Inner Demon Seed

I have read ten chapters so far and the writing is very good, but I suggest changing the beginning. At first, I thought the magic value was the protagonist's golden finger, but it turned out that it was just the protagonist's own lustful system. In fact, it is just the ability to cultivate, and everyone has it. It's okay for the protagonist to write the system by himself, but you have to introduce the cheat. You can just mention it in one stroke. Suddenly write a cheat: Gourd? If there is no introduction, how does the protagonist know that the gourd is a golden finger? Without any introduction, I gritted my teeth and activated the gold finger directly. There was no sense of substitution at all and it was inexplicable. I was confused when I saw it. I even thought that everyone else had one of this thing, but it turned out to be a gold finger. I was dumbfounded. A gold finger suddenly appeared. It was not patched at the back and it was very strange. I even wondered if I had read less than one chapter.

The front part is indeed very creative and looks interesting, but after seeing more than 120 chapters of new worlds and the emergence of the divine realm, I no longer have the motivation to continue reading. After all, it is too limited to the immediate view. It focuses on the exploration of the dungeon but does not clearly advance the plot of the main world. The world view does not seem to change with the advancement of the plot. It's grand, but the further you look back, the smaller it feels. After 120 chapters, I still can't appreciate the grandeur of the world the protagonist lives in. I feel like I'm abandoning the basics and chasing the last. Perhaps it was the lack of this feeling of a promising future that made me finally give up reading later, but I am still very grateful to the author for letting me see new ideas and settings. Thank you, we are destined to meet again🌹

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Hello, author, I have read the latest chapter and saw that Zhang Aniu and the three women are together. They were not together when I watched Yitian Sword of the Dragon. This has always been a regret in my heart, especially when I saw Zhang Aniu being kidnapped by morality. Although I am a fan, I hope that Zhang Aniu and the three women will be treated well in the author's writing. The characters in the writing are also flesh and blood and have feelings. I hope the author will give it a try!

Brothers, give me a thumbs up, I want to apply for a disciplinary assistant, but my contribution is not enough, thank you 😂

I finally understand why book friends hate Yang Zhenzhen This character was okay when he first came out, very normal Later, it was simply reduced to a tool for pornography The key is to do pornography, just do it, learn from Da Feng next door, how natural it is, ugh Now every time Yang Zhenzhen appears, I feel like I got a bite of shit while eating cake, it's so disgusting

Hello everyone, I am an ordinary time traveler, and my identity in this world is a righteous monk. I have a very special golden finger. It is a gourd that can collect people's positive emotions. I watched it and made some virtual games to collect people's emotions. During an adventure in a secret realm, I got separated from my fellow sect members, and I also met a demon sect member who was on par with me, named Ke Xiaoliang, who seemed to be lost as well. But we didn't know each other before fighting, and we became good friends. I even shot a thousand-year-old blood sparrow and cooked it for barbecue, which was very delicious, and he gave me a pot of sweet wine, which was very delicious. But it was time, I got up to look for my fellow disciples, and said goodbye to Ke Xiaoliang next time. But I don't know why, the more I walk, the more powerless I feel, can you say? Ke Xiaoliang wants to kill me? Before I could think about this question, my body exploded. Ke Xiaoliang: I overestimate him (Just for fun)

The author's latest book is The Eunuch. I said it wasn't good a few months ago. When I read it today, sure enough, the author's reviews were all positive. I was very surprised. It turned out that I was banned, and the co-authors who said it was not good were all banned. How cruel. Is it interesting? It's really breathable. Hypocrisy is not well written and no one can call it out.

It's well written, very like the mastermind behind the scenes, and very cautious. But when they met Yang Zhenzhen and his wife, they lost their IQ. It's not that he's not sexy, it's that he violated his own code of conduct for a woman. Specifically, according to the author's description, the protagonist is originally a person who behaves for the sake of profit. After meeting a woman, he does not choose the behavior that maximizes profits, but relies on his lower body to choose what to do next. When I meet a woman, her personality and behavior are split, which makes me stupid. Skip the ones related to women, they are all well written.

I'm curious, can you help answer these questions? ①The protagonist has been staying in one place, which is understandable in the Demon Sect, but he can obviously travel around the world, but he has been opening a shop selling pastries? ②Why does the protagonist have a confrontation with a sect? Are there any benefits to attacking this sect in Cuiyun Mountain? ③Why did the character design of the boss behind the scenes in the small world collapse like this at the beginning? Did you meet the so-called "destined daughter"? ④ It is obvious that one can rely on one copy world after another and all the practitioners in the world to help deduce the path of cultivation, but why did he become Long Aotian? ⑤ Obviously his cultivation is not strong, but the protagonist actually fights the enemy with real swords and guns? ⑥Who gave the protagonist the confidence to reveal all his trump cards when he only knew a little information? curious

