The Wind of Fighting Rises from the Green Mountains

This book is really fascinating. When there should be a few more words, there aren't too many. When there shouldn't be nonsense, you just keep talking nonsense. How long has it been since the retreat time passed without writing a single word? Writing a few more words will kill you, right?

I think this plot is very good. Much better looking than other fics. The main reason is that the IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters are all online. The plot development is also very reasonable. Feeling good about myself. If you see this message, I recommend you take a look.

I really don't understand the wood attribute. The author himself thinks it's useless and scumbag, so why not set it up? I don't understand why it's deliberately troubling. . There is also a fire that overcomes wood. . Do you think that if you are against Xiao Yan, you will probably be beaten to death?

There are too few updates every day, please turn pirated copies into genuine ones, author, come on!

I really like this kind of fan fiction that is somewhat realistic, the kind of system fiction that cheats randomly. I don't know why these protagonists can accept the power given by others with peace of mind, without the worry of being a puppet.

Fighting qi of this nature is at a disadvantage when encountering Xiao Yan. Becoming a Dou Emperor requires source qi. Only the imperial elixirs from the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor's Cave and the inheritance of the ancient emperor can be used. In other words, if you don't practice Fen Jue and obtain the strange fire, don't even think about becoming a Dou Emperor. Those ancient races, no matter how many techniques and resources they had, could only stop here.

It's really poisonous to write about my son, and I have written so many plots, as well as Luo Li. When I first entered the world, there were signs of recruiting Luo Li, but now I have given it away directly. The author should start a new book. I don't know if this plot will be criticized to death. I am seeking death!

The plot of Fighting to Break the World is coming to an end recently. The author wants to know what everyone thinks. If I continue to write, I will either start with force or directly take on the big master. What are your opinions?

It looked pretty good from the beginning, but suddenly when I got to the Miter section, it felt like it was written by someone else. I suddenly lost my mind. I just saw this section and it felt a bit poisonous. It left all sorts of clues, without going into details at all, and there were all kinds of bloat. A talented Dou Shi is even worse than a Dou Emperor. Then when the protagonist reaches Dou Emperor, wouldn't he be able to beat Dou Emperor?

2 Things I don't like: First, it has relationships with too many women. Some stallions, if they have richer emotional lines, would be acceptable, but currently it looks like it would be the same if it were a woman. The second is to write Xiao Yan to death for Xun'er. I suggest that the first heroine of the original work should not be a good one. There is nothing wrong with stealing someone else's opportunity. Whoever gets it first will get it. But I hope to leave an acceptable ending for the original couple. Even if her achievements are not as high as before, that's fine! Xiao Yan's character and temperament are actually pretty good overall.

I'm testing the waters today, and there will be another chapter after 2pm. I hope you will support me more and vote more for recommendations. New book data is crucial.

This book is now close to two million words, and the plot is coming to an end. The next one is still a fanfic. The author has considered the two books Zhetian and Douluo, which have some ideas. You can discuss them.

Dou Po and Dou Luo are my enlightenment novels. Anyway, I am bored now waiting for the update. Let's chat together. What rank do you think Dou Po's Dou Di is equal to Douluo's, based on the description of Dou Luo 1 or 2. I haven't read the funny 345 that follows and I don't want to read it. Have a peaceful discussion.

This book has collapsed since the appearance of the "son". Moreover, the dialogue between the two father and son made me feel embarrassed and painful. Wouldn't it be better for the son to just let him go free? In the end, I feel that the "son" is the protagonist of this book, and Yan Qingshan is just a foil. The blood and passion in the front are no longer there, and the back (after the son appears) is all embarrassment.

