Desolate Era: The Second Primordial Avatar

I was shocked. There are also fans of Manghuang Ji. I remember that behind Manghuang Ji there are matryoshka dolls. One layer is the strongest and the other is the next. The TV series was also poorly shot.

​Write a long review, the author is really great, the writing of this book is really better than most fan fiction, and the details are also good, if you don't want to subscribe, it won't be too bad. But basically half of the fan fiction is about TJ, so I will put this book on my short book list, and hope more people will read it. First of all, since you are writing a Tomato novel, you must not lose some characteristics. Tomato novels have a very distinctive feature, which is single-mindedness. Yes, the heroine of Tomato novels is famous for having a low sense of presence, but she is also famous for being single-featured. It is recommended to have a single female protagonist here. I really recommend having a single female lead. Tomato novels with multiple female protagonists are very unconventional, not to mention that after so many years of harem novels, many readers are now disgusted with having multiple female protagonists in a harem. Not to mention that this is the starting point. How many books in the starting point now have multiple female protagonists? I heard a book friend advise not to touch the harem, otherwise it will be too late if the book is sealed. Secondly, as you said, the fan fiction cannot be highly overlapped with the original work. After all, if there is a high degree of overlap, it is better to read the original work. In the original work, Ji Ning's biggest feature is the sword. Although the way of sword is the way of killing, the ways of the same level are basically the same. Here I hope that the protagonist can go all the way according to his own strengths, since the second soul is the Golden Crow. Golden Crow and Golden Crow are both used to describe the sun, so the path that is most suitable for the protagonist is actually very obvious, and that is the path of the sun. And this path is much easier to write than time and space. After all, there is a lot of information in this area. Not to mention today, there were many descriptions of the way of the sun in ancient times. The third point is the length of this book. How many words does the author plan to write? Have you ever considered infinite flow and writing other Tomato novels? Generally speaking, it is planning and outline. Don't think about where to write. This will not only lead to a breakdown in combat power, but also make it difficult to write anything later. It is recommended to join the unlimited stream. If you are not able to write in the middle, you can open a small account to write about Devouring, Coiling Dragon, etc. These two novels have a complete world view and are very suitable for writing fan fiction, and there are many fan fictions. Finally, I hope that the results of this book will get better and better, and that I can write a good fan novel for the majority of Tomato book lovers.

The highlight of this book is the clever interweaving of the plot. There is nothing mentioned in the original work that has not been written. This book will present it one by one. There is no harem, no competition for opportunities in the original work, three correct views, and no system.

Manghuangji brainstorming discussion thread, welcome to express your thoughts. I have never thought about what path the protagonist will take after leaving the Three Realms. It is awesome, does not overlap with Ji Ning, and also appears in the original work. I have a few ideas for you to consider the pros and cons. First, follow the flow of mind power, the ultimate supreme power of mind (creation difficulty ★★★★★) Second, follow the body flow, create your own school, and realize the ontology (difficulty ★★★★☆) Third, follow the path of the ultimate flame, there have been similar ones (difficulty ★★★★) Fourth, follow the clone flow, the spark is still there, immortal (difficulty ★★★★) Fifth, follow the time and space, or speed flow (★★★) Sixth, follow the fifth style of the bright moon, the ultimate swordsmanship (★★★) Follow up to be added...

I hate the plot of giving away a woman the most. Chuncao has never met the protagonist's eldest brother, and he hasn't fallen in love at first sight. Why don't you just give it away? You said you will be happy if you send me happiness? Why are you so self-righteous? Isn't it okay to just let things happen when it comes to feelings? If you don't have to worry about it, you can take a good break when you have time The protagonist Ji Ning was just sending his maid home. This part of sending a woman home is the most disgusting Won't you write just let nature take its course?

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It's too naive, you start with the Golden Crow, you have Dao Zu as your backer, and then you wait hundreds of years to come back again. To put it bluntly, you don't have the writing skills to write. Forcibly written together with the protagonist. I am a Taoist ancestor, and your grandfather's grandfather's every day is not childish, what is it?

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After listening to the first four chapters, I was confused. A mortal can have so much nonsense with Taoist ancestors. You've listened to "The Wilderness" eight times, so you haven't learned anything about the step-by-step process. Even if it's a cheat, it doesn't have to be so disgusting. You might as well give the system peace of mind. Really (~_~;)

I just don't think the protagonist needs to worry too much about Ji Ning, just go his own way.