Marvel's Middleman

The first chapter sets the bar too high. He's lived through tens of thousands of worlds! Seriously, can you even write something like that? Don't come up with another loser protagonist with only a few years of experience. Seeing this kind of setup is basically poison.

Never forget our original aspiration and keep our mission firmly in mind, remember what's in the introduction. Don't fall for the stereotype of being looked down upon just for buying a car. The sandals I wore when I bought my car would have prevented me from even getting into the dealership in the novel. In reality, who wears a suit and tie every day?

The author is awesome, truly working out of passion.

I haven't read the novel yet, but after reading the comments, I realized the author replied to almost every post. One thing I've come to understand is that the author writes the novel for themselves, not for readers. There are quite a few complaints in the comments section, and the author addresses each one specifically, seemingly with sound arguments, but actually committing a major taboo in online novel writing.

It's so strange. I don't know if it's because I've been reading for too long or what, but people always say it's messy and doesn't make sense. 12345, This set of numbers is very simple, right? But some people don't understand 23145? Why is that? How many people have overlooked the time specified in the first chapter? How many people don't read the synopsis under the book title?

I read five chapters and I'm still completely confused.

This translated tone... I can't stand it... Oh! My brother! Oh! Drop your weapons! Oh! What are you doing there! Oh! What kind of weird mouth do you have! Oh! Have you been watching too many dubbed movies...?

Your article really feels like it's written without any emotion.

Don't be discouraged. They didn't pay anything, ate free food, and then complained it was too salty or bland. That's really ridiculous. I'll give them 100 points as a reward.

To be honest, I didn't feel anything while reading this book. It was very bland... Like a diary entry... I couldn't connect with it at all.