Thousands of Stars and Motes: Knocking on the Immortal Gate

The writing style is passable and the narrative is smooth, which will not affect the reading experience. However, some environmental rendering and detailed description can also be used to enhance the expression of emotions, so that the article will be more appealing. The progression of the plot is very clear, and there is some storytelling, but some are too bland and completely predictable, which will weaken the appeal to readers. You can try to make the plot more twists and turns and more suspense. It is best not to let readers guess what will happen next, so that readers will have the desire to continue reading. There are obvious deficiencies in character creation. There are no particularly impressive characters. It is recommended that more efforts be made on the characters, more attention should be paid to the characterization of the characters, some plots should be used to highlight the characters' personalities, and some unique stories of the characters should be added. In this way, the image of the characters can be shaped. With outstanding characters, readers will have a deeper impression of the work, and they will not forget it like something produced by an assembly line. In terms of emotional expression, the overall emotional expression of the work is bland, at least I was not touched after watching it. This aspect also needs a lot of work. My personal suggestion is to try to depict the story of the character and enhance the emotional expression through a touching character story. Ideologically speaking, this work does not express much thought. It feels a bit like telling a story for the sake of telling a story. It lacks an ideological core and cannot raise the height of the work. You can try to express your own thoughts about things, people, and objects and integrate them into the work. Your thoughts and opinions will also resonate with readers. Of course, some people will leave because of different opinions. But without thoughts and resonance, it cannot arouse the sincere love of readers and gain loyal supporters. Personally, the first few chapters feel a bit useless. It's okay to delete them and keep them. It's not easy to judge. The setting of a drop of blood transforming into a spirit and traveling through time is still relatively novel, but this book made me a little confused. I can't figure out whether it is a cool novel or not. From the plot point of view, it is still a cool novel. Those stories Plots are common in cool novels, but most works do not deliberately create cool points like cool essays. If you want to write a cool novel, just do a good plot, and take care of other things. At the same time, you must learn to create cool points. If you write a non-pleasant novel, then most of the above points I mentioned need to be done well. (Book reviews are highly subjective and represent only personal opinions. Please consider carefully before making a decision whether to adopt it or not.)

The author's writing style is exquisite, and the storyline is quite interesting, especially the time-travel method. The imagination is really big. I suggest you delete the first two chapters and rewrite them simply, and then apply for a contract. Come on!

This is how I felt after reading a few chapters. The whole crew was a tool of good fortune for the male protagonist, as if they were following a process, which was particularly dramatic. (Including but not limited to the fact that the male protagonist has almost no subjective initiative, the possessed unlucky guy is too calm, the snake is as innocent as a child, and the countless coincidences are too discouraging) However, the setting of being reincarnated into a drop of water and then flying away with the dandelion is quite design-friendly.

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