I Own a Flower-Fruit Mountain

After reading the first dozen chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I always felt a bit stuck and unhappy. In the first ten chapters, the author focuses on describing and serving as the main plot, the protagonist Liu Shu returns to his hometown to start a business, and the first entrepreneurial partner he recruits is Dahan. On the surface, this thing makes the plot seem interesting, but in fact it is a poisonous point. It makes people feel uncomfortable after reading it, and I can't help but want to abandon the book. There are two aspects to the analysis. Let's talk about the first aspect first: First, the protagonist has knowledge and experience but lacks funds, which means he is just a small entrepreneurial boss. After selling the hundred-year-old Polygonum multiflorum to get the first fund of 40,000 yuan, he immediately bought a high-end mobile phone for Dahan, and then threw the money directly to Dahan and let him be completely responsible for buying chickens. The protagonist spent all the money casually. This is extremely unreasonable! As an experienced small business owner, he knows that making money is not easy, but he has not returned to his hometown for many years. After returning to his hometown, he will have to spend money to buy poultry from the villagers. Shouldn't he buy it himself? In this way, firstly, you can get familiar with the details of the operation, secondly, you can control the funds (you are just a small boss), and thirdly, you can get familiar with the hometown again and win the favor of the villagers (allowing the villagers to make money). Fourth, starting a business is just the beginning. You haven't earned much money yet. What high-end imported brand mobile phones are you going to spend a lot of money on right now? Can't convince Dahan? Tell him that the company has no money to do the following things, will he refuse? Or is the protagonist inexperienced and doesn't know how to express himself? Is the author's handling of this plot telling us that the protagonist is an idiot? The second aspect of the poison: The author said that because Dahan lives in a rural area, he has little contact with the outside environment and because of his naive personality, he spends money like a playboy, mistaking money for money and spending money lavishly. This character design is also a failure! People who have never been exposed to money, such as babies, can misunderstand money as money. The rich second generation who have sufficient sources of money have easy and abundant money and will not take tens of thousands of dollars seriously. Or even those who are in the supply system will not take money seriously if they have no experience in spending money. In the place where Dahan lives, he should have a deep understanding of spending money. For example, in the work, it is said that Dahan pays 20 yuan for breakfast every week. So Dahan is in an environment where he realizes the importance of money. The remaining two points are: Dahan spends money generously because of his silly personality? This must be Dahan's first time handling six to seven thousand yuan (the funds the protagonist asked him to buy chickens for), shouldn't he be frightened? Recalling our own feelings when we first received a large sum of money, the author did not start with the aspect of Da Han taking over a large sum of money for the first time and becoming confused. Instead, he said that he was stupid and a bit shady (judging from what he did, it was almost to the point of being scheming), and directly dealt with it as spending money to buy chickens. In short, if you think about it carefully, the characters and plots of the protagonist and main supporting characters in the first dozen chapters are quite failed.

It is said that a rich man wanted to reward Lao Shi with silver, and Lao Shi said he would reward him with silver to make him sing 😎😁

The author of "Carrying a Fountain with You" has returned, changed his vest and is called "The Lord of Peach Blossom Temple"

I want to see sexy high heels😍😍

The books on the Han and Tang dynasties are fine works, and there is really nothing you can do about them in the previous book, but this book probably won't touch those things, so come on, I've already invested in you, come on, come on, come on!

Tufeng: Which one do you prefer, pond, poking a hole or poking a hole? Shuitang: I prefer exciting things! Tufeng: Poke a hole? Shuitang: Uh, that thing hurts so much, it's more suitable for me to poke it into a hole! Bald wind: emmmmm

There are two monkeys in Huaguo Mountain, one is called Han and the other is Tang. They are collectively called Han and Tang monkeys. They live a life without shame or impatience every day 🤓

Breasts for Han and Tang, ah, it's to give Han and Tang brothers a boost 😎

I don't know if the author can persist. The first order is less than 300. Alas, just wait and see and cherish it.

Saotang, we are here, looking forward to your long, long, long, but unfortunately you are so short, come on, we support you.