If Luo Li doesn't accept it, don't give it away. It's better to just treat it coldly and not show up than to give it away, right? I really don't understand what the author means when he says he has no obsession with Luo Li. You wrote it for readers! Moreover, the theme of your book is the harem, and now you suddenly feel tired. You have accepted a lot of supporting roles, but now you have given away the heroine that everyone likes. How can you accept this? -_-||

Little Doctor Fairy

Comic version

Although I'm not against a harem, but I'm flirting with a girl, and even though I don't have any feelings for her, I'm still sharing the newly obtained earth-centred breasts? Never seen a woman? Seriously, this protagonist's character as a woman is really disgusting

Yunyun

The protagonist's life experience Xiao Yan said; My name is Xiao Yan, and I am a person who levels up every day. Lin Dong said; My name is Lin Dong, and I am a person who levels up every day. Muchen said that my name is Muchen, and I am a person who levels up every day. Xiao Yan said; I practice every day, and my goal is to become a Dou Emperor. Lin Dong said; I practice every day, and my goal is to advance to the ancestral realm. What is Mu Chen? I practice every day, and my goal is, uh, Tudou didn't tell me. Xiao Yan said; There is a Yao Lao in my ring who knows everything and is better than the guide. Lin Dong said: There is a Diao Lord in my stone talisman, who knows everything and is better than the guide. Muchen said; There is a Nine Nether Bird in my black paper, it knows everything, and it is better than the guide. Xiao Yan said: In my world, there is something called strange fire, which is as powerful as artifact-level out-of-print equipment. Lin Dong said; In my world, there is something called an ancestral talisman, which is as powerful as artifact-level out-of-print equipment. Mu Chen said; In my world, there is something called the Supreme Body Technique, which is as powerful as artifact-level out-of-print equipment. Xiao Yan said; I come from the Xiao family in Wutan City, and I am a young master. Lin Dong said; I come from the Lin family in Qingyang Town, and I am a young master. Muchen said; I come from Muyu in the Northern Spirit Realm, and I am a young master. Xiao Yan said; I like a girl, her name is Gu Xun'er, her family is powerful and won't let me be with her. Lin Dong said; I like a girl, her name is Ling Qingzhu, but her family is powerful and won't let me be with her. Muchen said, "I like a girl, her name is Luo Yi, but her family is powerful and won't let me be with her." Xiao Yan said; When I was young, I didn't have any lofty ambitions. My only goal was to defeat Nalan Yanran. Lin Dong said; When I was young, I didn't have any lofty ambitions. My only goal was to kill Lin Langtian. Muchen said; When I was young, I didn't have any lofty ambitions. My only goal was to defeat Ji Xuan. Xiao Yan said; To be honest, the reason why I have achieved what I have today is entirely due to chance. I have taken countless high-end pills and encountered ancient inheritance. Lin Dong said; To be honest, the reason why I have achieved what I have today is entirely due to chance. I have eaten countless natural materials and treasures and encountered ancient inheritance. Muchen said; To be honest, the reason why I have achieved what I have today is entirely due to chance. I have eaten countless medicinal herbs and sacred herbs and encountered ancient inheritance. Xiao Yan said; I have a hobby, which is to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. I remember that when I was fighting against the emperor, a lot of Douzong fell into my hands. Lin Dong said; I have a hobby, which is to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. I remember that when I was in the realm of life and death, a lot of people in the realm of death fell into my hands. Muchen said that I have a hobby, which is to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. I think back when I was in the Heaven Transformation Realm, a lot of Tongtian Realm fell into my hands. Xiao Yan said; I have special skills, I can make elixirs. Lin Dong said; I have special skills, I can draw symbols. Muchen said; I have special skills and I can set up formations. Xiao Yan said; I have two wives. Lin Dong said; I also have two wives. Muchen said; I currently only have one wife, but I believe I will have a second one. Xiao Yan said; My weapon is a ruler, it is called Xuan Zhong Ruler. Lin Dong said; I have many weapons, and they are collectively called the nine sacred objects. Muchen said that my weapons have not appeared yet, and I am using some captured ones now. Please give me weapons. Xiao Yan said; I finally became the Fighting Emperor, defeated the Huntian Emperor, and regained the peace of the mainland. Lin Dong said; I finally achieved the ancestral realm, defeated the strange demon emperor, and saved thousands of creatures in the world. Muchen said; I don't have as cool deeds as they do, but I'm still young, and I believe I will be more cool than them in the future. Xiao Yan said; Later, I joined Canaan College, participated in the student competition, and became famous in one battle. Lin Dong said that later I joined the Daozong, participated in the palace examination, and became famous in one battle. Muchen said; Later I joined Beicang Spiritual Academy, participated in the hunting competition, and became famous in one battle. Xiao Yan said; I have a special NB ultimate move called Buddha's Furious Fire Lotus. Lin Dong said; I have a special NB ultimate move called Qinglong Transformation Technique . Muchen said; I have a special NB ultimate move called the Nine-Level Pagoda Tower. Xiao Yan said; If there is any similarity. Lin Dong said; It was purely a coincidence. Muchen said: I have no idea.

