A Prosecutor in the Detective Conan World

After reading Chapter 38, I will record my feelings here. (Personal Thoughts) First of all, this Conan fan book is really one of the few that I like. Here are a few advantages I think: 1. Professionalism. From the description of legal and professional equipment in the book, it can be seen that the author has searched for information very carefully. I really want to praise the author for this. The authors of some books write about professional knowledge at will without verifying it. This shows disrespect for themselves and lack of attention to their works. It is very disgusting to me. Therefore, its professionalism is the first thing that attracts me. 2. Original case (I don't know if it is original, but it may be useful for reference). As a Conan fan, I have read almost all Conan fanfics. The protagonists of many books are people around Conan, and the cases are always written from scratch. I am really tired of it (not all, just most). But this book can combine original cases with cases in Conan without making people feel similar to other books or detached from Conan, which is great. I hope the next episodes can stick to this style. 3. I like the single female protagonist very much Secondly, there must be some shortcomings: 1. The professional knowledge is lengthy. Although the author's serious attitude can be seen from the lines of the article, it is really too serious. The description of the instrument has specific data such as radius, length, width and height. It is really unnecessary to write several laws and regulations on the law. This is of no use to the article. Besides, people will not read it seriously except listening to the book. It is a bit boring. I think this may make some people abandon the book. It is best to use the instrument only for writing purposes. If there are many laws related to the case, write one. Or do not write in such detail and copy the original text directly. Instead, extract the important parts or only list the names of the laws. This should be better. Of course, it may also be because the author has a bad word count, but if you want more water, you can use some other methods, such as dialogues, etc. Of course, it is best not to have a bad word count. 2. In fact, I think the writing style is better than some novice articles, but of course there is room for improvement. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Finally, I would like to say that the advantages and disadvantages I have written for the time being are all personal thoughts. Everyone has different tastes and likes or dislikes. Seek common ground while reserving differences, and there is no need to argue too much.

I hope there will be more female protagonists. Wouldn't it be nice to have a single female protagonist or two female protagonists? Why would you fall in love with the other when you see one? Haiyuan Ai, please don't. I'm tired of aesthetics.

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Very messy! This novel does not evaluate judicial professionalism. However, this novel is particularly colloquial! ! From time to time a Chinese dialect appears, and from time to time it's "what". Quotation marks are often lost, and there are so many psychological descriptions that it is difficult to distinguish whether they are what he said or not. The most important thing is that the storyline is very messy. A plot happened out of nowhere and ended suddenly, and the emotional description of the heroine was also confusing! The male protagonist and the female protagonist only handled a few cases together, and there was no emotional advancement outside the case. Will the female protagonist be jealous? ? A colleague suddenly becomes a passionate lover?

This book can be regarded as "In the Name of the Japanese People", "Japanese People's Prosecutor" and "Japanese Sunshine Court", but it is really not suitable as a Conan fan Once again, it is strongly recommended that the author change the name to "Japanese Prosecutor", so as to better match the readers who like this kind of book. To be honest, this book is just the dog meat of a Conan fan selling judicial and political dramas. Changing a better name will help readers not be misled to find books they like, and the author can also find like-minded readers. As a Conan fan, it is really boring, and it is more suitable to be read as a legal drama novel.

The first one lowers your IQ. It's okay if you say it's gross profit. How rubbish is Conan? He just intuitively said that the protagonist is a suspect. The protagonist really has the aura of the protagonist. Everything can be connected to the protagonist.

I've read Chapter 25 so far, and I feel like it's a good story, but the writing is terrible. It is good to popularize the law, but the author sometimes uses Japanese and sometimes Chinese terms, and adds very Chinese terms, but the Japanese prosecutor is very troublesome. If only the protagonist uses such nationalized terms, it can be attributed to the influence of the previous life, but the entire official system uses such terms. It is completely unimaginable that the Japanese official speaks official slang and the people shut up. It is too ridiculous. (Regarding the integrated use of laws in several countries, here I recommend "Covering Hands" written by Xia Xia) In terms of writing, I am a new author after all, so I can practice these. But there are many typos, so many that they affect reading. There are also problems with punctuation. There are too many exclamation marks, often without [,. ] To break up sentences, and characters often forget to use the [""] sign when speaking. Some plots may have progressed too quickly in the author's mind, forgetting that they were not laid out in the text, and wrote them directly in the text. For example, when it comes to the female protagonist, in the author's mind, she is determined to be the female protagonist. However, in the text, the female protagonist and the male protagonist have not yet had a relationship. They have only met a few times and only been together for a few days. They are just ordinary colleagues, but some of their behaviors are too intimate.

The heroine Kujo is better. Personally, I feel free to occasionally intersperse Conan plots, otherwise there would be no need to include Conan in the novel.

After reading nearly a hundred chapters, if you want to read Conan fan fiction, don't read it. This book can be said to be selling dog meat over others. Conan's proportion is very small. I strongly recommend that the author change the name to "Japanese Prosecutor". For Conan's plot, there are a lot of semi-original and original plots, and a lot of popular science explanations. Personally, I feel that it is quite boring and boring. It is quite serious. It is quite different from ordinary Conan fan online novels. It depends on personal preference. Some people should like it, but if it's for the Conan elements, you can leave Finally, the protagonist is a great person who works hard for fairness and justice in Japan, for the Japanese judicial system, and for the prosperity of Japan. He works hard and cooperates friendly with the US intelligence agencies, and is out of vulgar taste. I believe many people will like it.

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