The Martial Artist in the Detective World

In the third chapter, I was immediately persuaded to quit. Just write about time travel, and write about indigenous people. I also played an amnesia game, and there was no sense of substitution.

The protagonist is Dumb from Crayon Shin-chan, and it feels mindless. I feel that readers should, probably, probably prefer a human being with a normal IQ as the protagonist, rather than a patient with congenital intellectual disabilities.

The idea is quite interesting. In the world of Conan, Uncle Maori, Miss Shumei, and especially Ran and Kyogoku's true strength values ​​can be integrated into any fighting series. This would be quite interesting. In addition, it is recommended that passionate colleges and universities can be integrated into it. Quasi-master Tamao Serizawa and so on. However, the theme framework must be chosen well, whether it is a daily style (refer to the wizards in the world of Conan) or a fighting style. Hope it can grow up.

After enduring the poison, I read more than 400 photos, and finally I was persuaded to give up, and the pig's foot was identified as a fool.

Speaking of which, you already have the strongest in history, why don't you add Fist Wishes, Blade Ya, and seriously fall in love with me?

Who is the protagonist? Did he travel through time? What is the main line? In the third golden chapter, I don't understand any of the above questions.

What bad thoughts could Xiao Xiaomi have?

Let me talk about my latest feelings after watching it. To be honest, I quite like what I wrote before, and I think it's pretty good. It wasn't until I entered the main plot of Conan that my senses started to feel bad. I have been focusing on the original plot of Conan Water and the plot of Angel Comes to Me, and only a handful of plots have been changed. But at least it's still somewhat manageable, let's just say it's water. After all, I'm still looking forward to the plot after Miyano Shiho's return. After all, the plot written by Nursery School is still very warm, and I quite like it. But just as the greater the hope, the greater the disappointment. Chapter 340, Ai Jiang is back. The plot made my smile gradually disappear, and I was even disappointed. That afternoon, after I read the last few chapters of Chapter 340, I turned off my phone and felt very sad. How is the plot different from the original work? What role does your protagonist play in it? Nothing works! ! I was anxious all afternoon that day, and in the evening I endured the disappointment and decided to take another look, hoping that things would change in the future. However, I am still very disappointed after taking the latest update today. Except for a protagonist with well-developed limbs and a simple mind who forgets his beloved and cannot protect him well, and a lot of people from other worlds who fill in the roles, what is the difference between this fan novel and the original work? What role does the protagonist with pseudo-Saiyan strength play? Apart from fighting a lot with characters from other worlds to look awesome? Then what? No, I didn't see anything. Well, I only have the strength of a pseudo-Super Saiyan 2. The most I did was to remove some of the gangsters' criminal joints. This plot of a donkey that doesn't look like a donkey and a horse that doesn't look like a horse, but also a Saiyan and a Conan fan, is neither as exciting as Dragon Ball nor as thrilling as Conan. I feel that the effect displayed by the protagonist with brute strength is not as thrilling and beautiful as Conan's use of a bunch of technological tools to save Xiaolan in the original Conan novel. The protagonist is not even as good as Conan! Seriously, except for excluding irrelevant characters, what is the difference between it and the original Conan? Of course, it cannot be denied that there are several plot changes that are very good, but most of the cases are just copied from the original works. This is the case with the plot of "Conan", and the same is true with the plot of "Angel". Of course, there are also advantages. In this way, some characters in the original work who were thought to have passed away in the memories are saved: such as Dr. A Li's aunt's first love and Minako. These two are very well written. Dr. Agasa's lover finally gets married, and Teacher Yonehara avoids going astray and becoming a revengeful criminal. Teacher Yonehara is still very good, doing this for a student who has no blood relationship with him. But no matter how good the other characters are, they can't hide my inner disappointment. The plot between Shiho and the protagonist is really messed up. Or you should simply not write about the protagonist who is awesome and coquettish, but his superhuman strength is not as good as Mortal Conan who can protect his wife even without his life. I feel that anyone who has so much brute strength and cannot even protect the one he loves is no different than a waste. So, I am still very disappointed. I hope the author will improve in the future, and I will continue to read it, but I won't have the same expectations as before. The plot of the protagonist's childhood is the best in my opinion, but the rest is, ugh, tasteless and a pity to discard.