I originally wanted to watch it, but I lost interest when I saw that there was a son. What kind of son would an immortal person want? 🙂I don't know why the author likes to write about sons so early. Anyway, I think it is a poisonous point for the protagonist of Eternal Life, and it has no use except to water the plot.

I saw some comments saying that Xiao Yan broke through Dou Sheng too quickly. I think Xiao Yan breaks through the Dou Saint. There is an opportunity in Xiao Xuantian's Tomb. In the blood pool left by Xiao Xuan's death, there is the blood of Xiao Clan's Dou Emperor thousands of years ago. Xiao Yan's talent is not bad, so why can't he break through the Dou Sage? Besides, compared to the original work, he broke through the one-star Dou Sage several years earlier. The protagonist has already refined the Pure Lotus Demon Fire to become a seven-star Dou Sage. The protagonist's subsequent breakthrough into Dou Emperor will definitely be even more powerful than Xiao Yan's achievement as Dou Emperor. Moreover, the protagonist has taken the principle of not wasting his obscene development to the extreme. If he breaks through the Dou Emperor, he is not as good as Xiao Yan. That means God can't stand it anymore! The above is my personal understanding after reading the novel

During this time, I read book reviews that mentioned that the protagonist plundered a lot of Xiao Yan's resources, but Xiao Yan was still promoted to Dou Zun 'easily'. This involves a misunderstanding, and that is the issue of timelines. The author did not deliberately indicate the time when writing, but only used a relatively vague message about the war between Xingyun Pavilion and Soul Palace, which led to the misunderstanding that Xiao Yan was promoted to Dou Zun shortly after the Dan Meeting. But in fact, looking at the subsequent plot, it is that the protagonist and Cao Ying had a trip to the Hua Zong not long after the conversation. In the original work, the Hua Zong plot was followed a few months ago by the coming-of-age ceremony of the ancient people. However, there was a gap of several years between the coming-of-age ceremony of the ancient people and the Danhui in the original work. In the original work, it took Xiao Yan at least more than eight months to absorb the three thousand flames. Including going to the Dead Souls Mountains to rescue Yao Lao, it took more than a year, and it took more than half a year for him to return to Xingyun Pavilion and fall into coma. This period adds up to two or three years. This paragraph can be referred to the original work of Dou Po (Chapter 1,207 Time Flies). There is a paragraph in which Medusa recalls that Xiao Yan left for five or six years and left the Jia Ma Empire to attend the Alchemy Conference in Zhongzhou. The plot is relatively compact and lasts for more than a year at most. Therefore, in the original work, Xiao Yan was promoted to Dou Zun about three years after the Dan Meeting. In the original book, after Xiao Yan was promoted to Dou Zun, he also went to the ancient ruins of the Beast Realm, the Starfall Pavilion was besieged by the Soul Palace leaders, and the war started after Yao Lao was resurrected. It probably took four or five years in total. Xiao Yan has the full support of Xingyun Pavilion, so the protagonist still has some luck. There is also the ancient clan Lei Clan who secretly invested and was promoted from Douzong to Douzun in four or five years. This is not too much! The current plot direction, Xiao Yan has only just been promoted to Dou Zun, which is a lot slower than the original work, and the strange fire is also much less. Why would anyone come up with the plot of one-click Dou Zun? Moreover, this plot development was designed to ensure the rationality of the protagonist's promotion. The nine-turn refinement after the Nine-Star Dou Zun requires a lot of time and energy. This period of time is also the dormant period for the protagonist.

