One Piece: Beautiful Navy

I feel like my writing is pretty good, I'd like to improve it Practice more

It's a pretty good novel, good luck to the author

How should I put it, this book has some objective factors, not that the protagonist is simply omnipotent, but that Luffy is stupid, responsible, and a little brainless. Those who like the main character first should stop watching it.

Cute boy? Not bad, not bad 👍

After seeing Chapter 84, I decided to say a few words. As a marine, it is really ridiculous to chat and laugh with a pirate like Bucky the Clown. I don't know where you have placed your duties and responsibilities as a navy. It was written before that pirates who do evil will be thrown into the Impel Down or killed. Now, when you meet Bucky, you will be fooled by a cake? Inconsistency in character design

I'm super. Please update quickly, brother.

If I don't have a pencil, I can only use a ballpoint pen to deal with it (*/∇＼*) I hope you don't dislike it

Are you writing about the navy? I've already guessed the ending, rebelling, and then directly annihilating the Celestial Dragons. Isn't this the ending of all naval novels?

Will the protagonist get pregnant later? Whose child is it, Blackbeard's or Wang Lufei's?

Is Maginot a pervert? It is a crime to actually fall in love with a child you raised and whose gender is changed.

Doesn't this introduction open up a harem? Ace, Bandit Aunt, Arrita, Luffy, Sabo, Hawkeye, Garp, Sengoku, Qingzhi, Tao🐰, 🦩Consultant, Tina, BigMom, Blackbeard... All kneel down to the Demon King ozzzz!

With all due respect, what the hell is this super cute girl with folded ears and blue hair? I've been looking for ten years and haven't found a suitable one. I'm just asking, doesn't this simple blue hair look good?

When I see this, I just want to say one thing: Momonosuke must die.

Let, how about the Shemale King give him a needle? 🤤

I'm very confused. I read Chapter 20... The relationship between the protagonist and Masno is weird. They were raised since childhood. The dialogue is so strange? Only like you? Orthopedics? Not for an eight-year-old child, right? It over-expresses the protagonist's cuteness to the point of being a bit perverted,

The protagonist was born in Windmill Village and followed Garp, otherwise he might have gone to Happy Street.

I suggest you change your attitude towards pirates. To be honest, I haven't seen the protagonist do anything consistent with his status as a navy in the last few chapters.

After reading it, it's pretty good in the end, but there are some problems with the emotional line. Why does the protagonist like Maginot? As the protagonist's adoptive "mother", is this another form of Oedipus? 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵[fn=1 6]🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵[fn =16]🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵[ fn=16]🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

The author works hard, I hope Brian will be turned into a woman by the ladyboy king later on

Why don't you just kill Blackbeard? You're still playing with Blackbeard (눈_눈)

Have you, the author, read a book called "Everyday Life of Women's Clothing"?

Good guy, it's a bit scary. I didn't watch it for a while and immediately gave me ten updates.

I haven't watched much and I want to ask who the main character's target is? If it was the protagonist's sister, I wouldn't watch it.

So scary😍😍😍

It's quite nice, but it feels like there aren't many people there. . .

Holy shit. . . . This is gone.

The author is great. The Warring States Period confirmed that it has Overlord color and life card. The official said

This stuff is so addictive just after one sip. . . Look back and look again. . Holy shit, that's so shameful!

As a newbie, I'd like to ask, is the protagonist a time traveler or an aborigine?

Awakening domineering power at the age of 8? ? ?