To be honest, this book has good ideas, but I still gave up after reading more than a hundred chapters First, this author always makes men change into women. The problem with people who change from women to men is that whether they are male to female or female to male, they are always described in the direction of women. ? ? Two, you, the mastermind behind the scenes, are you still in love with Silly Baitian? What are you doing? This is my first time falling in love in a behind-the-scenes article. The boss behind the scenes fell in love with Silly Baitian unexpectedly? ? How about putting aside writing idol dramas? Open a pastry shop after escaping from the Demon Cult? And happened to meet Sha Baitian? What kind of idol drama? Has the author been brainwashed by your idol? You only know how to fall in love, right? Third, the gourd space is not fully utilized. It is right to use this to cut leeks, but the plot is very stretched. Logically, we should give them a series of plots and then design boss fights, such as the Phoenix Base Defense Battle, the Battle to Retake Washington, and the Ghost Rider Sublimation Battle. Don't let them stop, because it is not interesting for me to watch, and it leaves them no time to understand the world and then use your plot to peel away the fog. Use strong visual effects to rush to receive a large number of goods. The magic element, especially the giant of light, was too hasty when it came out. Matthew, who was supposed to be the mid-term boss, lost like a dog. He should have been pulled a little to let Matthew embrace hell and become a fallen angel, and then lead to the next section of hell demons, so that ordinary monsters can be upgraded reasonably. It is worth spending some magic energy to get more, and in the gourd world, you can completely isolate a private area for experiments, practice various techniques on a body with a demon seed, and even directly perform surgery on the body to understand the demon seed.

The author described the protagonist's master as too powerful, which led to the feeling that he was a bit anti-customer. Although he quickly pulled back from the cliff and wrote it to death, it seemed anticlimactic. Such an awesome character died like a loser.

I have to say that the author's writing is strong and the plot is full of twists and turns, which is quite attractive. This makes the early part of the worldview much more interesting, and also sets the tone of the book. The plot, interesting characters, writing style and other elements of this book are all excellent, making it a rare masterpiece. The writing, plot, plot, character writing, etc. Of this book are all excellent. It has a strong sense of logic, a strong sense of rhythm, a strong sense of substitution, and a strong sense of presence. The content is refreshing, the structure is clear, the story is smooth, the details are well received, and it is catchy to read. This book is really good. Thank you for saving it. Brothers, hurry up and read it. Don't miss it.

I think the author's book is pretty good, why do I feel like it has been criticized so much in book circles. This book should be quite suitable for people who have read a lot of online articles. It uses a unique world view to describe the relative world of advanced and backward, and also uses a transitional energy system to distinguish between mortals and gods. It is quite acceptable. Although some of the female aspects are not very good, and driving blindly is not very refreshing at all. But overall it's still very good. I particularly like the world view of this book. In other words, the world view of the previous books is very interesting, just follow the author. There are too few good books that cover everything from a starting point, but the limitations are getting bigger and bigger, alas. It's already pretty good here.

I don't like Yang Zhenzhen, I really don't like it, so I gave up.

Friends, don't hesitate, it's quite exciting!

Hey, I didn't expect that the book I added to the bookshelf and saved to read would actually be finished. Now that I'm reading it again, I'm still disgusted by Yang Zhenzhen. I don't understand why the author wants to create such an image of Silly Baitian. Silly Baitian can be said to be one of the most difficult images to create. Let me make an analogy. In the past, The Zixia Fairy played by Weijian Zhang as Sun Wukong is silly and sweet. She is so cute that few people hate her. There are many workplace dramas nowadays, whether they are costumes or costumes. Anyone who often watches movies and TV shows will know how disgusting the silly and sweet the current heroine is. It is obvious that Yang Zhenzhen is like this.

The book is a good book, but the author xp and I don't get along. Every time he writes about a big disaster, I just watch it with cold eyes.

The Taoist heart sows the devil, desperate temptation, the devil's heart sows the Tao, romantic and happy

I never understood the meaning of the heroine's existence

To be honest, I have never been able to resist books written on scrap paper. The interlocking ideas are invincible! Yizhuang Yicai. Deep and sincere! I can't stop! It's so well written!!! (Forward this article. Each article is worth five cents. Remember to delete the words in brackets)

If a wicked person is a man, it is considered evil, but if a wicked person is a woman, it is not considered evil. Men will be punished for their evil deeds, and women will be punished for their evil deeds. If a man does evil, he deserves to die, but if a woman does evil, it is not evil. Whoever is spared by the brilliant heaven will be punished in the end. When times have passed and things have changed, I will look at you again and spread rumors and false accusations to possess you.

Just short, the waste paper is less than nine centimeters short_(-ω-`_)⌒)_ Punch in

Why do the people of the Ten Demon Sect think that entering a lower-level world than their own is an opportunity, and the technology is only learned by the protagonist's master? I asked, and there was nothing wrong with it 😰😰

Song Qingwen is more worthy of being the protagonist than the protagonist

Why is this really good book so bleak?

Operators, now that the funds have arrived, we can start doing things.

The biggest bug was that the first wasteland world obviously didn't help them at all, so why did they think it was a chance?

New fan registration, come in and take a look, this is the boss

Husband, I can.