in no sense of reading.

It's pretty cool, but the comment section is a bit deserted.

This kind of opening is too cliche.

Bland, bland, no waves, a bit out of place, but Golden Finger is okay,

Of all the characters, I only like Shu Ye🤭

It's pretty good, it looks comfortable, that's enough

Looks great, all ordered

It's okay. Why are there so few people?

The biggest reason for this book is that there is no detailed level classification. I don't know if a gravity change is one gravity or two times gravity or something, and there is no rough introduction or anything. The writing is okay, but it's not clear what you want to see, so the protagonist's level is too fast, right? Too easy

Some are too urgent and time is running out.

I have read Chapter 25 so far It feels like a running account, and the plot has no ups and downs But the storyline is good I hope the author can improve it

This book cultivates several great realms and how many chapters are planned to be written! Chapter 100: Can I break through a big realm? Now I am particularly bothered by the word water

Come on! But it feels like there are a little few people

In fact, the plot and plug-ins are quite good, but the writing is too tense and lacks some storytelling and excitement. If it can be extended, it will be much better.

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. I feel like the protagonist is being controlled by the system, like a puppet. The system says whatever the system says. The protagonist has no opinion and chooses which one has the highest experience reward.

No, no, this is against the rules?

The setting is good, and it's not like other novels where the protagonist always thinks that other people's abilities are good and steals other people's abilities. The protagonist keeps using gravity to get to the bottom! However, the heroine has no sense of existence and has no personality. She is a Mary Sue-style heroine, too petty, and the humble love heroine is too bland.

The combat power starts to collapse in the mid-term. Beating the boss is easier than killing a chicken. There is no main goal, but everything else is good, just like straw.