Douluo Dalu: My Martial Soul Is Faker

There are no words to describe this novel! ! ! A combination of creativity and toxicity! A mouthful of poison and a mouthful of milk makes readers wander between life and death.

Advantages: The creativity is very good, really good, the protagonist has a good character, maintains his own independence, and does not make Wuhundian look silly and sweet Disadvantages: The author obviously lacks experience in writing, and the details and some plots are too simple. Just a few words 1. Why did Kayn introduce himself so heartfeltly before he entered school? If I were Tang San, I would have suspected something else. 2. Where does the sci-fi style clothing technology that can sell 20 million dollars come from (it can't even compare to selling the Zhu family royal family and adding soul bones)? 3. How was a money empire established under Douluo's extremely feudal sect system? If I were in the Wuhun Palace or a large sect, I would have become a vassal 4. Why is the protagonist obsessed with his adopted sister and unable to extricate himself? (The image of this adopted sister is too dull, she is just stupid and sweet, and she needs a six-year-old child to comfort her when she is assassinated). If the writing is not good enough, I suggest you not to set up your own heroine 5. Wait, wait, wait A little expectation: In fact, I like to watch women's clothing when I see this kind of behind-the-scenes scenes of wearing vests (ಡωಡ) Why can't the gender be changed by using the hero's power? It would be interesting to see the Ominous Blade and the Lord of Shadow Stream directly join forces This novel feels like opening a treasure house with expectations, but the treasure has long been emptied. Although it is still I was able to pick up some bits and pieces, but most of them were disappointed I wrote this book review with good intentions, and I hope the author will write better as he writes (；一_一)

Can anyone give me some side plot suggestions? I feel like if this continues, it will be over before I write 1 million words!

Let me tell you in advance that when the protagonists have too many vests, they will become unreasonable behind the scenes. Weakening Tang San's protagonist group in the early stage will make them stronger in other ways. After the Mainland Classic, the original plot will basically not be followed, because the world view of the Mainland has been changed by the protagonist! As for the protagonist's vest and skills, you can think about which heroes are better to use. Is the heroine Eun-jeong or multiple heroines? The new writer needs some advice! The vests currently prepared include Victor, Sword Demon, and Angel.

Martial spirit: Yan Chu Ma follows the war horse 🐎 First soul skill: Axiba (hammer on the floor to cause dizziness of the enemy) Second soul skill: Have you eaten (powerful palm) Third soul skill: Do you dare to kill my horse (charge for three seconds, during which the defense power increases by 100%, and go crazy for one minute after charging) Fourth soul skill: 1v1 man battle (forcibly kill the enemy) Control, it will only attack itself within two minutes) Fifth Soul Skill: Grass Mud Horse (interfere with the opponent's spirit, causing it to lose part of its sanity and has a taunting function) Sixth Soul Skill: Anger (increases one's own mental power by 200% and 150% overall strength) Martial Spirit True Body: Jin Gong... Can't edit anymore...

Author, this book of yours is really good. Can you write it as long as it doesn't end badly?

Post a comment, I have been watching it for so long Where is the sister in the beginning? Our royal empress seems to be missing

The creativity is quite good, but the plot gives me a conflicting feeling that I can't stand it but still want to watch it. It's very uncomfortable.

I hope there will be Kayn and his lines, such as: Millions of armies will obey my orders, countless worlds will surrender, and my power will reach eternity.

It's really boring to write a fan story and add bosses from other worlds randomly. You are writing a fan story?