Good guy, this row of female leads makes my kidneys hurt when I look at them

Currently about 350 chapters in, there are some issues that I don't want to complain about, but I guess the author won't read them either. First of all, there is a problem with plot integration. The male protagonist's presence and role are too low. In the early stage, he was mixed with dry girls, angels came, and the strongest disciple Kenichi's world view was used as a daily basis. The dragon maid was brought in to try to rationalize the world timeline problem. The result was probably that the male protagonist's physical risks were eliminated. However, no matter how chaotic the world view is, the general direction is always Conan fandom (after all, the title). As a result, the male protagonist is incompetent in various cases, and his role is frighteningly low. I can't even decide on the idea of the male protagonist. He is obviously a force-type character who talks about being a detective every day. But when there is a case, I don't want to get involved and just want to accompany the girl. It's okay to accompany the girl to have some relationship progress. Otherwise, I don't know where to arrange it. Lupine is a linkage character who can't even enter the TV. The protagonist runs back and forth. The other fandom's force-type characters are still functioning even if they don't use mental battles. What kind of Conan fandom can be written when the case is so marginalized? The most annoying thing is the incident of Fusha's painting when she was a child. The author can explain that she is afraid that the plot will be confusing and she will not be able to control it, but you don't have to write it. Why do you want to add it? Just lower the popularity of the new one? It was obvious that he could catch up by finding Yusaku on the spot, but because of Shinichi's ridiculous self-esteem and winning mentality, Dr. Agasa missed his marriage? Afterwards, Shinichi didn't even say a word. Did you create a special time for the male protagonist of Kurohara? The second is the issue of the male protagonist. It can be seen that the author wants to write a two-idiot hot-blooded character who can combine daily comedy and fighting, but there should be a certain degree. Although Naruto and Luffy are impulsive, they have positive interactions with their teammates. Even if they don't listen at the time, they still reflect afterward. What is in this book? From the time he was fooled, he was like a wild horse running wild. He has always thought of his own way since he was a child. In more than three hundred chapters, no one's advice and advice to him was listened to. People should always grow up, right? Relationships always need to be maintained, right? Common sense is indeed established step by step, and it is difficult to reverse it later when it is askew at first, but how do you get together with such a huge gap in the worldview of the people around you? Now it seems that it is completely forced by the author. You can really write the outrageous remarks about asking a seven or eight-year-old child to run ten kilometers! The friend tried to bring the male protagonist's worldview back to normal by presenting facts and reasoning, but the male protagonist just argued, "That's what I did, no problem." A charismatic person never forces everyone around him to integrate his ideas, but rather listens with an open mind, feels the differences, and seeks common ground while reserving differences. Otherwise, you will only become farther and farther away from the people around you. Not to mention that the male protagonist is a master, but it is different. How many masters are around him? Except for Liang Shanbo, everyone around his family is ordinary people. Does he have to isolate himself from his family and friends in terms of world view? Even Liangshan Boli can't accept some of the male protagonist's ideas? What's even more ridiculous is that the Matsumoto case mocked the groom. The groom didn't know that there was something wrong with him asking for help when he was a child, but what did the hero say? Helping Matsumoto Kiyonaga arrest people when he was seven or eight years old? Isn't this pure sarcasm? How many have this ability? This is not preaching, this is ridicule! Really disgusting. Author, you can design a mindless martial artist, but at least you need to be able to interact with people around you, be able to put forward arguments, and be able to accept suggestions. You can understand nothing, you can perform poorly in mental battles, but you also have to be able to ask questions when you don't understand, make changes when you have suggestions, or do your duty as a martial artist and do what you need to do. Now it's hard for readers to be involved in the plot. You can also say that the protagonist is reasonable but unreasonable. The novel is written for people to read. If readers don't like him, what's the point of writing about him?