Nmd, he persuaded me to quit at the beginning. Not to mention that the Mu family, a small imperial capital, didn't even have a fighting emperor. How could he have the background to acquire earth-level exercises and fighting skills? Depending on the situation, there are several movies. If you say it's the royal family or the Yunlan Sect, it's still possible. What does your Mu family mean? It can also be traded, and each copy only costs 1 million gold coins. Xiao Yan's second pattern Qing Ling Dan was auctioned for 1.5 Million. If this fighting skill is auctioned, it will only be higher, and it was later said that if you buy it together, you can get a discount of 1 million gold coins. Is Mittel just licking it like this? I don't want it if I don't want it for one million dollars. It's so disgusting to write.

1. The power cultivated by evil tribes outside the territory is called demonic energy. 2. What is revealed in the finale of Yuan Zun: The evil race outside the territory = the holy race, and the evil god is the son of the holy god. 3. There is no difference between the power cultivated by the saints and the life in Tianyuan Realm. They are both "original Qi" In summary, it is understood that these people in Tianyuan Realm are originally demons who cultivate demonic Qi! 🤫 What do you think?

What a mindless plot, low-level fighting skills worth 1 million. Moreover, even the low-ranking Mu family in the Jiama Empire has several collections of them. This is a popular earth-level fighting skill. The protagonist 400 buys two local-level fighting skills and three sets of Xuan-level advanced supporting skills from the Miter family. What a no brainer. Low-level original works are at least something that only Dou Zun possesses. Heaven-level ones can only be encountered but not sought. Only ordinary Dou Sages have that background. Why do you, the Jiama Empire, not belong to the Liumu family, have such a background? Miter is even more awesome and can collect so many skills in a short time? In addition to the powerful ones who have acquired other heaven-level fighting skills, the ordinary disciples of the ancient clan's signature fighting skill, Emperor Seal Jue, are also at the upper level of the earth level. They are so awesome that the Mu family can compete with the big forces in Zhongzhou. They are really poisonous. Doesn't it mean that the collection of fighting skills of the founder of Dou Zun from the Yunlan Sect has directly reached a higher level? ? ? Mindless retreat is really poisonous to death.

Later, I also accepted Xiao Xun'er. She was so vicious and felt like a rag collector.

Brothers, please vote for the extra chapter Brothers, recently many readers have reported that they are unhappy, but if the author changes it again, it will not only be a heavy workload, but also prone to logical problems. And when the author was thinking about it, it was not good to have the same style of painting throughout the book. And to be honest, if Luo Li had been included in the book at that time, it would have been impossible to continue writing. If we want to write a plot about the acquisition of Luo Li, then a large part of the protagonist's son will have to be cut off, because it is necessary to show that the protagonist has a son and also write about Luo Li and the protagonist. Such a plot will be very awkward, and it may be unfinished by then. However, if you rewrite a side story later, this problem will not arise. Now I suddenly have an idea, that is, after the main story is completed, you can write a side story similar to parallel time and space with different choices. For example, "Yan Qingchen: The World is Full of Little Moms", it is probably a continuation of the previous harem routine, starting from the Spiritual Road Volume. The protagonist's eldest son has experienced after leaving the family, and often encounters various plots with little mothers, such as Luo Li, Lingxi and so on. Of course, there is another type of side volume, which is a normal side volume that continues the main line. It follows the main line setting and writes about daily life and the like. I feel like this is quite exciting. Let's vote on which kind of extra story will be released.

In the early stage, if the clone acquires a female partner, all the stallions will be accepted, and in the later period, the missing female partner will be given to other protagonists. The opportunity was taken away by the protagonist, but the cultivation level of other protagonists still increased rapidly, poisonous poisonous

I have read this book several times. It is considered a rare masterpiece among Dou Po fanfics. The only two small drawbacks are that I bought the earth level skills at the beginning. In a small place like the Jiama Empire, the basic Xuan level advanced skills are as good as the sky. If you have the earth level skills, you will most likely keep them. Use it, even if you sell the protagonist, there is a high probability that he cannot afford it. The second poisonous point is to directly reveal the secrets of the Soul Palace and the eight ancient clans to Yao Lao. How does the protagonist, a small character in Qingshan Town, know the secrets of the imperial clan? This is what you can know 🙂